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Chapter 41: Alassea Riddle: Hahaha, I'm glad you liked it so much, and you are welcome to jump right onto the next chapter Chapter 42: Alassea Riddle: Yes, everyone is very upset over Ken's death I can't blame you, I liked him a lot! But I'm glad you liked the chapter so much! Thanks for reading and reviewing! dru: Well, you are in luck I'm updating now! And don't worry, I don't plan on abandoning this story! It's very close to finished after all! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
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Chapter 40 Alassea Riddle: Thank you, Allie! I kind of thought so too, to be honest... we are just in the climax of the story, so it should be all... climax-y And yes, Voldemort will so get punished for that little stunt in the bed later on Yeah, not hard to make Harry come across as mad. Poor thing. But you can understand him if you think about it. Or, at least I can. So yeah... Thanks for reading and reviewing!
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Chapter 39 Alassea Riddle: Yay! I'm glad you liked it so much! I hope you'll find the next chapters just as out of the ordinary. But no more Voldemort with a beard, sorry. And well, it wasn't only the beard, but he looked very old as well... so... well, if that's your cup of tea, then it's up to you and your search history But yeah, I think it's him that makes him sexy. Everything looks good on a beauty! Yeah, poor Alex And ohno, you are on to me! Yeah, everything comes back to me, and I of course share every opinion Voldemort has (not). I'll need to add that in my disclaimer XD Haha, you are most welcome! I just had to have Merlin there somewhere. He is always so much fun to include. Thanks for reading and reviewing! Nerys: Yes, shame on me... I guess I'll just have to work harder on chractarisation in coming chapters! Otherwise... who knows what will happen? Perhaps Tom gets a puppy and then breaks down and admits his undying love to it? It's a slippery sloppy road OOC-ing. *Basking in the compliments of my writing* But yeah, I'm still feeling the pain of Voldemort's bathing. His new curse is that I'll experience everything bad he experience in my stories. Alas, not the good things he experience (Hermione). *sobs* You just be aware, Nerys, he will coming after you next! Yeah, it was surprisingly easy to keep Hermione IC in this chapter. She will do so much for the people she love And well, he was just a package, so why not strap him to her back? XD Of course Voldemort would have been nagging all the time if he had been concious. But everyone hates a back seat driver, so... I understand Hermione for knocking him out (it wasn't at all out of consideration, nope). Thanks for reading and reviewing, dear beta, hope you'll enjoy the coming chapters! sarahdaye9: I'm so glad you liked it! Yeah, it was about time this story got some action scenes, so I'm glad you enjoyed them. There will be more of them in the coming chapters! And you'll see his reactions to a lot of things in the coming chapter, so I hope you like them as well. He is not pleased for being kept out, let me tell you that Thanks for reading and reviewing!
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SalazarRaphael: Aw, thank you, I'm glad you have enjoyed my stories so much. And sorry for the cliff hangers, but I'm evil that way, I guess. Hopefully, I'll be able to update much faster now in the summer, so you'll see what happens next... then we'll see what happens with the fiaries! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Laura: Aw, well, I think Voldemort was a bit too tired for it to be very hot, sorry. But there will be a sex scene soon again, I promise! And I'm glad you are liking the story so much. Thanks for reading and reviewing! Alassea Riddle: Yay, reviews are always so nice to read from you! And indeed, Hermione is the one imprisioned and... angry. Poor Harry indead. Although, he did have it coming, I guess. With those two as parents, I would be surprised if anyone where surprised XD I know, I love writing Voldemort all manipulative and lying and pretending to be a good guy. Indeed, dishonest citizen.... hehehehehe. Well, I just had to throw Mizuro into the mix again. He is so much fun to write. But no, Voldydorks is soooo not amused *Miya hides* And I hope you liked Alice Tamsin, hihi! I'm glad you liked the chapter! Miya does happy dance for all the lovely reviews, thank you! Yes, you are indeed... and I think he will be very pleased with you. Such a shame he is already married in this fic, and Hermione would have your head if you touched him Yeah, I think it's good for Harry's health that both Voldemort and Hermione was released sooner rather than later. Can you imagine what more Hermione would do to Harry if she had have stay there longer? Not to mention what Voldemort would have done if they had had to break out... As to Alexandra... well, it was doomed to happen that Voldemort would find his children in the way sometime. I fear to think what will happen when they grow up and get a will of their own. And starts to call him Voldydorks for read XD Hahahahah, I loved having Hermione cursing Voldemort ... eh, not. No, of course not. *Miya hides again* But I'm glad you liked the chapter and I hope you'll like the next one with Merlin Thanks for reading and reviewing! Atlantean_Diva: Yes, we have finally reached the adventures-time of the story, and I'm glad you like them. There will be much more of those now in the end of the story. Oh, I love writing from Tom's PoV! And yeah, he cares about his family, because he feels like he owns them, I think. And he is always so careful about his possessions... or well, tries to be. Puts traps around them and all. Oooh, you'll have to wait and see for what Alexandra is up to. But everyone does seem to think that she is up to something. I wonder why... It was about time Hermione crucioed Tom, I think! So much frustration for so long... yeah, that isn't good for you. Time to get it out! Aaah, I'd so love to write about Tom's issues with his teenage daughters... who knows, maybe it will be a spin off? Just some collection of one-shorts We'll see. I can't promise anything, but I would love to write it... I think. Maybe I write five sentences and then gets stuck. We'll see! As for Teddy, I can already now say that I don't think he will be as much of a douchbag when he is seventeen. I think he is just a pre-puberty monster who will get calmer and nicer with age! Anyway, thanks for reading and reviewing! brightneeBee: Oh, that's okay, I'm glad you managed to leave a review in the end And glad you liked the chapter! And yess... they are the only ones I remember that have ever broken into Gringotts, so I think that if they both try to do it again, it won't be so hard. Or well, you'll get to read that now! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
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Review reply to chapter 36 Atlantean_Diva: Yeah, Harry really didn't handle that whole thing very well at all. But it's nice that some readers have picked up on Harry's reasoning. Most have just been pissed (which I understand too... but yeah, I can understand Harry as well). Ah, yes, Teddy... he really needs to grow up. He is quite the bully atm. Well, Hermione don't have a choice but to stay. Voldemort would never let her leave. That's the sad part of the story. If she did try to leave, she would have to run far and fast, because Voldemort would just come after her and force her back. It's not a very nice position to be in. Review reply chapter 37 Atlantean_Diva: I think Hermione and Tom are equally eager to tear some fairies apart, so let's hope you won't have to wait too long to see it! Yes, it was about time Hermione got to punch someone. Harry did indeed handle the whole thing very clumsy. Then again, Hermione should probably have told them some warning that things could happen with her daughters... but yeah, it doesn't seem like she trust her old friends that much anymore, does it? The fairies are really taking advantage of the secrets among the friends. Actually, I'm not sure if Alex is a Gryffindor or a Slytherin, she does take after a lot from both her mother and father... I guess we'll just have to wait and see what happens. She can still change a bit. She is so young... Well, I don't think the fairies will hurt Althea. They took her away because they needed her, after all. And Morgana have always been a friend to Althea. However, there are a lot of things they can do that aren't physically hurtful... and yes, then there is also the question on how far they can go to get what they want. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
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Review reply chapter 37: Laura: Wow, thank you! I'm glad you are enjoying the story so much! I do try to make it as believable as can be when you are dealing with magic and fairies and all that jazz XD And thank you! So far, the home-exam is tugging along nicely! I'll update as soon as I find the time to write! Thanks for reading and reviewing.
