BitterNTR

The Beach Bitch! [Kushina's Fuck-ventures 3]

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I’m back, after 4/3 long years! Open for discussions or questions for potential sequels!

Or just questions in general in relation to the story! (Can’t really remember if the rules had anything against sharing thoughts and comments outside of that, do correct me if I’m wrong.)

Please do inform me if there are any issues in my story. I can’t tell you how rushed this was. Will try to fix any reasonable problems brought up.

Link to story: http://naruto.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=60010675

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I liked the concept and the lemon but personally would have love to see the ending to this idea where maybe Kushina invites the kid over again and while there she learns that he into her to the highest point possible and finds it charming. But ultimately learns that he might have impregnated her and decides she needs to do something to hide this so she gets a long term job away from the mission so she can hide the pregnancy and spend time with her lover ultimately having a family with him as well.

 

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what’s this some smut involving Kushina in always up for that and while I have a preference towards stories in which she suffers a Mind Beak/ Turns inti a sex slave, Slutty Kushina is also pretty solid 

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9 hours ago, Guest Brmjr said:

Love the stories, are you ever going to update the insecure hero?

Thanks for the compliment! 

I’m still thinking of which ones of my stories to consider updating, but I’ll definitely try my best in being more consistent in my updates for my older stories.

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2 hours ago, Guest Guest Crow said:

I liked the concept and the lemon but personally would have love to see the ending to this idea where maybe Kushina invites the kid over again and while there she learns that he into her to the highest point possible and finds it charming. But ultimately learns that he might have impregnated her and decides she needs to do something to hide this so she gets a long term job away from the mission so she can hide the pregnancy and spend time with her lover ultimately having a family with him as well.

 

Hey, thank you! Really appreciate the support and the suggestion. Not sure if I’d personally be able to go down the pathway where she is preggos from him and starts a whole other secret family since I can’t really imagine how I’d go about writing that. Normally, if I’d have her get impregnated, I’d prefer the character to be an actual canon character. I’m not sure why but it seems to sell the story better, for me at least.

Also, I thought I made it pretty clear that he’d be a recurring character by having Kushina give him her real name, be it in this series or in another. If it wasn’t clear enough in the story, do let me know.

In any case, I’ll keep your feedback and suggestion in mind.

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1 hour ago, Guest Jmspike said:

what’s this some smut involving Kushina in always up for that and while I have a preference towards stories in which she suffers a Mind Beak/ Turns inti a sex slave, Slutty Kushina is also pretty solid 

I totally get you, but sometimes I feel like it’s more fun when they have a personality. Obviously I enjoy a sluttier Kushina, but I try my best to incorporate an interesting personality behind that trait.

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I wanted to do a poll and see if people were interested in seeing different spin-offs in the KFV that I hinted in this story but I’m not really sure how to get around doing that. 

In any case, here are some of the hints that I sprinkled inside this story that could be expanded upon:

  1. Kushina’s debut in pornography, in her record-breaking 50 man gangbang
  2. Kushina’s Yumogakure inn adventures 
  3. Kushina in the setting of a…
    • 3A) Shared hot-springs/Public bathhouses
    • 3B) Jiraiya’s many massage parlours (I had originally created a series where Jiraiya owned a popular, luxury spa that held lots of perverted secrets like peepholes, towels that melted in the heat, a whole ‘sex dungeon’. Basically, he invites the family over so that he could fuck Kushina and other female characters, etc)
    • 3C) Ichiraku Ramen (again!)
  4. Kushina and Kazuya’s scheduled MILF sessions + his friends
  5. Any other potential suggestions for a short KFV

Do let me know if you guys are interested in any of these particular stories, on top of any other questions you guys may have.

Thank you!

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Guest Jmspike

Kushina doing a porno seems really solid especially since she is doing a gangbang although Option 4 is pretty solid as well also i don't recall ever seeing anyone write a story with kushina gong a porno so it would be neat to see 

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19 minutes ago, Guest Jmspike said:

Kushina doing a porno seems really solid especially since she is doing a gangbang although Option 4 is pretty solid as well also i don't recall ever seeing anyone write a story with kushina gong a porno so it would be neat to see 

Glad to hear your response! 

I had some ideas in the past of different scenarios, from the perspective of different points in Kushina’s life when she becomes an AV actress and stars in her pornos. There’s also some where she’s debuting, and others where she’s an established, top-tier AV actress and has Naruto, who is really salty about her profession as his friends consistently watch her videos.

Obviously, none of these ever came to fruition due to my really bad writer’s block.

Would be curious to know what you’d like to see, if you had to pick a scenario.

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I suppose Kushina already being an established AV actress would be neat to see and considering how slutty she is it would make sense that she would use her popularity to film herself participating in massive gangbangs to satisfy herself. also the idea of everyone knowing Kushina is a massive slut is amusing 

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5 hours ago, BitterNTR said:

Hey, thank you! Really appreciate the support and the suggestion. Not sure if I’d personally be able to go down the pathway where she is preggos from him and starts a whole other secret family since I can’t really imagine how I’d go about writing that. Normally, if I’d have her get impregnated, I’d prefer the character to be an actual canon character. I’m not sure why but it seems to sell the story better, for me at least.

Also, I thought I made it pretty clear that he’d be a recurring character by having Kushina give him her real name, be it in this series or in another. If it wasn’t clear enough in the story, do let me know.

In any case, I’ll keep your feedback and suggestion in mind.

I understand. I have some ideas of how that can come about or at least lead to something similar in this concept as I just would like to see another chapter where she ends up pregnant with the child and either her family knows or doesn’t know. Naruto just excited to have a sibling while Minato is just thinking of all the work that is going to come from this.
I don’t know if that you specified he was going to be playing a bigger part in the story, but I can say that it is clear that he was supposed to be important.

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This is an absolutely incredible story, my favorite fic in I don’t know how long. I have a concept somewhat similar to this that I’d love to hear your thoughts on:

Takes place in a modern AU

Kushina (40 years old) is happily married to Minato (also 40) and has a 20 year old son, Naruto. She is also a popular and famous news anchor, during the day she does regular news broadcasts. However after 9pm she does adult shows where she does dirty things on TV for ratings. On daytime TV she might be tame, such as showing some extra cleavage while reading the news, however after hours she'll do anything from wearing skimpy bikinis, to getting completely naked, to even having sex. Minato is supportive of his wife, Naruto on the other hand hates it

I’d love to hear what you think.

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8 hours ago, Guest 111 said:

This is an absolutely incredible story, my favorite fic in I don’t know how long. I have a concept somewhat similar to this that I’d love to hear your thoughts on:

Takes place in a modern AU

Kushina (40 years old) is happily married to Minato (also 40) and has a 20 year old son, Naruto. She is also a popular and famous news anchor, during the day she does regular news broadcasts. However after 9pm she does adult shows where she does dirty things on TV for ratings. On daytime TV she might be tame, such as showing some extra cleavage while reading the news, however after hours she'll do anything from wearing skimpy bikinis, to getting completely naked, to even having sex. Minato is supportive of his wife, Naruto on the other hand hates it

I’d love to hear what you think.

Hey, thanks for your compliment and sorry for the late reply. The website was glitching out for me and I couldn’t load a response no matter how much I tried. Finally worked.

Speaking of your AU, I am definitely a fan of it, but I feel like it has already been done, if I’m not mistaken. I recall someone uploading a slutty Kushina news anchor story. Off the top of my head I’m thinking of BigE or C0p13r. Feel free to correct me if I’m wrong about the authors, and if the fic does exist. I’m just basing this off of my memory from when I was still active on the site.

Either way, I like the sound of that. If I could put my own twist on that, I’d be down too.

By the way, I’m curious to know if anyone would be keen to assist me in writing. I feel like I’m pretty alright at writing Point A and Point B, but I’m absolutely horrible at trying to link the two together if you know what I’m saying. Let me know if you guys are interested and maybe I can make a discord for discussions on my challenges and my writings.

Cheers!

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19 hours ago, Guest Guest Crow said:

I understand. I have some ideas of how that can come about or at least lead to something similar in this concept as I just would like to see another chapter where she ends up pregnant with the child and either her family knows or doesn’t know. Naruto just excited to have a sibling while Minato is just thinking of all the work that is going to come from this.
I don’t know if that you specified he was going to be playing a bigger part in the story, but I can say that it is clear that he was supposed to be important.

Well, hey, if you have suggestions for it, by all means, just post it here (or on the discord I may make) and I’ll definitely tell you how I feel about it. Beyond that particular OC, I’ve always enjoyed that particular scenario playing out with Kushina/Hinata and Jiraiya.

So, consider me interested!

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7 hours ago, BitterNTR said:

Hey, thanks for your compliment and sorry for the late reply. The website was glitching out for me and I couldn’t load a response no matter how much I tried. Finally worked.

Speaking of your AU, I am definitely a fan of it, but I feel like it has already been done, if I’m not mistaken. I recall someone uploading a slutty Kushina news anchor story. Off the top of my head I’m thinking of BigE or C0p13r. Feel free to correct me if I’m wrong about the authors, and if the fic does exist. I’m just basing this off of my memory from when I was still active on the site.

