[Toshiro]

Part Two, Chapter Eleven: http://original.adul...3234&chapter=14

Part Two, Chapter Twelve: http://original.adul...3234&chapter=15

Part Two, Chapter Thirteen: http://original.adul...3234&chapter=16

Thank you to anyone who's read so far, and a large thank you for all the feedback, I vastly appreciate it.

These chapters mark the end of Part Two. Part Three (final part) will begin in a month's time.

Yay! I'll have to start reading this one. I'm not familiar with the fandom, but I'll fix that!

[Nonstandard Operating Procedure]

Hey, I just posted the second to last chapter of this fic. If you like Spock, bdsm, and original characters with character development, please read. I am writing a sequel to this, and would love some feedback and any ideas you might have.

Title: Nonstandard Operating Procedure

Author: Silkyselkie

Summary: Takes place directly after the episodes in Season 1 involving Pike ("Cage" and "Menagerie). Spock demands discipline for his actions against orders. Kirk sends a strange android woman to do the job.

Rating: Adult.

Pairings: Spock/OC

Spoilers: Anything from the episodes "Cage" and "Menagerie" in the original series.

Feedback: Yes, please.

URL: http://tv.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600095363

Thank you in advance,

-SS

[What I dislike about fanfics and their authors]

I totally agree with this. My pet peeve is the fan boys and girls who make say Sephiroth/Snape/Sesshomaru/ completely uncool by over beautifying them and making them "kawaii" and stuff. This is done to so many initially cool villain characters...such a shame.

I can't believe that people would turn away advice from readers. Heck, I wish I could get ANY reviews, just to get an idea of where I should take things, and what ideas others may have. Collaboration is an important and really helpful feature of writing.

[I have no friends]

Actually I have. I even told him he could pick the other girl, but he said no. I am from West-Texas, basically everyone is a homophobe here. I hate this fucking place.

One time a bunch of idiot football-playing-jerks got ahold of my notebook that I write fanfiction in, and comepletely destroyed it. Just because I write yaoi and yuri. They wrote things like "Fags go to hell" and "God hates you" all over it. They called me a lesbian, carpetmuncher, fag-lover, etc... I didn't care about the names they called me, but I was really upset that they tore my notebook up. It had probably 30 stories in it. I think they kept the pages though, because sometimes one would surface and they would read the sex-scenes out loud when the teacher was out of the room. They were in gay-denial if you ask me.

I'm sorry that those people were so horrible to you. Seriously, those kind of people just need to all get educated. You can take comfort in the fact thought that if their God is real, He probably hates them. Homosexuality occurs across all species, and is a natural way of fixing overpopulation. It's just the way nature works, and that's why, according to psychology at least, we're all bisexual, (but most are repressed thanks to society and people like the numbskulls who took your notebook). I wish people could just get this idea through their thick skulls once and for all.

Hang in there, guys, (everyone who doesn't have a lot of friends in this case). It sucks to not have a lot of friends, but I think it's honestly because 90% of people are rude and socially stupid. Wait around for the 10% who aren't, and try to hold on to them. I would suggest making friends at work, or joining a club. Just remember for every jerk that you let go of in life, you will be more free to find good friends.