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Nah, too predictable...besides I made need someone to shoot in book three

Thanks, its nice to know someone likes the story, I know it's a biy rough with typos sometimes but everyone keeps telling me they would rather have rapid posts then perfect pollish...so... :shrug:

I agree it is interesting to see Legion's growth and interaction with the others, but we need more Jeeves as his developement seems to have been overshadowed. Book 3? I thought that you said there would be blood letting and bodies falling before that to cut down on the # of characters in Book 3. Anyways it was fun even if I did skip the nasty ol' sex stuff being the innocent that I am. Well not so innocent but with my age & health I need excitement & adventure more.

Actually loving the character development with Pell & Simpkins. Always nice to see the nerd get the hot girl. So many characters, so little time. At least it's quality time. Still waiting on the interrogation of faux David. Should be interesting. Thanks for having Gerald stand up to Joanne and the back and forth between Legion and Carol and company was very cool! Nice chapter!

Yeah, I'm fleshing them out, They'll be major characters in the next book, although they still have a fun scene or two or six...left in this story.

THANK YOU. Really is very nice to have another chapter with out a long wait. Very nice chapter. Explains some things and leaves a few more dangling. Very nice hanger at the end that was resolved in the chapter. Though the air alarm, while silenced, has NOT been dealt with. Scrubbers can only do so much without being regenerated. Come on thin ice! Will be interesting to see where you take the FBI folks. Seems they have seen enough to realize they are not dealing with some kook. B

So.. any guesses on why Dad's so against it? I know we'll find out when the new Chapter's released... but let's toss out some ideas. I'm thinking maybe his dad had something going on with his sister or the like..... Might be why we really haven't heard much about grandparents.. especially around Christmas.

Um...I seem to have fallen aslep writing...I woke up with like 68 pages of kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk... So there will be a slight delay in chapter 42...:SIGH: