thomcats

My Original story “The All Or Nothing Game” would need a grammar and spelling check. The story is already posted, and prior to this, I have read and re-read the material several times. Yet, I don’t think that this is enough and I feel that there are still errors in the text. I would be very happy to have a fresh pair of eyes to look at it. Thanks in advance thomcats

Author: thomcats Title: THE CARNIVAL SAGA Summary: If Sarah thinks that she ended up with a victory over Jareth at the time she saved her little brother Toby from the Goblin King, it will soon dawn upon her that she has greatly miscalculated Jareth’s capability of scheming and manipulation. Above all, she has forgotten to calculate with his capacity for waiting. After all, he has waited for his moment to come for several hundreds of years…. Before she knows it, Sarah is again involved in a fierce battle with Jareth but this time it concerns her own soul and not that of her brother. Who will win this contest at last? I think that even after reading the stories, one will not be entirely sure….. Feedback: Yes, please Fandom: Labyrinth – the movie Pairing: Jareth/Sarah URL: http://movies.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600091535 In the wake of the big reconstruction and “re-wamping” of this site, I’ve had to re-edit my stories too. One should really do that from time to time. It gives a good perspective in fact. I came to realise that I still love them very much, and that is a good start. I’ve taken care to brush up the language and the grammar to get away from naughty spelling errors and cumbersome passages and I’ve also made the paragraphs more dynamic, all for easier and more eventful reading - hopefully. Incidentally, I do write in British English, I always have. It is not my native language but the one I’ve used to write in from the very start. And I hope that you will bear with me in this matter and that it won’t bother you too much. This is an age old story really; one that has been around the world for thousands of years already in different guises. Mine happens to be set within the Labyrinth movie frame work. But it is still a story of Gothic romance and sizzling hot love between a man and a woman. If this is an unbeatable combination for you, I hope that you will come and read my story.

Just wanted to say BIG THANK YOU!!

I don't get the confirmation email. I followed the "walk-through" and was reported being successfull and that a confirmation email would be sent to me. None has come so far - I have checked SPAM too - and when I try again to login, I get the message that I'm not registered any more. Feel very confused now and I don't know what to do. Kindest regards thomcats