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Review replies Shared Flame chapter 36: Ujala: Yes, we are reaching the climax of the story, so some heating up is required! Sorry for the cliffhanger, but, well, I like writing them. *evil smile*. And, well, Morgana isn't really alive, so can she die? Ah well, I think Hermione and Voldemort share your deisire there. Yes, more often than not, Harry is just plain annoying... it's luck he got friends like Hermione in the books, to help him out. He needs it so often... as for wanting to punch him in the face... well, in the new chapter, you can see Hermione is sharing your desire there as well! And sorry for the wait of chatper 37... but now you got it so hope you aren't dying anymore! Thanks for reading and reviewing! sarahdaye9: Yes, not a lot of Harry-love going around now. As for how it will all come together, that is for the future to decide All I can promise is that it will end. One way or another... THanks for reading and reviewing! SarahLuvsZombehs: Yes, I think all reviewrs were kind of in that area when they reviewed. *Hides from storm of angry readers.* But I hope the next chapter have made you a bit happier! brightneeBee: Yay! I'm glad you are liking it and that aff is finally allowing you to tell me you like it That's a good phone ^^ Al_Riddle: Of course I can forgive you After all, I take ages responding to reviews, so... eeeeh, can't really blame others for taking time reviewing. No, and Miya wasn't disrespectful at all from writing it. No, because it wasn't Miya who wrote it... nope. Not at all. Never Miya... eeeeh. (But it was hilarious to write!!!) Yes, well, alas, Pottermore has been a lot more boring than Hogwarts would have been... it seems everyone has lost interest in it already. Hope they'll open the next book soon! HAHAHA And yaaay! Someone elswe thought my porridge-thing was fun! I thought I had to make some fun of my constant use of having them eat porridge for breakfast... but sorry you missed the Alexandra-bit! Good thing you saw it now! Yes, what did you expect from Voldemort And well, Harry and the Aurors couldn't risk Hermione trying to break Voldemort out or something. They don't know if he got some power over her or something. But yeah, I think Alexandra will have nightmares about this for quite some time... poor girl. Thanks for reading and reviewing! And thanks for reviewing My Fair Mudblood And thanks to jaspersluv1863 for taking the time to leave reviews on both The Contract and The Threesome in the Dungeon! Review reply for chapter 37: s: I'm glad you liked it! And well, I think the best way to stop Harry is making sure people don't believe him... and since people have stopped believing him some times before, it shouldn't be that hard As for the sex in the cell... well, it's Voldemort, can else can you expect Thanks for reading and reviewing!
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Review reply to Allie in Shared Flame chapter 35: Yeees, but I do think Voldemort have been an obsession for Harry ever since the forth book when he killed Cedric and all that. But it have become much wrose now! Yeees. And then the advising to the Minister as well! I'm glad you seem to like them. As you know, I was quite annoyed by Althea back there XD But it turned out okay after a while. Haha, yes, I've heard that conspiracy theory before. So that's why there are so many catastrophes in the world, too many untrained witches and wizards running around XD Hehe, you'll see. You'll see But sorry, no matter how much you want to sleep with Voldemort, I'm not letting you become Hermione XD Sorry for the lack of evilness. I didn't feel like it back when I wrote it. Maybe another time! Yes, Hermione is in a hopeless situation. She doesn't want to leave him either, but... she does want to be loved. So it's a bit of a moment 22. Dun dun duuuuuuun. You'll see what happens with Harry and Althea in the next chapter! But no, no killing here. Mehehe. Thanks for reading and reviewing! Oh, since you reviewed Threesome, I'm responding to it now as well: "Okay, let me just say that I wished I had read this before... but you know how much I... dislike Snapione... but he died, didn't he? So I'm not complaining cause this was really good xD xD" Yees, well, even though I like Snapione know and again, I wouldn't let him get in the way of Voldemort! So I'm glad you like the one-short with his death. I got a few complains for that from Snape-lovers, but they have yet to see the Tomione-light, so... not much to do! Thanks for leaving a review there as well
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Review replies for chapter 34: LadyCandi: Glad you like it so much! More to coom soon enough Thanks for reading and reviewing! sarahdaye9: Well, she is some kind of lady at least Voldemort's vows were by far the hardest to write (that's why I had a lot of help from Nerys), but the messing with Harry was the funniest, so I'm glad you enjoyed both of them! As to what Harry does in the future, well, you'll see some of that in the next chapter! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Allie: Sorry for keeping you starved lately, then Oh, he dropped by and paid his regards. I haven't been able to move for weeks. *Miya in a casket* Well, at giving birth, there are a lot of hormons releasing and shit, so someone who is just feeling the pain wouldn't get that, I think. But it's a very hypotetical problem since it can't happen in real life. But wouldn't it be awesome if you could share the pain? Hahaha! Or just a lot of empaty? Yes, aren't those interesting choise of name... and sorry to disappoint you, but Alexandra will be called Alex and Althea is pretty much Althea! And the Mugglepreschool talk begins xD Hermione did have a point there. But then again… so did the DL. “ She was actually wishing that her friends would leave so she could cuddle up next to a naked Voldemort” – someone doesn’t feel like socializing xD Again I will say “Dadada dummmm” because of ““You have fallen in love with