Well, back to this. Sure, it may break the site's rules against thread necros, but it's better than making a new thread. Now, let's look at a couple new reviews I recieved. This time, it's for my third story: The Many Fetishes of Gwen.
First off, I got this review from Sir Pootis:
A buddy of mine once told me that it's difficult to decide between length and brevity. Sometimes, you gotta make things short in order to make a point.
Then, here's a review to the same story from HalfBane:
Well, there are 26 Total Drama females, yet only three of them (Heather, Lindsay, and Gwen) have stories focused on them. Since many people like to use Gwen for their fetishes, I felt she was the perfect character for this story. I'm not sure if you read Total Drama Universal Restraints Inn or if you count the stuff in that story as "backstories" though.