[JayDee's Review Reply Thread (Games)]

Review for Struck Down and Sodomised, the Mortal Kombat 3 story which assumes Sheeva had a cock, but also, and very unlikely, that Stryker has balls.

Thank you for your review! It's always good when a PWP fic with a specific kink finds a reader with that kink, totally makes it look like a much better story for the reader Yeah, I guess it is a little short, but it's still the longest thing I've finished in ages I don't know that I'll get a sequel done, but most times in the past when I've said I won't, I end up doing one. I kind've like the idea of him getting spit roasted by Sheeva and Sindel, after all.

I've read it as well, and I liked it. Sheeva, submission and sodomy, hard to go wrong, really.

You managed to hit most of my buttons so naturally I'm one those people to whom the story seems much better, too.

You already acknowledged that it's a bit short, so there's not much point in me remarking upon that, but, let's say... about 10-15% more detail would have been great!

Good title, too - does exactly what it says on the tin.

That's about it, I guess.

[Legen of Zelda-story; Link in the gerudo fortress]

I'm looking for a story about how Link goes to the Gerudo Valley only to get captured by one of them and forced to become her slave. It ends with something along the lines of the hero even forgetting who he is.

I THINK the story was called "Desert's trap", though I can't remember the name of the author I'm afraid. When I looked through Firefox's history I found this link http://games.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600084240 if it's of any use.

It's possible that I'm mistaken about the title, in which case I understand if it's very difficult to help me out, but I thought I'd throw it out there and try my luck.