him.”” Her realization actually made me sad, but his reassurance about that he really care about her, and that it’s “more powerful than love” was okay, considering who we are talking about. “Lie to me” – I simply LOVED that. I died. I felt like breaking *sob* Yeees, that is by far the fluffiest stuff I've read. But I'm glad you died the fangirl-death instead of vomiting over it XD Hahaha! Trust Voldemort to fuck her before the wedding. LOL ““I think we should always go without underwear,” Voldemort answered in a chipper tone, cleaning himself. “You look very beautiful, by the way.” Hermione snorted. “Now he notices.”” – Bahahahaha! That was just hilarious. That’s something I can imagine with everyone xD Glenda Carson… GC… Hmm… not familiar at all. Yeees, where ever could it be from... And HAHAHAHAHAHA! Voldemort wanting to take care of Harry’s baby xD That’s cute LOL. “ “Oh, Harry, you know I don’t kill babies. I try, but it just never seems to work, now, does it?”” – Well, he certainly does have some humor. Can’t imagine why people can’t just fall in love with him already. I know I am… *drool* *swoon* Hahaha… why oh why can’t Harry just take a baby advice just once. xD Probably thought, that he would just taunt him for doing what he said xD xD xD That was really fun to write, so I'm glad you enjoyed to read it so much! During Hermione’s speech I was like “yes, yes, yes, what else is new?” but during the DL’s I was all ears… I mean… all… eyes… Eh.. yeah. And Shakespeare? Why do I get the feeling that it was Nerys’ idea? Or was it just yours? Well, I did think it was quite relevant to have Shakespeare since Hermione is named after one of the characters in one of his plays LOL. No, Shakespare was Quieenies idea, if I recall correctly... but I think we already talked about this over Twitter so, oh well. “ You are the one person who truly knows me, understands me, works with me and stands by my side. Always. I know you love me and you know how much I love you.” So there were a few things here that made me think. The first sentence gives itself. Then “Always” comes and I am somehow reminded of Snape’s “always”. Strange? Hmm… And then the rest was actually laughable. Because every single thing he said could be considered true. She knows him, she does understand him, and she is with him. He knows that she loves him, so it is true and he doesn’t say that he loves her, but states that she knows how much he loves her. Which could also mean that he does not love her and that is something that really made me want to clap. Awesomeness. You are a lot more clever than the audience, that's fore sure XD Yeah, he was really sneaky with the wovs *cough*Nerys was*cough* “You may kiss each other… again” – I laughed with the crowd. No kidding. “He was hers. He was going to become a very powerful and influential man. She had influence and power over him. She got power.” – That made me so excited!! Wonderful chapter. Thumbs up for both you and Nerys. Xoxo Allie P.S: Oh, Merlin, if my essays were that long, I would be jumping with joy xD xD xD Yeees, finally Hermione comes to the realisation that she has power as well! About time, don't you think? I'm glad you liked the chapter and I hope you did manage to finish that essay! //Miya Atlantean_Diva: I think a lot of people thought it would be a boy. I even had Hermione call the foetus "him" at one time because that's not so uncommon when you don't know what sex the baby has. As to Tom and Alexandra's relationship, you'll just have to wait and see. And soon enough, you'll get to read about eleven year old Althea and seven year old Alexandra! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
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Review reply for chapter 33: m0nt: Haha, always happy I can surprise my readers! And of course I'm contiuing with the story! I just structured it into two parts so it wouldn't seem as weird when I made a hugh jump in time. But first, you get to take a little jump just a few months into time! Atlantean_Diva: Hehe... wouldn't that be a twist? The fairies succseeding where Voldemort fails? XD HAHAHAHAHA, I was like "LM? Lucius is dead!" Then I realised it was my own inisals... clever Miya. Thanks for reading and reviewing! Alassea Riddle: I'm glad you found the talks informing! (my spell-check says that both Voldemort and Hermione is wrong. Evil). And about the child... well, you may find something out in the next chapter!! But part two won't begin until the chapter after that. Oh, well. Yeees. It's not a SF-update if there is no smut XD And I just had to have someone walk in on them. Or well, disturb them. Voldemort has no shame, he just keeps going XD He likes to make people uncomfortable. Yes, Hermione have been concidering herself as a victim. But you'll see what happens in the next chapter! Thank you! I liked it too, so I just kept doing it! But don't know for how long I'll be able to do it... hm. I mean, right now, Harry is 24 or something, so that is young. But in seven years...? Oh, well, compared to Voldemort, he will always be young I suppose. Of course Hermione would end up with a professor! I can't see her with anyone else. No, I can't see her with Ron. *shivers* And yeees, MIya loves the censored parts of Uchiha's The Scientist. That's yummyyummy!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA. Speaking of fluff... check out Voldemort at the end of the next chapter. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. Nerys wrote most of that. I don't have the fluff in me, I'm afraid... You'll see what happens But yes, with Harry's premission they are allowed to use his magic to do what he wants them too. But you'll see what happens with Morgana later on!! I'm glad you liked the chapter and I'm glad the emotions wasn't unwelcome That would have been awkward.. oh, well. Lots of love!
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HAHAHAHAHAHA! Indeed, Nerys But I still think it will cause Alassea some discomfort sooner or later... so still advice not to try it!
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Review replies for chapter 32 (sorry for the delay)(my answer is in black): m0nt: Have I ever told you that your my favourite author in Hr/TMR Jr section? This chapter was absolute perfection. I get bored writing a review for you, because I'm a negative reviewer and I have nothing to say to you. That's why my reviews are super short. Thank you! I'm glad you like my stories too much. A shame you only write negative reviews, but I'll take it as a compliment, then Atlantean_Diva: Tom is such a bad father, shame on him for putting a silencing spell around Althea, lol. I'm sure there are many parents who wish they could do the same. I'm wondering how long it will now before Hermione tells him she loves him because she obviously does, and I wonder what his reactions will be. Thanks for updating. Yees, Voldemort will not win any father awards, that's for sure. But he is a very special... man. With magical abilities. He so missuse them... *Pretends like I wouldn't use magic to get things to come to me because I'm to lazy to get up* I won't tell you anything about Hermione's feelings. You'll find out in due time. Alassea Riddle: I already told you that I loved the chapter, but I'll say it again. I loooooooved it Voldemort was being frustrated, poor thing. O.O I didn't say that. "She stood by the closed front door and cried out for her mother, wanting her to come back" - Awwww I remember my cousin did the same thing for me back when he was around Althea's age. "Voldemort wanted to hit her" - I don't want to imagine what would happen if Hermione had been dead instead of on vacation. Damn... Hahahaha, I loved it when Althea asked what happens after you die. "He had no idea how to answer that. He would never die, so he hadn’t given it much thought. However, he knew that others died." Ooh, that was such a wonderful sentence xD It made me smile. See --> :-) "“But Dad, you aren’t as scary as a ghost!” Althea objected. Voldemort laughed. “Believe me, I am.”" Believe me, he's SCARIER than a ghost when he's in Dark Lord-mode. But Hermione had obviously forgotten that O.o Mihi, I'm glad you enjoyed the Althea-scene. It's so fun to write the two of them interacting! Haha, I bet Hermione was ecstatic when she could finally do her homework. The couple Daniel and Shannon... I thought it was a little obvious that they had a Shared Flame. My suspicion was confirmed here: "“Call me nostalgic,” the man answered with a sigh. “I just wanted to remember the place where we first met.” He sneaked a hand across the table and grasped the woman’s, stroking it slowly and lovingly." "She found it very sweet, but at the same time, she felt sad. Even if she and Voldemort were still a couple when she was as old as that lady, she doubted he would ever look at her that lovingly. He didn’t love." - I felt so sad for Hermione here. Of course I think Voldemort's feelings for Hermione will grow much more (thinking about the Contract and the Atlantis fic *wink*) of course never the lovey dovey kind of thing. He's still Voldemort. That's why we love him. Haha, yes, I did make Daniel and Shannon's secret quite obvius, didn't I? Well, the truth came out soon enough... Yeah, I feel for Hermione too... but he does care for her quite a bit "What had she ever done to deserve Voldemort?" - WHAT??? You, Miss Ungrateful, should be HONORED that my Lord is so merciful. He could do worse and have you tied to... to... the BED!!! Or the ceiling. It depends... "Chewing the delicious and quite expensive chicken, she remembered that it wasn’t all bad. She had Althea and financial security as well as help with her career. The sex was great, and you could call Voldemort many things but boring wasn’t one of them" - And then she comes to her senses... xD XD Yeees, Hermione should feel honoured! I'm taking all this time writing her having lots and lots of sex, when I could be having sex!!! Or something like that... Boo.. ungrateful indeed. And what happened that would make her fall? Hmm... weird. Nah, that's nothing. She is just pregnant and rose to quickly so she got a head rusch or something. I can promise that at least XD Daniel... that man was so sweet. xD LOL When the made that scanning spell and Voldemort appeared my heart thrummed xD I love him!! “Now, I want to know which one of you used Dark Arts on my fiancée.” - He sounded so protective I wanted to hug him, though I have a feeling he won't be amused... hmf.. Noooo, don't think Voldemort would be very amused. More like... starting to hex you. So don't try him!! And now they'll find out more about the Shared Flame-thingy. *happy dance* I wonder if they had children... So... maybe this vacation was to their benefit, even though I do hold dislike Hermione for wanting to stay away from him. "“What do you say, my dear?” he asked" - *sigh* why can't he call me that... "Was that a flash of disappointment she saw in his face?" - yes, it was. If you look at your psychology books, you'll find out that no matter how perfect a mask can be, the face can still crack for a time in less than a second. The thing goes so fast, the human eye has a hard time finding it. Yes, I've read some about that as well. It's very interesting how many signals we send out and we see every day, without conciously reflecting on, but still acts against and all... And then she went back to the hotel and came back! xD "Hermione opened her eyes when the thought hit her. She wanted to fuck him. What was stopping her from doing just that? A weak voice in the back of her head reminded her of what had happened, but the horny voice inside her was louder. Why shouldn’t she just Apparate back to her flat and fuck her husband-to-be? Yes. He didn’t have a say in it. It wasn’t like he had ever asked; why should she? No, this time, she wanted to be in control." Yep, they are Definitely robbing off on each other.. And then a fantastically described smut scene.. no, TWO fantastically described smut scenes. Why, thank you! Sometimes I wonder if I write too much smut. It doesn't really add so much to the plot anymore. But then I figure... naaaaah. "With his and Hermione’s genes, they were bound to be both clever and beautiful. You could get far in the world with both qualities." - Yeah, I bet he knew something about that Hmm.. Now *I* want pancakes... Don't think about the length of the chapter this time. Even though it was shorter, I think that all that happened made up for it. Also the 2x smut xD I WANT PANCAKES TOO! I found a recepie for a coconut-milk pancaces that are without gluten and lactos, and I want to try them out so baaaaadly! Yum, yum, yum... But I can't make pancakes... Oh, Mists of Avalon is one of my favorite movies (and books). I am still in my read-everything-about-King-Arthur-period. Have been for the past 2 or 3 years xD So I just began reading the Road to Avalon which is an Arthur/Morgan book And yes, country-wise we are neighbors xD Quite cool. Haha, nice! The only thing left with my Arthur-period is that I watch Merlin. I always liked Merlin and Morgana the best. But oh, I was so happy when you posted this. For the past weeks I've been rereading your other fics and Nerys' and SiR's and Shan84's and some others.... Because... I COULDN'T STAND THE FLUFFY!TOM FICS!!!! There are too many, I'm going mad!!! *inhales* *exhales* That was it... Keep up the good work - Alassea (This review is longer than the one I gave Nerys, which was the longest I made. What happened? O_o) No. Let's go on a kill Fluffy!Tom-hunt. There are too many!!! GAAH! And mahaha! You love me more than Nerys. *pulls out tongue to Nerys*. Miya childish. And happy for long review! Thank you a bunsh. LexiaBlack: Great chapter!! As always, the interaction between Voldemort and Althea was priceless. "He sat down on the floor next to the door. “Althea, you are being childish now,” he told her sternly in Parseltongue “Your mother needs some time alone, and you are going to stay here with me.”" LOL, got the image of Voldemort/Tom sitting on the floor, trying to reason with a child in Parseltongue stuck in my head. Ohh and of course Althea's question about death! *smirks* Voldemort Apparating into the alley to protect Hermione had me beaming, love him! I'm so excited over them meeting another Shared Flame couple and what they'll find out! Plus I really liked Daniel and Shannon Looking forward to the next chapter! I'm glad you liked the chapter! The interaction between Voldemort and Althea are some of the funniest to write, so I'm glad you like them too! You can just get away with starting to talk about the strangest things when you are talking through a child. Yees, Hermione does have her knight in shining.. eh... something at least. Next chapter have already been posted, of course, but I hoped you like it as well! moor: Wow, you and your betas have really worked hard! It's so amazing to see how well you write and develop the characters and plot in this story, and how much more fluidly it comes together (compared to some of the earlier fanfics you wrote). Thank you for sharing, and looking forward to the next update! Thank you! Yes, I'm very lucky having such hard working and talented betas! They help me a lot. And I'm glad you can see the improvements. I still have a lot more to learn, but I like that I seem to make progress at least! Hope you enjoy the update!
