XD!!!!
These are all good questions. . But poor Nicholas...Matt is getting all the love, haha. In the middle of the next chapter...which is loooooooooooong BTW. But I can see the light at the end of the tunnel (*reaches toward the light...that sweet Matt radiating light *wink). How will Andy get out of this fix?....hmmm.... I know! I know! And you will too soon, hehe.
Anyway, jokes aside, I don't see a Nicholas/Matt confrontation in this chapter...or a hobgoblin Queen...(but...*makes quick mental note and stores for later use ;P). And Poor Jesse! In so few pages and such a life of misery! (Adds a note to slap a happy face on him at some point...) Right now he doesn't have much depth as a character, does he? That will change as the story developes and Andy gets to know him better.
Hope you keep reading! XD
---->Thanks so much for your offer to proof the chapters. The grammatical mistakes are probably an irritation, and I apologize. In my process I write the chapter roughly, add and take away segments and do a quick edit. For as long as it takes me to get one out there, when its done I can't wait to get it up, which is why all my betas get mad at me when I send it to them to edit and then post it anyway. This version is still pretty rough. When it is finished I will go over it again from the beginning with fresh eyes and get all those pesky mistakes. Who knows? Maybe I'll try submitting it to a publishing company if readers think its good enough, haha.