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Hello darlings!

I am Madame Douleur, formerly Hentai Bunny and I'm pleased to make your acquaintance. I’ve been on the site for quite some now (almost 10 years, gasp!, although most of those years absent) and recently picked up the proverbial pen, or keyboard, to spin the tales once again of Grace, lately of Innocence Lost.

I began writing it sometime ago, then life interjected and I was submitted to many years of change and growth. I have finally come to a point where Grace and I have become reacquainted, thus the reemergence of Innocence Lost.

For those of you who do not know the story, the lovely Grace is kidnapped by a beautiful southern belle by the name of Mistress Juliana. She is the CEO of Villa Douleur, a highly profitable sex slave enterprise. Innocence Lost will follow Grace as she is tortured, humiliated and generally fucked senseless as an Alpha slave.

Grace is a manifestation of my darker desires, some that I feel I cannot divulge in real life. So Grace will take those nipple clamps, doggy cocks, electricity, etc on my behalf. And while I enjoy writing the story, I am always willing to hear suggestions for future humiliation and torture for Grace to endure, hence this forum topic (as well as shameless promotion *blows kiss*).

Please don’t be shy, little can/will offend me.

Et voila, the link madams and monsieur:

http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600107051

I look forward to hearing from you!

*hugs and kisses*

- Madame Douleur

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Since I was not allowed to post this via Innocence Lost intself, here once again is the list of the main characters, their stories and the hierarchy of slaves. Also included is a brief description of the Villa.

Hierarchy of Villa Douleur

Mistress Juliana – Madam of the entire household and CEO of Villa Douleur. She is a Mistress of repute, in her long career she encountered only the richest, the most powerful men and women of the world. She successfully created a thriving sex trade enterprise and her deep pockets (and the promise of keeping her powerful clientele identities confidential) ensure that her kidnapping and torture crimes never come to light. She is from the New Orleans and woman of exquisite yet sadistic taste. Her quarters are on the 5th floor of the Villa and takes up a majority of the floor. She has her own apartment with a large veranda, hot tub and personal gym.

Corbin – Manservant, Bodyguard and Kidnapper. Corbin attends to Mistress Juliana’s needs as her muscle. He helps keep the order in the Villa when slaves require punishing and sometimes chooses the girls who are to be kidnapped. He is very soft spoken yet has no qualms reminding the girls who he answers to and from time to time he will be rewarded with some of the training. He is tall, with large muscles and from Detroit. Corbin has a room on the 5th floor but it is a very small apartment and has access to Mistress Juliana’s room at all times yet he will never enter without permission.

Slaves

Tsumi – Omega Slave. She is the high favourite of Mistress Juliana and generally she is her personal slave. She helps in the training and the running of the household. She has the largest room on the 4th floor at the foot of the stairs leading towards Mistress Juliana’s room. All the slaves on the 4th floor have apartments with balconies. There is also a common room where the girls can socialise together. The Omega Slave can change at any time and is a coveted position. Her price is the highest with the clientele and she gets the best treatment.

Grace – New Alpha Slave. Recently kidnapped virgin. All new girls generally start out on the Alpha Floor until Mistress Juliana decides if they are to remain Alphas or switch floors to either Beta, Gamma, Delta, or Epsilon. Alphas are the most expensive in the house, under the Omega.

Ami and Yumi – Alpha Slaves. Japanese twin sisters. Generally the troublemakers of the floor and are punished the most. They share a room on the 4th floor.

Sophia – Alpha Slave. She is a Latin beauty and a daughter of a Spanish noble who was in debt with Mistress Juliana and paid with his only daughter. She has a room on the 4th floor.

Brianna – Alpha Slave. A Scottish maid who worked in Balmoral Castle and was kidnapped after Mistress Juliana spent the evening with an English Prince and Brianna caught her fancy. She has a room on the 4th floor.

Rosette – Alpha Slave. She is a former Nun from a very isolated Catholic community in the American South. She has a room on the 4th floor.

Other Slaves

Beta Slaves – 3rd floor. They have small apartments with no balconies and a smaller common room. They are considered the more cost effective, with their own private rooms and personal sex equipment and are reserved for the rich but not filthy rich.