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Review reply for chapter 31 Alassea Riddle: Haha yes, you were right. I thought we hadn't seen the fairies in a while, so you all needed a reminder that they were still here! And actually, I have always loved Morgana/Morgaine/Morgan ever since I saw Mist of Avalon. I had a period when I read everything I could about King Arthur! But she is fun evil as well. And well... I never choose a name by chance. Then I won't say more than that... The clone seemed to have been very popular! I'm glad you found Ginny's reasoning vaild. I think that it wouldn't be long before she told someone, though. If this hadn't happened. But yes, now Harry knows instead... and good on you for remembering Tom's talk in the Burrow! I wasn't sure if anyone would, but ah, well. Yes, it was fun writing the clone, because he was a bit different than Voldemort, but he was still Voldemort, so... yeah. Fun to write But of course I had to keep him enough Voldemort to suggest sex. Otherwise he would be waaaaay to OOC! Yes, my first threesome ever. And well, I thought Voldemort didn't want Hermione to be able to send him off into orgasm-land at a moments notice like that Voldemort always wants to be in control and all that... Haha, I think the baby have kicked before, but this was the first time Voldemort felt it, so yaaaaay! Now he is all happy. I'm glad you liked the length of the chapter. Alas, the next chapter won't be as long, but I hope you'll like it regardless. Thank you for all your love *basking in love* -Miya Kate: I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter so much! And well, I thought Voldemort could use a little bit of trouble. *Hides in my Dark Lord-proof celler*. Hopefully, you won't miss the clone too much after this chapter! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
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Review replies for chapter 30 SarahLuvsZombehs: Hahaha! I'm glad you find it enjoyable. I hope you'll have the same reaction after reading the next chapter... mehehehhehe Thanks for reading and reviewing! m0nt: Thank you! I'm glad you liked the clone since there will be more of him in the next chapter! Atlantean_Diva: I'm glad you liked Althea and the clone, and I'm sorry you didn't like the Ginny think. Although, I don't agree with you. Hermione didn't just jump to the conclusion that Ginny knew about Marcus, she have been noticing little things since chapter 15 or something, and now all the pieces she has seen was fitted together in her head. I mean, Hermione knows that Ginny knows that Althea is a Parselmouth, thus, Ginny must have figured out that "Marcus" is one. And Hermione knows that of everyone, Ginny knew Tom Riddle best because of the diary-incident. And Ginny isn't stupid by far. But I guess I could have explained her reasoning a bit closer, but you'll see more about it in the next chapter. And who said it was a sub-plot? Alassea Riddle: I'm zipping my lips. You'll have to wait and see what happens in the next chapter! Aw, sorry, I hope you find someone else to drag away! But yeah, would have been nice to have a Voldemort clone that couldn't hurt you magically... mehehhee... the things I'd do... Thank you! I'm glad I can make people laugh. I hope you'll continue to find things to laugh about in my stories. I love to entertain! Yeah, Voldemort was too focused on the clone to see what Hermione was thinking. But the clone and Hermione will have a one-on-one now when Voldemort have left, so maybe they'll have some interesting things to talk about? Yeees, I think Hermione is trying to make Voldemort a bit angry for what he did the other night. She isn't too happy with him at the moment. And yes, of course Voldemort becomes jealous of it. He consider Hermione to be his, end of story We'll see more of what Hermione thinks of that in the next chapter! Which will be even longer, so I hope you enjoy! CeruleanIncubus: Sorry, but the chapter had to end somewhere. At first I planned to add the first scene of chapter 31 to chapter 30, but THAT would have been an evil cliffhanger. Thus, you'll get to read it all now instead. And sorry for the long wait, I had a lot to rewrite. I hope you won't have to wait that long for the next chapter, but I can't promise anything. Mohahahahaha! I love corrupting people! Please, go ahead and feel corrupted. And well, I won't spoilt the next chapter in case you read this review reply before you read the next chapter. It's a lot longer than it originally was, so I hope you enjoy it. See it as a belated Christmas present! Kate: You'll see more of the clone in the next chapter, so I hope you'll find that funny as well. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
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Review replies for chapter 29: Kate: Haha! I'm glad you laughed at the Althea part. Sometimes, I just want to add some comic relief, and I'm glad when people enjoy it. And well, Hermione is happy that Voldemort isn't going to kill Ginny, but she is not happy with the fact that he forced her to continue to have sex when she told him to get off. And she told him to get off because she was horrified that he said he would kill her friends. You'll see more of her emotional reaction in the coming chapter, so I hope that explains more of it! Alassea Riddle: Haha, I'm glad you find it funny instead of saddening, at least. IRL incidents can send you in either way when you are writing fanfic and it reminds you of something XD Well, I can't tell you much without spoiling the next couple of chapters... so I just won't say anything about Ginny. Read and find out! However, I am glad you find the Luna with girlfriend-thing fitting, I felt so too. I don't think Luna cares about gender at all, so I guessed that in this story, it would just be fun to see her have a girlfriend... so she got one! Oh, she thought about saying something about "I'm just worried", so it wasn't much, which makes Hermione think that Ginny must be on to something if the spell doesn't even allow her to say that she is worried about something "Marcus" does. Maybe I should have made that a bit clearer... oh, well. At first, I thought about him borrowing a snake, but then I remembered that I had him shapeshift into a snake in the Prologue, so I thought it was a shame not to sue that again And nooo, never underestimate the Dark Lord. That is dangerous. *glances over shoulder* Haha, yes, I just loved that line in the HP-books and I felt like... well, I'm already borrowing the characthers, so I guess it doesn't hurt to throw in a line or two I hope people didn't call you out on the laughing at class! Oh, I'm glad you picked up on the similarity between this and an earlier chapter! Voldemort wanted to be inside Hermione as he told her how he felt about killing. So this is just one sign that they are rubbing off on each other. It's nothing big, but I'm glad someone noticed! As to how they plan to pull that off, you'll see in the next chapter! I'm glad you liked the chapter! And well, I've started to listen a little to wizard-rock and it's quite entertaining! However, I do think I like fanfic more! Thanks for reading and reviewing! m0nt: Merci eh... once again!
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Okay, here we go. Accidentally deleted all my review responses. Booo... Let's try again. Here are the review replies for chapter 28! GAH! WORK DAMINT! Okay. Now we shall see if this works when I've removed all the qouts. My answers are in blue Atlantean_Diva: You're doing a great job of showing Tom's growing feeling for Hermione. I like that he's trying to figure out what's important to him now versus what used to be. The progression the character is coming along nicely and at a good pace. It was interesting reading Hermione thoughts through Tom's eyes. I'm looking forward to the wedding. I have a feeling that it will be an interesting day, but I could be wrong. My poor Althea sounds like she's going through her terrible toes late. I wonder if she will cause a scene at the wedding. Thank you! I'm glad you like the progress of Tom's feelings. I try not to make him too lovey-dovey, but it's a hard line to balance. Oh, well. The wedding is tugging along nicely and you'll see the start of it in this coming chapter. I do think it is quite an interesting day, mehehehe. Aw, yes, Althea is having quite a rough phase. You'll see what she may or may not do soon enough! Kate: You have one heck of an imagination. So hard to come across a story so good and filled with creativity. I got so drawn to this story that i read it through my exam week. Hopefully I did well but who cares, I just cant wait for the next chapter. I really enjoyed this chapter seeing how it gave more insight into Voldemort and his emotions. It was a rather calming chapter. Not alot of drama but still touching. Love it! Thank you! My mum often said something similar to me when I was younger. However, she wasn't as impressed when I pretend someone else had destroyed her vase... oh, well. I do hope the story didn't get too much in the way of your exam. Hope you did well! Yes, the insight into Voldemort's mind and emotions are always very interesting and I'm glad you liked it. More drama to come in the upcoming chapter, so I hope you'll like that. Erin: Must have more!!! This story is so awesome!!! can't wait to read more. More is about to come, just as soon as I've replied all the reviews! Thanks for reading and reviewing sarah: Don't tell him I said so, but confused about emotions Voldemort totally cracks me up! What are these feelings I have inside? Emotions? Bah! Can't wait to see what happens with the little girl as well as what happens at the wedding! I do hope Voldemort didn't hear that... *glances around* hm, he seems to be some place else. I think you better hide! But yeah, he is fun when he is all confused and in touch with his emotions (or whatever you should call it). You'll see what happens with Althea and the wedding soon enough, I hope! Alassea Riddle: Ooh, Voldemort's beginning to have certain feelings, that he can't put a finger on. I actually like the part when he imagined Hermione's face on the woman's. I loved that they talked about his name. I was secretly hoping you would come up with that in one of the chapters and my wish came true. Yaaay! Oh, and: " “Because you know that I’ll make you regret it profoundly if you did.”" I can JUST imagine him doing just that. xD Yes, Voldemort are up for a quite confusing time, I think... lots of weird things going on inside that pretty head of his. I'm glad your wish came through! I thought one of those conversations was needed. HAHA! Fun, my beta Shan said the exact same thing. I had the picture of him so clear in my head when I wrote that, so I'm just happy it came through! Althea is beginning to be difficult. Poor girl, I wonder what's wrong. Maybe she's going to get jealous of the attention the baby is going to get when it comes out. I wouldn't be surprised. Yeah, she is going through one of those phases, I think. We'll see how she reacts to the new baby later! Aww, and Hermione is stressed. I feel so bad for her, but badder for Tom, poor baby. (which I didn't mean. You don't pity the Dark Lord without getting crucio'ed, avada'd and cast away on a bunch of rotten... something. (I know I'm jumping too much, sorry) When they started talking about their surnames and such I just couldn't stop thinking why they just couldn't combine them like so many, many others have done. And they did. *proudly announcing her cleverness and then tripping over her own ego* Ahem... sorry, yeah. Yes, Tom just don't know how to handle a stressed Hermione... but of course we don't pity him. We don't have a death wish after all. Haha, yes, I though the best way for them was some sort of combined last-name-thingy. Great minds think alike, I guess About the compliments, you can get as many as you want with your awesomeness, so here you go *gives Lady Miya a key to vault 953 in Gringotts big enough for both the compliments she gets and her ego that she needs to keep hidden.* LOL You're totally awesome and (as I always say) keep going on with this supermegafoxyawesomehot story Yours truly YAY! Lots and lots of compliments. I can collect them in a pool and begin taking baths in them. Tihihihihi. Btw, you HAVE to listen to this song by the Moaning Myrtles, it's hilarious (and too just short) xD HAHA, listened to the song. The things people make... Thanks for reading and reviewing! Mari: Another awesome update, you spoil us! Love these two together, and how much of a family they have become with Hermione even realizing that this is her family and she would do much to protect it. So cute the what to call Voldemort discussion. If she doesnt want to slip up I dont see why she wants to call him Tom, that's not much better. Wonder what happens to the children of shared flames and weather the new sprog is a boy or girl. Thank you for this made my weekend. What can I say, I like spoiling my readers. You say so nice thing to me when I do! Yes, I think both Hermione and Voldemort had come to terms with the fact that they are a family now. Or well, from Voldemort's point of view, I guess he sees them as just his, but... ah, that's him. Yeah, I think Hermione just figured that Tom is a bit more usual name, so she could say that she was thinking about "this friend at school" or something like that. You'll