Here is where I will be posting review replies for the following fic: http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600096134
Chapter 1:
Nerys - "Very promising start. I look forward to see where you're going to take this. I like your portrayal of Hermione and Voldemort a lot so far." Thank you! I was kind of worried since I haven't written about them before.
"I do think the usage of "my dear" by Voldemort at that point and in front of all his followers was a bit off (especially without there being a reaction to it by others, be that derisive laughter aimed at Hermione or uncomfortable shock of him addressing a Muggle-born like that), but that's just me nitpicking and don't worry too much about it. I've made similar errors in my stories (I still have a "baby" to delete somewhere in mine). They're not that big a deal and easy to fix if one wants to." - Thanks for the feedback. I really like the idea of his followers laughing at his use of the term, I might have to go back and add that into the story Also, I've read quite a few of your stories. I'm Fleur K, but decided to use a different name to post fanfiction, one that perhaps suited me more than "Fleur K." Honestly, I don't know how I even came up with that name.
"I absolutely liked the rest of your chapter. It's a relief to see appropriate grammar and spelling. It's also a relief to see a Hermione who uses her brain and isn't an immediate mess when confronted with LV. I liked the pacing you took with this; their reactions to each other were not rushed and seemed logical given the circumstances." - I'm delighted that you enjoyed it. I know what you mean about the grammar and spelling. Luckily, I'm an English major....so I hope I don't make too many mistakes. Again, I'm glad you are enjoying the story. It means a lot to see a review from someone whose stories I like so much. I hope you continue reading.