autumntears7
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um well it still in my page i can still get to it it still hidden
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my naruto stories are still gone
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i fixed it thanks for that how to i contact the right person?
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Destiny club - original
When a genius heart breaks and Not so innocent in naruto
what is the name of the story and where is it located? Without that information, we can't tell you what the issue is. -
i fixed my disclaimer now one more of my story is gone what do you want me to say!!!!!
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okay i get it now. um could i get them back to fix it
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cool that be good i like to start drawing
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yeh that be great except i might need a few days to do this - and also i seem to have to solve my disclaimer probs
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Actually, I tend to ignore these, or outright delete them from here. They have not a thing to do with the clean up.
However, I do know the issue with this one. You need to fix your disclaimer, more than likely. It's not deleted, but hidden. Now, if you give me the subdomain, I can actually tell you what the problem is exactly.
It in original also my naruto one - not so innocent is also hidden - i really can't find anything else to fix i fix the disclaimer twice already!
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I won´t call it a challenge, because it´s a bit huge project for a one-shot, but if anybody will be inspirated ...
A background: Seedy, dark, chilly modern world. Urban cities and load of hi-tech innovations.
History: Two races and the third is caught in the middle of their battle. Long time ago lycans lost the battle with vampires, bacause of weakness of their leader and became their slaves. Nowdays, because of inner conflict, vampires lose their upper hand and lycans finally have a chance to gain freedom and independence.
Structure of both societies:
Vampires-there were clans, but nowdays they are living in houses, which associate vampires with the same believes and values, but different abilities and age (it´s kind of mafia). The whole society is ruled by the Court. Members of the Court are masters of the houses with the eldests vampire in the head of teh Court (it means: the „firstborn" vampire, kind of „vampire´s father"). There are also „citizens" who don´t belong to any kind of „family" and military. There is also a complicated codex, with many acts.
Lycans-their society is more subverted. They are living in gangs, but are still abide by their own rules. They have hidden but strong military and great spies. The may not be sleek and cunning like vampires, but they have a great stamina, they are fierce in battle, patient and discreet.
Plot:
The whole modern war is described from the point of view of a young vampire, who by coincidence got caught in the middle of this madness. In fact, the story isn´t about vampires or lycans or humans, being one of them is just a part of a character personality, lifestyle, but nothing more. It´s also not about magic, because there shouldn´t be any magic at all or extra supernatural skills. The story places emphasis on a psychological aspects. It´s about fighting for something that we dearly believe in, growing up, seeing bad things in good and good in bad. There´s also love (not only of a sexual kind), friendship, but zhey are a part of the whole complex. Story is (or should be) full of unexpected situations and desicions, that will keep reader interested to stay tuned-up till the end (which will stay opened).
I could give more detailed informations and character´s bios, if someone is interested.
DAMN i would do this if it wasn't a one shot
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i mean it my story and it gone from my files
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Um i dont know it is?
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sure - my story about a sixteen year old hacker is hard to get
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I got the story planned out - but i just like to have someone look over the grammar and spelling mistakes - and i just wanted to toss the idea around with someone as to if it would work or not.
It for when a genius heart break
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i just think if i write with someone - or its their story they could tell me the discriptions of the characters - and i weave it into a scene as long as i get the sentiment right - i don't care what story it is - it like trying to learn by practise - im okay with dark ones but i like to learn the more sweet emotional and comfort type - basically i want to write all types of scenes
not the whole story but
here my email : autumntears7@gmail.com
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Title: Shut Up and Drive
Which one did you want to be review? I would like to try this exchange review thing
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I'm sorry about the cliff hanger in second part - it a form of habit i just have not broken out of. Forgive me.
Thanks to every one that voted - it makes me want to try hard.
If anyone want to chat or discussed about the story go right ahead
i think here okay to do it
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Clover Reef- yep true form and i think i will make it in detail so you could picture it in your mind
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To ShikaChouFan4Life : i got some more up my sleeve but had to update the rest first - warning just make sure you read the warning cos this will get dark real quick
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I FOUND THE STORY
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Thank you for just that one review Havoc Tellenoi i soooo needed it. I mean im sooo down with my writing these days
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Hi,
I would like to get my writing mojo back. I writing lots but it doesn't seem to fit right.
I just can't come up with something i find passionate about writing - i can't think of descriptions, my imaginary sex scenes drizzle instead of sizzle.
I just want to use my combined story telling to tell a damn good story.
Some thing similar to my School of Rape, my dark torture and into the night (naruto). If anyone had read those stories could you help with tips for similar story line. Or maybe what you like about them...i just need to get the combo
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Would you know any beta willing to help me out?
i can't understand what is wrong
in Archive Tech Support
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i fixed it!! it was still there when i fixed it! Forget it. it gone. Sorry that was beyond a joke - i had it fixed!!! I guess it useless now.