find out more about the secret of the Shared Flame in later chapters! m0nt: J'adore! Merci! I also got a lovely review from Sia the Alchemist on my old story Atlantis! oh merlin, another amazing story Miya! The sleep I lost was worth it although you should be required to write an apology note to my boss for my lack luster performance at work lately :-p I loved your Aluga character and the ending was just perfect. Although I kinda wish you'd hooked Severus up with a girlfriend or even a cat or something since he's about to lose his favorite mudblood to the dark lord AGAIN, I mean really, he has to be tired of that happening by now. Thanks for writing! Aw, thank you! I hope you have managed to catch up on your sleep now when I haven't updated for the past ten days. And I'd love to send your boss a note... "Sorry your employee was tired, but you see, I write stories and I just needed her to read the one and wouldn't let her go to sleep until she had finished. I hope you understand!" Do you think that would work? Hm, maybe not. Haha, Aluga was quite fun to write, but yeah, I feel sorry for Severus as well. Poor thing. At least I kept him alive this time! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
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Review replies for chapter 27 Alassea Riddle: Yes, fairies are annoying sometimes (but they make an interesting plot, that's for sure!). I'm glad you found the chapter informative! More is to come. Haha, and I think we can all imagine what Tom would do if someone else had made Hermione pregnant. I mean, he did kill the guy who had kissed Hermione so... He is getting quite attached to his family. And yes, I think too that in a relationship you either start to tie bonds to that other person, or it just doesn't work. And I'm always happy to hear that people are enjoying my work, so feel free to cover me in complimants! (Or something that sounds a little less egocentric... hm... can't think of anything. Oh, well) m0nt: Yes, Voldemort's POV is quite entertaining to write. You get to do things you would never do in real life. Haha! Yes, Althea is also very amusing to write about. So much fun. Thanks for reading and reviewing! Mari: Indeed it is! Yes, you can really say that Voldemort and Hermione are one of a kind-team. I'm glad you are enjoying the story so much! You'll find out more soon Manopeluda: Since you said you lurks around FF, I'll post this reply there too. I have to say that I feel a bit insulted if you really think I'm pro torture and rape. Why would I be? Just because I write from Voldemort's POV and he thinks it okay doesn't mean I do. It just means I try to have him canon. I also write him loving ice cream. Doesn't mean I do too (I don't. Really). Like I've said many times: if you don't like, don't read. Atlantean_Diva: Oh, I just did the same thing with Serp's "Somewhere In Time". So weird when that happens. But oh, well. I'm glad you found both chapter now! Well, the fairies made them forget all about who Althea's shadow friend really was and then they had nothing to worry about. Children have imaginary friends all the time. I hope I'll continue to manage to keep Tom to canon! I'm glad you like it so far! They don't know the gender yet, but I don't think we can trust the fairies too much... even though she isn't completely lying, bad influence is... well, bad. But yeah, why would they care about the baby, if you think about it? I think Morgana knew, but was only trying to make Hermione feel guilty or something like that. Yes, it seems dear old Tommy-boy is starting to care about his little daughter and fiancée. We'll see how the balance works in this chapter!! wavedancer: Glad you do! Updating now!
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Review replies for chapter 26 m0nt: Next chapter will be up shortly! I hope you'll enjoy it. Alassea Malfoy: Sorry you found the chapter too short. I know I have quite different length of them... It happened when I edited the story. Some chapters got pushed together, so some are extra long. Like the next one! Haha, well, I don't think Althea know what she was doing with the teddy bear, she was just trying to copy her parents, but that was boring so she stopped. You'll see what the fairy wants in the next chapter! Mari: Yes, they are rather cute together when they are trying to talk feelings and what not. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Yes, that shadow certainly is up for no good. You'll see how that goes soon! LexiaBlack: Hi! I'm glad you are enjoying the story with all it's peculiar characters and plot. It's fun to write, so I'm always happy to hear that others are enjoying it as well! And no, things rarely get boring with Voldemort, that's why it's so fun to write about him. Epilogue? What are you talking about now? Yes, the last chapter was definitely a step forwards for them. Hopefully they won't take too many steps backwards in the future... but you never know with them. Yes, fairy showing up again. You'll see how that works out in this coming chapter! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
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Review replies for chapter 25: Alassea Malfoy: Ah, yes, that's what happens when you edit. At first, I didn't have the Grindelwald-thing until chapter 25, but then, I added in into the chapter way back and forgot to remove it for chapter 25. But I've edit it now, thanks for pointing it out! Glad you like the story so much that you are rereading it! Here is something new for you to enjoy Atlantean_Diva: Well, I think JK once said that Muggle-borns probably had some magical relative somewhere down the line, and this way, that is possible. I mean, of all the people being born in that area the same time Hermione was... why would his magic jump to her? I don't know yet if I'll add some explanation of this in a later chapter, or if I'll leave that part open, but you'll find out more about having a Shared Flame later one. And well, I think that Soul Mates is something else than Shared Flame, but this won't be very important for the story, so I'll see if I go into it. Haha, thank you! More Tom-goodness in the coming chapter, hope you like it!
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Review replies for chapter 24. Alassea Malfoy: Yes, Draco is just an excuse. Voldemort killed him very dead in chapter... er... 20? Something like that. Hihi, and I just couldn't resist giving Voldemort and Harry a one-on-one chat together. It's too much fun. So of course this won't be the last one m0nt: Well, the nurse is the mind controller, but the dark haired girl in the shop was just a customer! The mind controller got to him later. As to who it was... well, I will not say now. But it won't be too many more chapters until you find out! Glad you are enjoying the plot and all. Mari: Thank you! I'm glad you like it. And yes, I try to have some different elements in the story. Well, I do think Voldemort realises that he cares for Hermione and the children quite a bit, but I think it's more for personal reasons than for some kind of weird nonsense like love (as he sees it). And well, you'll see more about Althea in the chapter after the next! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Atlantean_Diva: Glad you enjoyed the chapter! No, no one was meant to see anything... especially not Hermione and Voldemort, heheh. But they would really want to know who is after their baby. Yes, Tom-logic is a fine art. It's very amusing to write! I'm glad you like it. And well, Althea may just be in that age when kids are behaving like that... or it may be something else. Who knows. Glad you are enjoying the story! Thanks for reviewing.
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Review replies for chapter 23. m0nt: Oh, no, they don't know what gender the child is, they just called it "he" because it was better than "it". Hope you'll like the next chapter! Atlantean_Diva: Hehe, well, Hermione figures the real gift will be the "home-made" part she will put into his gift Yes, I thought it was about time Hermione acted a little motherly. She have started to do that a lot, but it just doesn't really show in the fic because I'm more interested in writing the smut.. Aw! Thank you, I'm glad you like Althea. I have had rather mixed feelings about her, but she can be rather fun sometimes. Wiiih! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Alassea Malfoy: No, I think Ron will always have a soft spot for Hermione. But they are funny when they argue! Glad you enjoyed the chapter! sarahdaye9: Yes, they were very cute in the last chapter! And I just had to have a scene with Hermione and Althea just being cute and childish. Oh, Ron... dear old Ron. Don't know what to do with him... except I do. Because I've written it. MEHEHEHEHEHEH! mrequecky: Haha, yes, I think Tom is a rather strict father... but if Althea takes after him at all, that is not going to matter much! Glad you liked the final smut scene! I found it amusing too.
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Review replies for chapter 22 Laura: Thank you! I'm glad you are enjoying it so much. It's fun to have Hermione pregnant again. I've never written a story where she got pregnant twice. And I'm glad you like Voldemort, he is a tricky one, that's for sure Atlantean_Diva: You are most welcome. They are very fun to write! And yes, I think Tom will be in for quite a surprise when Althea grows up... neither of her parents are a follower, after all. And about Ginny's nervousness... well, that are just something that will come up later! m0nt: Yay! IrishPhantom: Yes, Voldemort is weird that way But you'll find out later what he is up to! Oh, must have missed that. Glad you are enjoying the story, though!!! AliceMyra Spencer: Glad you like it and the next one will be up now! Alassea Malfoy: I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! The Tom and Althea chats are among the funniest to write XD You can just take it anywhere you want. Children always asks so funny questions. Well, you didn't miss anything, but more about what Ginny may or may not suspect will become clearer in later chapters! Yeah, there are some parts of Hermione's and Voldemort's relationship that are just very sad. At least from Hermione's point of view. We'll see how she manage to deal with it later on! Thanks for reading and reviewing!! mrequecky: I'm glad you are enjoying it! I find the characters very fun to write as well!
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Review responses for chapter 21: m0nt: Glad you liked it! Voldemort is always logical IrishPhantom: Neither did Hermione see that proposal coming! And well... Voldemort does like to show people who he owns. He is like a dog with a lamp post! (Hides sentence from a certain Dark Lord). Yees, Nerys is a good girl! Glad you like it, but it will be quite some time before we get to see if the children will turn out as Hermione or Voldemort! mekom: Haha, actually, Hermione is glad that he wants to keep the child, because she is starting to realise that she wants as well. But of course she will be worried about what sort of plan Voldemort has with it... And you'll see how the fairies responses! AliceMyra Spencer: Haha, well, I think he will be cured from his wish to have more children when he has been sleepless a few nights with this one! And I know what it's going to be, but I'm not telling Alassea Malfoy: Yes, Voldemort does like his teasing as much as he likes his killing and fucking XD And you'll see how Hermione responses to the quote in the next chapter!
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Okay, more smut criticism, then! Well, I think it's mostly me who is at fault. I just don't find it interesting to begin with when only the man is being pleasured (and I know there are women who get aroused by giving blow jobs, but I'm not one of them, so... yeah, not my cup of tea), and when I don't find it interesting, it all becomes too long. But the intro and him ordering her to touch herself, that was hot, so no need to change any of that. And as always, it's funny when they tease each other (little thing, big mouth). But after that, it just becomes too much "she did that, then that, then that" and when it's something I find boring to begin with, all that just becomes redundant. The only part that I find fun there, is Hermione feeling all smug and powerful when she does it, so that part wouldn't have been wrong to dwell in a bit more. Maybe have her thinking some sort of smugness (as she does so many other time) over her having power over Mr Always-In-Control. But as I said, that would mostly be for my benefit. I do think many other liked that scene, and there is nothing wrong with it. I would just enjoy it more if it where more smug comments and more focus on Hermione's pleasure. So.... yeah, that was my though, basically!
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Review replies to chapter 20. IrishPhantom: Haha, I don't know if he is caring or just possessive, but the nicer side of it will probalby not last long, no... Hahaha, and yeah, I was very happy to see Nerys' update as well! And thank you, I won't finish Shared Flame anytime soon. We are maaaaybe half-way through. Maybe... oh, well, glad you like it and I hope you'll enjoy the next! Atlantean_Diva: Yeah, Tom is the definition of manipulative, I think. And you'll see some closer-tying in this coming chapter, so I hope you enjoy it! And yes, this story will be my longest. I'm not really done yet, but I've been writing over 400 pages. And there will be a little Althea in the next chapter, so I hope you'll enjoy that as well! Thanks for reviewing!! iheartskittles: Of course she does. I just couldn't resist making her think that And you are welcome! New update will come soon! AliceMyra Spencer: Yeah, Voldemort is not leaving her any time soon... and I think you can call Hermione an addiction to him. And he is not the kind of addict to just ask for help and fight it. At least not if you look at his history. He seem to rejoice in his addictions. Meheheh. Alassea Malfoy: Glad you enjoyed it! And yeah, they really are starting to act like an old married couple. I dread to see what they will be like if they become an old married couple! mrequecky: Haha, I think he is as possessive as you can get, actually. But that's just his cup of tea!