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Onileo

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  1. What can I say about this story? It started out as a funny little one-shot I wrote because I was writing a serious story at the time and humorous situations kept popping into my head and wouldn't go away. It was well received, and I just couldn't say no to the demands for more. So it grew into a six-chapter story with a final sequel still to be written. I'm hardly sorry for it, because one of my very best lemons is contained within (Material Bonds).

    Here's the link if you haven't read it yet: http://naruto.adultf...hp?no=600104838 and the replies for it are below.

  2. Hummingbird is a romance/tragedy (if you read the last chapter) involving Hoshigaki Kisame and Hyuga Hinata. They are both sent to Iwagakure to fetch the same ninja and become hopelessly tangled in each other's mission... and each other. If you'd like to read it, here's the link...http://naruto.adultf...hp?no=600104846 It is the first story I've ever written, so you might notice a big difference in the writing style.

    This thread is for review replies to the above story.

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