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  1. Body of review from Althydia follows:

    Oh, nice scene... I don't think it was too hardcore so it shouldn't shock readers (particularly with the warnings for this story). I enjoyed it and understood Sasuke's frustration at the beginning when he had to wait to be with his Naruto (did Itachi take more time on purpose? Naughty big brother...). Iruka was so sweet too (particularly with his implicit jealousy at Sasuke's mum asking Naruto to call her mother), but Naruto didn't really promise anything vocally... Will that be important later?<br />

    Also, I thought Naruto had been taught by Pein not to let dominants come in him? Does that mean he could get pregnant now?

    My Dear Dear Althydia.... YOU are going to be the very death of me you terribly observant reader! :0P you see right through me and read right between the lines. Yes Itachi was intentionly encouraging the drawing out of dinner. He was being a meanie...Iruka consider Naruto HIS son and ok in their family he the maternal firgure so it did bother him when she all but insisted. No it won't... I think Mikoto and Naruto will find even ground.

    He had been taught and had been tained, had this drilled into him so I'm not telling you more then yes pein did make it very clear not to have unprotected sex.

  2. Nope, this IS the right area for the story discussion. Have you tried to clear your browser cache? Sometimes the cookie string starts to corrupt which prevents login. So, what to do then, is clear your cache, and then use the link at the bottom of the forum to clear your cookies for it. If that doesn't work, let me know.

    Yay! I was totaly upset I was gonna lose the threads I had going with readers. :) You made my day... and it looks like you solved my sign in problem too! Thank you very much!

  3. I will be posting and responding to any and all questions from feedback here. Thank you for your feedback, questions and interest. ~ AngelTalion

    Althydia: Collars mean different things to different couples. When a Dominant does marry a submissive the collar is the traditional symbol. However some Dominants collar submissives temporarily. A trial period, a simple contract of mutual agreed upon arrangemen it all depends on the people involved. The same goes with multiple submissives, it is permitted (thought at this point in their history rare) there are no laws or rules against doing so. Some Dominants have both a male and female submissive which is more common with multiple subs. As is the case with Tsunade who has both Shizune and Jiraiya.

    unneeded: In this world marriage is more comonplace at this point in the history I'm creating. Marriage is much like it is for us now. Not forevery one but a sign of complete commitment between a Dominant and submissive. I will go into more detail about the cerimony involved later in the fic. Both men and women can breed in this universe so taking a male doesn't mean not having children. And not only submissive men can breed, all men have the ability. For the purposes of my fic, and to avoid the complications that come with it I have decided not to have vanilla or non-dynamic persons. Everyone will identify as either submissive or Dominant.

    Nejislady: I have half a mind to make you wait but I love you too much, at this point the break down is as as listed below. However this is not a complete list and it is subject to change at my random whims. :-p

    Naruto - Submissive

    Sasuke - Dominant

    Itachi - Dominant

    Kakashi - Dominant

    Iruka - Submissive

    Jiraiya - Submissive

    Tsunade - Domme

    Shizune - Submissive

    Neji - Dominant

    Sakura - Domme

    Sai - Submissive

    Kiba - Dominant

    Ino - Submissive

    Gaara - Submissive

    Tamari - Domme

    Kanuro - Submissive

    Hinata - Submissive

    Shino - Dominant

    Choji - Dominant

    Shikamaru - Submissive

    Asuma - Dominant

    Lee - Submissive

    Tenten - Dominant

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