Either way, I like the sound of that. If I could put my own twist on that, I’d be down too.

By the way, I’m curious to know if anyone would be keen to assist me in writing. I feel like I’m pretty alright at writing Point A and Point B, but I’m absolutely horrible at trying to link the two together if you know what I’m saying. Let me know if you guys are interested and maybe I can make a discord for discussions on my challenges and my writings.

Cheers!

This specific story has never been done before, I’d love to see you do it, I feel like there is endless potential for this type of story, a lot of freedom to do something different in each chapter.

Do you have a discord? I’d love to discuss it with you further.

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8 hours ago, Guest 111 said:

This specific story has never been done before, I’d love to see you do it, I feel like there is endless potential for this type of story, a lot of freedom to do something different in each chapter.

Do you have a discord? I’d love to discuss it with you further.

Hmmm, I did just see something like that on AFF itself, but I digress. I suppose if it is a different story with similar themes, then maybe I might be thinking of a different thing altogether.

Here’s the discord link, should any of you guys be interested to join and communicate with each other — https://discord.gg/6gTJKQb562

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23 hours ago, BitterNTR said:

Well, hey, if you have suggestions for it, by all means, just post it here (or on the discord I may make) and I’ll definitely tell you how I feel about it. Beyond that particular OC, I’ve always enjoyed that particular scenario playing out with Kushina/Hinata and Jiraiya.

So, consider me interested!

Well the idea is that if you are using that OC and are wanting to build on the story line that started from there, then there is some ways to go about it in my opinion.

  1. Kushina remembers her time with the teen and is stuck wanting more from him given that Minato can’t satisfy her anymore
  2. So one day while out in the village she happens to run into the kid again and finds out that he remembers their time together and wants a repeat just as bad
  3. Taking him to a private location (Hot springs reserved/training field away from the village/ Forest of Death safe area/etc.) they quickly get at it with him having a secret weapon of sexual enhancer drugs
  4. He spends more time wtih her in this location and when her husband calls for her she tells him that she is currently training late and won’t be arriving home soon while having the teen pound into her more.
  5. In time for the morning she leaves and after a few days comes back to this location they share and have another wild session.
  6. Then say a mission takes her away from the village and he gets to go with her for some reasons or another, there they start having more sessions together to the point that finally she ends up pregnant while in the field.
  7. This leads to her writing a letter about needing more time for the job in question
  8. But she ultimately just wants more fucking time and this leads to Kushina finally submitting to the idea of being with this teen as his secret slut.

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I think I’ll probably continue them if I find the motivation to do so. As of right now, I’m more than happy if anyone is willing to adopt them. Right now, however, I’m in the middle of writing another story with the help of one of our users.

Feel free to hop into our discord to see what we’ve been up to!

https://discord.gg/6gTJKQb562

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17 hours ago, Guest Guest Crow said:

Well the idea is that if you are using that OC and are wanting to build on the story line that started from there, then there is some ways to go about it in my opinion.

  1. Kushina remembers her time with the teen and is stuck wanting more from him given that Minato can’t satisfy her anymore
  2. So one day while out in the village she happens to run into the kid again and finds out that he remembers their time together and wants a repeat just as bad
  3. Taking him to a private location (Hot springs reserved/training field away from the village/ Forest of Death safe area/etc.) they quickly get at it with him having a secret weapon of sexual enhancer drugs
  4. He spends more time wtih her in this location and when her husband calls for her she tells him that she is currently training late and won’t be arriving home soon while having the teen pound into her more.
  5. In time for the morning she leaves and after a few days comes back to this location they share and have another wild session.
  6. Then say a mission takes her away from the village and he gets to go with her for some reasons or another, there they start having more sessions together to the point that finally she ends up pregnant while in the field.
  7. This leads to her writing a letter about needing more time for the job in question
  8. But she ultimately just wants more fucking time and this leads to Kushina finally submitting to the idea of being with this teen as his secret slut.

While I find a few of the things a bit hard to accomplish, particularly points 4 and 6 (maybe they’d have to be written differently), I think the rest are points I’d well consider. Though I’m still not certain if I want Ryota in particular to be the one that impregnates Kushina, if ever. I had only planned for him to make more appearances in later stories.

Without much else to say, I apologise for the late reply. I’ve been working on my discord with another fan to write a story idea that has been sitting around collecting dust for a while. Feel free to join us there if you’d like!

https://discord.gg/6gTJKQb562

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