LucienLene
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I'm here as well, Wonder what this place is?
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Fandom: Jak and Daxter
Name of character: Xel (Said Zel)
Race of character: Human (With elf's ears If some one knows the actual answer to what race Jak is since Xel is of the same I would greatly appreciate knowing)
Age of character: 17 -18
Height of character: 5' 7'
Weight of character: 178
Brief background of character: Son of Mar (Jak) unknown to every one of where he came from. As far as every one is concerned he was born into servitude as an arena fighter in Spargus. Even at a young age he was able to handle his own in combat against the bigger groups of arena thugs. At the age of 17 he was finally able to buy his way from the arena but it was his way of life so now he competes as a free lance.
Character's position or job: Gladiator
Strengths/Skills: Eco (Energy) Control, Can call upon his elements to make him stronger, transform himself and more things that I have yet to think about.
Are these skills typical of the fandom? If not, why?: Not really the thoughts of controlling energy go waaay back. However Eco is the energy of what's around you so being able to whip up his own sand storm in a desert is a good thing being able to walk thought it because of the level of control he has is better.
Weaknesses/Bad habits: He is a guy...Perv...nothing really other then the usual vices.
Distinctive features, if any: The Green Yellow hair that he shares with his father
Are these features unique in the fandom? If so, why?: Yes Jak is known for his ears and his hair color.
Connections to canon characters (if any): He is the Son of Mar...
How does your character get on with those around him/her?: Fairly well because he has learned respect from the arena
What does the other characters think of your character when they met her/him?:He is just another kid on the street...till they get to know him.
Well comments, ideas...share please
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The general idea is a fantasy world in which 4 (or more) races collide. So yeah thats the general idea. Still in planning...I would hate for this to be a two man thing, but most good ones start out as two man ideas. Either way tell me what you think any suggestions what we can add stuff like that...the reason I was wondering if this could turn into an external forum RP was because There we would have the flexibility to create different area's with in each realm.
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Yeah this was somthing I used to more or less LARP in school with a few buds during study hall
The general premesis is that there are three races Vamps, Fairy's and Elves who all have their own relm but are constantly at war with one an other.
I was wondering if any one would be interested in taking this online in the RP section of the forum. Maybe adding a few races and other things. Right now its just an idea and i'm looking for a consensus before I sit down to the world creation process.
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Pen Name: Lucien Lene
Story Link: Son of Mar
Type of Fic: FlashFic
Rating: Adult
Fandom: Jak and Daxter
Pairing: N/A
Warnings: No Sex, OC, WIP, Challenge Fic
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Title says it all, I'm looking for some one who wants to read it over see what they think how it can be improved, give pointers and all that hoopla. More or less a friend. Reply here or on my inbox
Thanks,
-Lucien
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All things considered I think this is turning out to be rather well for a "New" writer around here. The story is not really all that complex its the story of two lovers who in age are 25 years apart. The female being a teacher and the male being a student. They are both of consensual age so its not illegal just frowned upon.Likely a story told billions of times now, but its what came to mind when I started. I only have the first chapter done so far and any one willing to Beta for me please PM me here. Reviews comments data requests can go here or to my inbox. I look forward to hearing from you
Here is the link to Chapter one (Work in progress as it is):
25 years of Separation: Chapter 1
Thanks for your time,
-Lucien
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Kept up his flirting routine either way he was just having fun, although willing he was still reserved as he skimmed around the ocean with the women at his side. He might not be immortal but due to his works in literature he was in a way embossed in a dark corner of history.
"Enjoying your vacation?" he asked after the women had cought up to him. He had to smirk at her attempt of trying to imitate him in flight. that was almost impossible.
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Smiled to wench as he kept his own pace to hers "We do have quite a bit of fun but you need to have fun every now and then to prove you are alive.." he said with a smile. "Very impressive move but can you do this?" he asked as he jetted forward and arched into a loop and coming out of it he started to barrel roll before he fliped himself over and just hovered in the air waiting. He had not Forgotten vale one they were united again he smiled to the elf
"Good quality's if you ask me, but I would not leave her either to be honest.." he said to the elf but adding the flirt for Wench
He then lowered himself into a glide near the surface of the ocean so he could skim his hand over it. "So pretty.."
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Extended his wings and took off into the air with a smile on his face...it was a liberating feeling to be able to take flight when he wanted and of his own power. He started Whooping and In the air and smiled down as he dive bombed himself right next to wench
"Why Ello Elo how are you this day?" he asked politely as he looked at the two
"I mean flight is such a nice thing.." he said as he used his wings to hover for a bit.
