Hi everyone!
I'm new to AFF, but eager to learn the ropes and post my stories. I recently posted Royal Siblings, an original incest story I've been working on. It's gotten a couple reviews and I'd really like to comment on them and get some other feedback for the story.
Here is the summary for the story:
To save his country, King Treyven must marry his little sister, and when he does, discovers fucking her is the best thing that's ever happened to him. (Fet, Fingering, HJ, Inc, M/F, Minor2, Oral, Preg, Solo, Toys, WIP)
Although primarily a sex-based story, it also focuses on magic and some politics, plus, of course, the minor drama involved with a brother marrying his sister for political reasons only to discover he actually really loves her and wants to continue fucking her.
Anyway, this story is definitely not for non-incest fans! To those of you who have already reviewed my story: thank you so much! Nothing motivates me to write more than people commenting, telling me if they like my story or not!
My reply: Thank you for your review! So glad you're enjoying it so far. Part of this story will be about Treyven learning that Avalia is more than just his fuckhole and is actually a person with more to her than just her ability to please her brother/husband. It won't happen over night, though. He isn't a complete asshole who hurts her, though he can be self-centered and blind to her needs at times. It's a learning process for him.
My reply: I wrote this story in English, which I assume is the language you read it in, so why you left your review in Spanish is beyond me. Fortunately, Google translate managed to translate this for me to, "I can say just amazing, I hope you keep writing this story and make it soon, ana maria"
So, thank you very much! I'm really glad you're enjoying it, and there will definitely be more chapters, and soon. I plan to post the next chapter tomorrow!
My reply: Thank you so much! I'm not a big fan of bondage, though some light bondage is certainly possible. There will be various other kinky sex stuff later, though not all of my fetishes are ones everyone will like. Hopefully if there are any parts that aren't "hot" you (or any other reader) you'll skim past them to get to other parts that you do enjoy. I don't want to put anyone off with one kink or fetish or another, and hope to have lots. The only super constant one will be brother/sister incest, I think!
And finally (so far).
My reply: I find it a little disturbing you think him deflowering his sister with no thought for her comfort is funny, but then, I don't claim to understand everyone's sense of humor. Treyven is definitely out of line with how rough he treats the girl he claims to love. Part of the story will be him realizing how much of an "object" he treats her and how he can improve their relationship. Of course, that will take some time (especially because Avalia has been trained to act and be treated this way), but it's not something I'm totally unaware of. I hope you enjoyed the story besides just finding it "interseting," but I realize incest certainly isn't for everyone. Thank you for your review!