[Laiko's reviews/replies for all stories]

I'm glad that my pokes help. Now that you mention it, Seshimora not loving Kato is great considering that writers usually go for the guy loving the other in a romantic way eventually. I can see Seshimora showing Kato platonic love in the sense that you are the bearer of my children. It'd be interesting just to read in a one-shot a time line of instances in Kato, Noberu and Seshimora's lives before they pass away and leave the throne to their children. O.o And of course, I'd like to know if Seshimora will choose to have a mistress where the two share romantic love, or was that not allowed in Kitsurin customs? LOL Time for a review. *runs off to re-read Twin Thrones*

SunaoTsuji: I admit it. I've had this on my hard drive for a while and I didn't want to actually think about how I wanted the sequence of events to play out. I got lazy. Your little pokes are appreciated. I'm easily distracted. I know I've said this before, but I really am ADD.

I think I've established Seshimora does not love Kato. He is not interested in same sex relationships. Like Kato, he will do what is expected of him. When I originally planned this story, this is where it originally ended it. I realized that the build up to Kato's pregnancy was slow and unsatisfying to the reader if I ended it here, so I won't

[Valley of the Kept]

Well, the story's complete and I feel that I've rushed it. So I'm going to go back and edit all three chapters to smooth out the bumps and wrinkles.

[Sensual Seductions]

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@yaoilovers

Yea. I started out kinda short but it seemed right when I first wrote the first chapter to this story. I feel though that it's a bit rushed so I might even edit this chapter before continuing onto the second chapter. Then again I don't want to butcher this first chapter either because it seems off. Kind of like writing it the way it really sounds gives a better perspective from the character than trying to fix it too much and end up writing the story all wrong. Still, I'm gald that you like it so far.

@kirjava01

I'm glad to know that you like how it's going. I'm hoping to add more character and depth to the next chapter so that I can build the story more. Do check back for any new updates.

[Sensual Seductions]

This is my fourth story up at AFF. I was rummaging around in one of my hard drives and found it sitting there with no one to read it. Still on chapter one but I can feeling the rest of it brewing inside of me. Hopefully I'll have this one and the rest of the other chapters for my other stories up by Valentines.

Ahem. Anyways, this thread is for -refers to Topic Descriptions- yeah, and as the other threads to my stories, flames will be read, laughed at and then deleted. At the bottom will be a link to my story and the summary. (I've found that there's not enough room for a LONG summary so the short version is at AFF. Here's the long one.)

Sensual Seductions Summary

Seduction at it's sweetest. When straight jacket Maro catches the attention of many supernatural beings, it makes it hard to live as normal a life as possible. But when he catches the eyes of one particular vampire, should he deny his desires it when he craves it so? Playboy Ethan is known for his voracious exploits throughout the supernatural world. What should Ethan do when his new catch isn't what he seems and every other Supes that seem to care wants a taste of the catch?

Sensual Seductions by SunaoTsuji

[Valley of the Kept]

Okay, third story up since it's been bugging me insistently to be written and I might add chapters later? Maybe 2 more chapters? This is gonna be real short and I'm not sure if I will ever go beyond that.

Anyways, this thread is for -refers to Topic Descriptions- yeah, and as the other threads to my stories, flames will be read, laughed at and then deleted. At the bottom will be a link to my story and I guess I should add a summary?? Oh well, here goes.

Valley of the Kept summary: Haunted for years, vampires gone missing, a mission sends him home.

Valley of the Kept by SunaoTsuji

[Count To Infinity]

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["conception"]

OOOOO~ You've really got me there with your summary. Now I'm going to go and read your story and get back to you when I'm done. Nice way of catching my attention.

[First Things First...]

Hello! Sorry I'm new to the forum. Ahem!

Anyways, my stories start off from dreams that I have. And for some unknown reason (maybe my desire to continue the dream ) I continue where the dream got left off. I've got plenty of stories that I've been working on for the last 11 years.

I still got them all and they're all incomplete due to the fact that I while fleshing out one story idea, another pops up from the original. The best way to lose your track of mind is to spend too much time fleshing out the second story that you forget you had the first one at the bottom of your disarrayed room.

Which reminds me of a story I had outlined 6 years back with characters and plots waiting to be fleshed out. -shrugs- And that reminds me of a story that needs to be put on paper or something so I don't lose it in a few. Ah~ the joy of writing.

[To A Journey's End]

Hi Readers! I've decided to take advantage of this forum so that we (authors & reviewers) can discuss more about my [To A Journey's End.] And for those who are at the forum and want to know more about my story Dark Moon, you can stop by AFF via the link (To A Journey's End) at the bottom of this initial post.

This thread will only be used for discussions of [To A Journey's End.] Reviews and critique are welcomed. All flames will be read, laughed at and then deleted. For any personal inquires questions and such that should not be posted along with the discussion of [To A Journey's End], please contact me via PM on this forum.

I haven't even started yet on chapter three and I'm still working on chapter two for [Dark Moon] and I hopefully I'll get chapter three posted at AFF sometime before the month is over. Nothing much but I can see a third story coming to mind......... -types away- Otherwise, I'll see you guys on the other side of AFF!

To A Journey's End by SunaoTsuji

[Dark Moon]

Hi Readers! I've decided to take advantage of this forum so that we (authors & reviewers) can discuss more about my [Dark Moon.] And for those who are at the forum and want to know more about my story [Dark Moon], you can stop by AFF via the link (Dark Moon) at the bottom of this initial post.

This thread will only be used for discussions of [Dark Moon.] Reviews and critique are welcomed. All flames will be read, laughed at and then deleted. For any personal inquires questions and such that should not be posted along with the discussion of [Dark Moon], please contact me via PM on this forum.

So far chapter one is up and I'm still in the middle of working on chapter two. Some minor details that needs to be worked out but as soon as I'm done with that then chapter two will be posted. Otherwise, I'll see you guys on the other side of AFF!

Dark Moon by SunaoTsuji