Gamma Slaves – 2nd floor. They are the cheapest of the high end slaves. They only have their own bedrooms and share a common room and kitchen with several common bathrooms. They also have their own equipment.

Delta Slaves – 1st Basement. They are the slaves who have no say in what or who they do. They are for those of the clientele who have the worst of the fetishes. They are only exempted from BM Duty (Scat play) and Bestiality (All slaves can be asked to perform Bestiality and any other fetish, however Mistress Juliana must veto this beforehand. However, the Alphas will not generally participate in BM Duty). They share two to a bedroom and have a common room, kitchen and two bathrooms. There are a few lavish bedrooms for servicing the clientele and all equipment is shared.

Epsilon – 2nd Basement. Cheapest of the slaves. These slaves are the only slaves who are on BM and Bestiality Duty at all times. They are also the cooks, maids and servants of the Villa. They share a large common bedroom with a common room and kitchen and one bathroom. There are several lavish bedrooms for the servicing of clientele and all equipment is shared.

Villa Douleur

The vast mansion sits on a huge plot of land. Mistress Juliana has the most advanced security and anti-detection systems in the world, courtesy of the governmental clientele from the most powerful countries in the world. There house itself is surrounded by a vast forest and bordered by electrified fences, keeping the girls in and intruders out. There are several guards on duty at on the grounds and there is a helicopter pad on site.

The Villa – Villa Douleur is homage to the old New Orleans homes of the rich and powerful of the past. It boasts several wings to accommodate the large number of slaves housed within and is decorated with winding porches and imposing pillars. It is of traditional design yet it is invisible from radar or satellite, as it is fitted with the most high tech stealth technology.

The Grounds – The outdoor portion of the villa offers the luxuries of any country club or spa. There are tennis courts, pools, saunas, gyms and spa retreats. There are equestrian and hunting clubs as well as vast and private gardens for outdoor play. The girls on the upper floors are allowed to the pools and saunas, however they must sign up for the gym or horse riding lessons. The Delta Slaves are allowed twice a week to the pools and can go to the gym. They must not socialize with the Alpha, Beta or Gamma Slaves. The Epsilon Slaves are allowed to the pool once a week and nothing else and cannot socialize with anyone.

Main Floor – This is the floor where the clientele spend most of their time when they are not with a slave. There are several sitting rooms, a massive dinning room and a large kitchen in the back. The Grand Ballroom is used for large gatherings and there are several work spaces. Mistress Juliana has a large office for business purposes.

Dungeon – The Dungeon is located under the 2nd basement. It is generally used by Mistress Juliana only but the room can be divided so any of the clientele has access to a Dungeon without disturbing Mistress Juliana’s personal collection.

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  • 4 weeks later...

Hello Darlings,

I just wanted to address something here. I've seen several reviews in regards to what should be done to Grace in my story. I love that people are so into this story!! If it seems like I'm not getting to what you requested, have no fear I will do so as soon as I can. When I was re-posting the original few chapters, I began writing the new ones and I am now about 5 chapters ahead. This does not mean I will posting quicker. I am not ahead on Marie and her Daddy so it gives me time to write a chapter (The chapters are much longer). So you all will just have to wait.... Don't forget what they say, absence makes the cock grow firmer... ahem, I mean heart :P.

So keep em coming!!! And don't forget, you can always get me here. I check this every day or my email: madamedouleur@outlook.com. I have that hooked to my phone and can access it at all times. :)

Tata!

- Madame Douleur

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I just wanted to give a big shout out to my Anonymous Reviewer! I really appreciate that you love my story, although you have some issues with the way Grace is being treated. With that being said, my second shout out goes to Trinket!!! Their review:

Depends. If she's a foreign sex slave and considering this is done among the wealthiest. I assume she would be in a jaccuzzi relaxing. It really depends on where the Author wants it to go. It's easy to write despicable stuff, but not easy pull something interesting out of it. There's always a build up in there. For example, the mistress could be a deviant when it comes down to sex and could favour certain individuals. Readers don't feel pity when bad things happen to bad people but they do feel really bad when bad things happen to good people. In these type of stories, it's always interesting to play with both sides. We usually have one mean slave that deserves almost everything, it's spoiled, it's arrogant, it committed a crime and so on and then we have unfortunate ones, like Grace. Usually weak willed and emmotionally scarred, they never break. Because when they do break...they kill themselves.

