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AngelStarlight

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  1. Speaking of spoiling readers, your stories are almost too polished (past misuses of "passed" aside ^_-) - I read anything else lately and I'm all "the story is good, but look at these continuity issues...and these typos!" Sigh. Why did I have to be given the editing bug over the creating bug?

    That being said, CH. 1: "Quatre turned to face him, pausing briefly as he ascended the steps of the latter(ladder?:-) )leading to the jet."

    Yay writing!

  2. I so totally hope I didn't offend or upset you. Oh, btw... I'm working on the next chapter to Winner Winner Quatre Dinner. ^_^ Should be up in a day or two. LOL

    1) the vid phone only showing so much - he was sitting at it, so presumably Duo was bust-level with the screen prior to standing, yes? Hence the crotch shot. ^_^

    2) Offended? *is confused*

    3) YAY! *Glomp* My offer of DDD-burger joint(with awesome drinks they call elixirs I might add) still stands if ever you wind up in Cincy :-)

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