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Looked at the server and smiled "I will be alright for the moment..." he said as he ducked further into the tub and letting his wings limp off to his sides out of the water for who ever to play with them. He stayed in the tub for a while and moved when he needed to, he also played more music for all who wanted to enjoy it.. (Any one wants me in particular since I'm leaving after this post send it to me in PM and we can figure out how to continue.Thanks:)
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Looked over to Wench and smiled "Got a bit on your hands?" he asked. Now feeling much more relaxed then before. "I mean I could be wrong in general, guess its not really much my business" he said as one of his wings came out of the water and flicked some water off. "K is it, its a vacation lighten up and if you need some one to hang out with I'm here...after all I have just been drifting from place to place picking up groups as I go..." he said as he took a hit of his drink. After a few more minutes of conversation he got up and picked up the guitar and started playing something relaxing while they talked. He had hoped his music helped ease some of the tension.
After a moment he turned his attention to Apollo and smiled to her "I see, I'm trying to stick to the opposite sex but I never really know things happen in the heat of a moment..." he said wisely. Yeah he had a voice after all. He stretched a wing out to her and smiled knowing she was wondering about them...after all they were one of his draws next to his eyes. "Dont to anything to crazy...they are really receptive.." The man explained as he continued to play
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Smiled to the women as she walked out himself soon to follow he traded the lute for a six string and walked out to the hot tub and smiled to every one present and he started playing Layla by Eric Clapton. He even adding the lyrics for fun, after a few songs of the same nature he put the guitar down and got into the tub...the hot water feeling even more on his wings due to the sensitivity of them.
"So how is every one enjoying the party? he asked finally after a brief fit of silence during his proformace. He waited to order a whisky to keep himself at the buzz from his music. "I'm starting to think I should have brought some one with me, but its alright less competiton then.." he joked. as he started to relax.
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Was awake in his room just lazing around for a bit as he looked around he spoted his old Lute and picked it up to play a tune. He was a bard after all since it was a step to becoming an RDD. "Wonder if any one will be listning?" he asked himelf as he played with most of his soul. He was a rather artistic one for who he was at least. After a while he moved back to his bed and started to write, a light erotica in his journal nothing to special though. -Kinda lame but it will do for now.-
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Took the seat offered to him as he got his bottle and smiled "I regret that I missed it..." he said as he looked the women over "Lots of guests here...I opted to come alone for god knows what reason.." he said as he took a drink of the beverage, all the while indulging in his conversation. he hushed up for a moment after that. For some reason he felt awkward again.
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Looked at the man before him and nodded "Mead if we have any..." he shot a glance at the women and gave her a kind nod as he stood up. "Thank you sir..." he said as he walked toward the women he was thankful for some one to break the ice for him at least. "Hello Madam.." he said in a gentilmenly manor "Allow me to Introduce my self...I am Lucien, and who may I ask are you?" he said fluently. as he waited for his drink
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Woke up from his slumber later on that day. After getting his self together he lazily walked out into the main area of the house and looked around "More people then I remember..." he said quietly to himself as he eyed up the sofa and went to take a seat. His wings again warped protectively around him. not so much out of fear as much as comfort. Feeling a little awkward he kept to himself and looked on at the other guests all enjoying them selves. He too started to get into that mood even though he seemed the loner.
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Walked into the beach house and got himself checked into room three, he was there alone unfortunatly but maybe by the end of it all that would change. either way he had extra room if some one needed it. Being an RDD Lucien looked strong he could very well back his looks up. A basic description being long mid back length hair that meets the wings on his back forming a halo around his face. a muscular build was something to be desired. And something he had plenty of. Over all his personality was respectful but fierce if need be.
As he walked to his room he looked around the house it had a nice feel to it very home like. "I like this place...its respectable.." he said quietly as he unlocked the door to his room to plop down on the bed for a moment. He looked out the window as the ocean opened up to him. The salt smell in the air and the hustle and bustle of the other people in the house made it seem to come alive. "This will be fun.." he said quietly before he wraped one wing around his body and feel gently asleep the door to his room was cracked open still.
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I'll take room 3 if no one has dibs on it.
Should be fun.
Keep the Mystery Forum or what?
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Keep it, its adds the elitist effect for being able to access the uber secret forum of awesome. Personally I think the Key needs to be more then 100pts, but that's just me. Then again had someone (Not saying to protect the innocent/ you know who you are and you have my gratitude) not helped me out I would not have been in here for another month, since when I usually get on I hit the procrastination station and that's about it.