I kinda like Grace. She's a good person at heart and I think Juliana knows this. Her docility works well and the mistress really seems to like her. Otherwise, Juliana wouldn't be so obssessed in this particular case. Maybe Grace reminds her of someone she held dear? Also, Grace should listen to Tsumi when it comes to horrific stuff if, and I said if, Grace really wants know. Then again, making Grace terrified would sadden her mistress. Then againm what does Juliana want from Grace? At first it seemed a simple slave but then, things didn't seem quite like like it. There was a preference and then there was an envy from her clients when Grace openly admitted she Juliana was her Miss and the other slaves, for reasons never discussed, do have a beef with her even though Grace never did anything. Some sought pleasure, others came for revenge and stayed out of comfort so.

Ah, she's an angel. That's all I have to say. Lilith herself would drag her to hell just so she could merely gaze her figure.
I liked the "pure" and "deviant" thing you in here. You just want to, "grrr" make Grace cry just so she can nuzzle herself onto you for confort.

You've hit the nail right on the head, Trinket. Grace belongs to a very prestigious sex slave conglomerate. Villa Douleur is one of many slave homes across the world. They cater to the rich and famous. These homes are an open secret among the elite and soon we will visit other homes (Hint: Grace will be loaned to an all male slave home soon :devil: ).

Mistress Juliana does feel a certain kinship with Grace. She is getting all of the choicer clients and seems to be more lenient towards her. The other girls are not happy, especially Tsumi. I'm sure she feels her place is being usurped. I will be exploring that as the story progresses, as well as relationships she will begin to forge with the other Alphas.

Grace does not want break and is fighting it internally, It might seems like she's given in with every man or woman she fucks but deep down she will not submit. Her feelings towards Mistress Juliana are a conflict for her, she hates and loves her Mistress at the same time. Escape seems impossible or so Grace thinks....

I will be exploring some of the nastier stuff that the Gamma and Epsilon slaves experience (Don't worry Anonymous Reviewer, I will be going through your reviews for ideas tee hee). Don't think that just because Grace is the favorite now she will always be *evil grin*. Mistress is sometimes very, very unforgiving....

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Wow! Over 20, 000 hits!! I'm jumping around in glee (in my mind anyways lol). Thank you to all who have read Innocence Lost and to all of those who keep coming back. Knowing people enjoy my story makes it all worth it. I especially love reading the reviews ;), it gets me psyched up to continue writing.

Here's to another 20, 000!

Love,

Mme. D

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Hello Darlings,

This story has not been abandoned :). I go through long spurts of creativity followed by long spurts of nothing. It also depends on my sexual moods and I have been battling a health problem that can affect that (nothing life threatening or gross, just annoying :s).

I have published a new chapter, one that I've had written for quite some time but never got around to publishing. I have a long list of chapters already thought out just not written so hopefully they will be published sooner than later.

Also, I just realized that I have been writing this story for 10 years! Oh my goodness! I'm so happy that people enjoy my Grace and her adventure in slavehood. Hopefully she will endure harder and more pleasurable punishments soon!

Anywho, enjoy the next chapter entitled Miss. Grace (Warning: Pegging and Male Domination)

http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600107051&chapter=20

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Hello dears,

I have decided to start writing out Character Profiles for each of the major characters of Innocence Lost. As we are introduced to the other Alphas I will publish their character descriptions as well. So without further ado:

Grace

DOB: January 1st
Age when taken: 19
Age now: 19
Sign: Capricorn
Height: 5 foot 6
Hair: Blond. It reaches to the small of her back.
Eyes: Blue
Skin Type: Very pale white
Figure: Curvy without being too voluptuous
Breast Size: C with pale aureola and small nipples
Pussy: Pink with tight lips and shaved.

Grace is beautiful girl from a wealthy family. Her parents are divorced and she has an older brother and younger sister. She went to the best schools but despite her beauty was still a virgin, this more than likely due to her older brother’s protectiveness, which sometimes bordered on inappropriate. Her father is a judge and her mother an interior designer. She is originally from New York but moved to a New Orleans mansion when her father recently took a new judgeship. Her mother abandoned the children when she divorced her husband, finding out he had been unfaithful to her. If she had known that was the least of the problems she would never had left her children with him. Her father was the product of sexual abuse and had begun to sexually abuse her youngest sister the minute she became a woman. No one knew his secret except his eldest son who blackmailed him into never touching Grace, as her brother was saving her for himself and luckily for Grace her brother was waiting until she turned 21. She was a 2nd year Business student when she went to part on the wrong side of town and left due to the drug usage when Corbin took her.


