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  1. Yes. There definitely needs to be a balance. Cute is good for one shots and all but if it's a longer story...well...couples fight, it just happens. And angst and abuse... it needs depth, that's just a cheap way to get rocks off if neither of them develop feelings for each other, realistic ones. Like I read a fantastic Clyde/Tweak fanfiction jsut a bit ago. It was sick and twisted and there was nothing redeeming about the relationship, but it had such depth that it was okay.
  2. Yeah it really does depend on the author. I suppose melodramatics is more what i meant to say, since all stories need some sort of drama and theatrics to get the reader entertained. And I like those semes as long as they stay true to their character, like I tend to dislike semes like that who get OMG so super sweet to their ukes unless the author can manage to write it well enough where they're still in character.
  3. Personally regardless of gender I like strong main characters. Not spunky, I hate spunky, because I've never read a spunky character that can back it up. I like main characters who don't bitch about everything, if they don't like something, they handle it with maturity, or if they're younger they grit their teeth and bare it (there are some exceptions of course, like if they bitch in a hilarious way I love them for it) I also like characters who take things well. Even if they have weak constitutions they don't turn everything into THE BIGGEST DRAMA THAT EVER HAPPENED IN THE HISTORY OF EVER GASP. Weak or dramatic characters make me uncomfortable and embarrassed for them, if not wanting to just shoot them in the head. Though to be honest, you made me like a man that was admittedly a faggot in mannerisms. That's tough to do so I have confidence in your ability to make any character awesome. As for relationships, I like cute ones. Ones that start as friendships, where they get to know each other and are all cute together. (I'm such a hypocrite XD;;; ) but I'll read just about any kind of relationship. Hope that helps somewhat ^^
  4. oh gosh, I don't know if I can do longer than a one shot at the moment but I definately want to do this <333333
  5. If you're placing it in modern day, wouldn't Harry be older? I'm rusty on my HP history but I'm pretty sure he's 17 circa 1997.
  6. I loved the twists =3 =3 =3 They kept me absolutely enthralled through the day <3333
  7. Thanks! Here's the link <3 http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600103513 Haha why were they making out? and the most important question...are they hot? XD I like hearing other people's inspiration for their stories <3 especially how one thing like Opera can span into a completely unrelated fic. You should definately link me when it's up ^^ I just finished heirloom like an hour ago and once my head stops pounding Imma read more of yours.
  8. =D The best kind of corruption <33333. (Eventually I want to get around to writing this one about the son of a drug lord who does his teenage rebellion thing by joining the monastary, being super religious (in the kind, gentle way. Not the YOU WILL BURN IN HELL way, he's a pure soul) and eventually falls in love with another priest. The other priest turns out to be the devil who's trying to find closeness to God again, but can't help but corrupting the priest. Eventually the priest confesses that he loves Satan more than God. He finds out who Satan is, but by then its too late he's too deeply in love.) Or some bullshit like that. XD Sorry >> I talk about myself an overabundance of a lot. Anyways, I'm going to finish the first chapter of the MC fic than start browsing through your stories =3 (and I changed my characters names. Austen is now Dominic since all Austen's I've known have been douchebags and the one whose face I remember was buttfuck ugly, and Sergei is Sasha because for some reason even though I love the name Sergei it just makes me giggle.)
  9. Sweet Just let me know if you ever take me up on it <3333 and whats the aff story about?
  10. Yeah ^^ I can't decide between it being kids or teens yet. And I know the feeling, I've been trying to get a writers grop together but it's only been mildly successful. If you'd like though, to motivate you and whatnot, I'd love to read what you got and give feedback/poke you to write more =) if not I understand XD just an offer. <3
  11. Man do I feel you <3333 I've...never actually finished a fic before that wasn't a one shot. but this time, this time things will be different. For one thing I have a lot of it planned out already. For another thing...I'm older, which I'll pretend gives me more drive. Just got to take this math test and then I can freely start writing this fic =) it's technically going to be a cool down/fun write while I work on my novel, but since my novel is so light hearted I'm going to work on my literary prettiness on this one...or at least with some semblance of depth XD My usual light hearted, crappy joke filled style would just clash horribly with this.
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