Tsumi (Real name Georgette)

DOB: June 9th
Age when taken: 20
Age now: 32
Sign: Gemini
Height: 5 foot 9
Hair: Sable. It reaches past her ass
Eyes: Brown
Skin Type: Mixed (Black mother and white father)
Figure: Exaggerated, large hips and ass and a small waist
Breast Size: DD with large aureola and nipples
Pussy: Black lips with a manicured bush

Georgette was born in a shack in one of the southern states. No one knows exactly where, not even herself. Her mother died when she turned 13 and her father was a drunk. She lived in poverty until she turned 16 and her father began to drunkenly beat her and sexually assault her. He moved them both to New Orleans and used her body to support him. Eventually she was servicing important city figures and senators and this is how she came to the attention of Julianna. She offered Georgette a better life than what her father could offer and she accepted. She is the only one who voluntarily became a slave. Within two years she rose to Omega slave and changed her name to Tsumi and now has become overconfident in her position. 

Hope ya’ll enjoy that. Next will be a description of Applebottom Ranch, it’s Master Miguel and Omega slave Antonio!

Tata!

XXOO Mme. D

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Hello dears,

As promised here are the descriptions of Applebottom Ranch, it’s Master and Omega Slave! I apologize for the wait, I just went through surgery and I finally feeling up to writing :)

 

Applebottom Ranch

The Ranch is located under a massive plot behind a casino on the outskirts of the Vegas strip. The Ranch is hidden by the latest in holographic technology. The casino clients see nothing but a very well maintained garden. There are armed guards that patrol the area disguised as patrons of the casino. The secret of the Ranch has remained so for two decades with only three incidents of discovery. Those three people were sent off to other Villas in Douleur Inc to protect their secret.

The slave structure is the same as that of Villa Douleur: Omega, Alphas, Betas, Deltas, Epsilon and Gammas. The boys are kept on a much shorter leash due to the proximity of the casino. Only the Omega and the Alphas have access to anything beyond their own rooms and/or the barracks.

The Grounds

The Ranch is set up like an old western town, complete with sandy dirt roads and tumble weeds. The holographic technology that protects the secret of the Ranch does not impede the view as the entire roof is a huge window to the sky along with desert flora including cacti. The town is quite large with several buildings. The town square is dominated by a well with a small park with benches and a garden.

The Senior lives in the Mayors Palace in a large lavish two story apartment that faces the town square. Dallas is housed next door in a small apartment much like Corbins on the first floor. Antonio, as the Omega, is also housed in the Palace. His apartment is on the second floor with a large kitchen, living room and bedroom with a small balcony that also faces the town square. He has a door that leads in the Seniors bedroom but does not enter without permission. The Senior has an office on the first floor where he meets potential clients.

The Alphas are housed in the building next to the Palace. There are twelve of them, each with their own one bedroom apartment with balconies. Each Alpha has their own equipment to pleasure their clients and there is a common room that they all have access to.

The Betas and Deltas are housed in buildings around the town. The Betas have their own small apartments but share a common kitchen along with a common room in each building. They have their own equipment. The Deltas only have bedrooms with their own bathrooms and they share two to a room, also sharing their equipment. There are common kitchens and common rooms that they share among themselves.

The Epsilons and Gammas share the barracks on the edge of town, away from the clients who do not enjoy the vilest of fetishes. The Epsilons are housed in the upper floors of the barracks, sleeping in several large rooms while sharing several bathrooms, one kitchen and one common room. There are a few lavish bedrooms where they service their clients and they share the equipment between them.

The Gammas can be found in the basement levels of the barracks. There is one bathroom, one kitchen and no common room. The entire Gamma population sleeps in one long room. There are two bedrooms with equipment plus a well appointed dungeon for the harsher pleasures. They are also the cooks and cleaners of the Ranch.

Directly across from the Palace is the Saloon where all manner of entertainment can be had. There is a well stocked bar for those wishing to have a drink or a well cooked meal. There are tables for black jack and poker as well as pool tables and darts. The upper level has several offices for the those wishing to catch up on their work. All fiestas are held at the Saloon.

There is a single spa for the clients who wish to be pampered. Only the Omega and the Alphas have access to this with the permission of the Senior. There is also a small corral for horse riding enthusiasts on the outskirts opposite of the barracks and a hot spring down the road. Again, only the Omega and Alphas have access to these sites with express permission. The rest of the slaves are confined to their rooms to minimize the chance of escape.

 

Miguel

Miguel was the son of an impoverish family in Mexico. When he was a young boy his family snuck across the Rio Grand and migrated to Las Vegas as Illegal immigrants. His mother worked as a house keeper in a major hotel while his father was used as cheap manual labor out in the desert. When he was ten his father died in a work accident, leaving him to care for his mother and much younger brother. Soon Miguel’s mother was caught by an immigration worker who blackmailed her into becoming his personal sex slave, promising he would keep her off the government radar if she would submit. This came to light when Miguel was sixteen and was forced to watch his mother be gang raped by the worker and his friends. He also became a blackmailed sex slave, this time the worker promised to keep his younger brother untouched. For four years he serviced the worker and his friends alongside his mother until he walked into his brother being bent over and ready to be taken. His mother caused a distraction and screamed for them to run. The two boys escaped to a life on the street, Miguel turning tricks in order to keep his brother fed and clothed. One night the old Senior of Applebottom Ranch spied him as he was being driven in his limo and stopped. He spoke to Miguel about his life and how he came to be in his current situation. The old Senior offered him a better way of life as a slave at his Villa and Miguel accepted on the condition that his mother and brother were cared for. The old Senior agreed but his mother paid the price of defiance with her life. His younger brother was sent away for adoption on the other side of the country. Miguel quickly rose to Omega within the first year of servitude. He served the old Senior for almost ten years before the old man succumbed to an untimely death. Miguel was then risen to head of the Villa, the youngest in history and also the only Omega to do so. Soon after this happened he went looking for the men that killed his mother but found all had already died of disease, heart attacks and one was killed in a botched robbery. He never contacted his younger brother again and remains on as Senior to this day.

 

Antonio

Antonio was an orphan at a young age and spent most of his early years in and out of foster homes. He was physically abused, surviving beatings and verbal punishment as the years went by. He spent most of his time hiding from the various foster parents and learning to be invisible. When he turned seventeen his current foster father took his abuse to a new level. His foster mother was working a shift at one of her three jobs while her alcoholic loser of a husband watched their foster children. Antonio walked in as foster father was fucking his foster brother while his submissive older foster sister watched. Years of abuse had taken it’s toll on Antonio and he was brought into the circle of sexual abuse without any argument. He was the new private toy of his foster father and was only allowed to bottom for him exclusively. One time he tried to test this limit by attempting to rape his foster sister but the old man caught him before he had even taken his cock out and beat him almost to death. After this he obediently sucked his foster fathers cock and spread his ass cheeks for him. This went on for a year until Antonio, upon returning home from his after school job, found his foster father on top of his sister with a knife pressed up against her throat. Antonio couldn’t believe what he was seeing, especially when he spied the bloody nipple on the bed next to her, and suddenly a rage beyond rage enveloped him. To this day he can not remember what happened after the red haze of anger clouded his eyes and only knew himself again when the haze cleared and his foster father was dead, stabbed in the heart. Antonio panicked and fled. He ran as far as he could, trading blowjobs for rides with truck drivers until he made it to Las Vegas. He was forced to work at an underground brothel that catered to men and it is there where he met Miguel. Miguel was visiting the Master, an old friend, when he spied Antonio on his knees pleasuring men with his mouth. He could see he was not happy in this station in life and offered him another choice, a choice that would give him for more freedom and his body would cater to the rich and famous instead the dregs of society. Antonio’s Master only agreed to the exchange as he owed Miguel a favor. Within two years Antonio rose to Omega and was heralded to be the next Senior.

 

I hope ya’ll enjoyed that! The next chapter of Innocence lost will be hopefully posted sooner than later!

XXOO Mme. D

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