M/M original medieval fantasy Stockholm syndrome series beta

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Hey folx!

I’m looking for some people to beta read the first in my new original m/m series, loosely titled ‘The Invader Episodics’. It follows the non-con/dub-con love story of Kolbu, a huge Murkuri berserker chosen to inherit an army, and Fray, a slender Elbiyan nobleman with a rape fetish who can’t seem to stop getting captured. The entire story arc spans a decade, from when Fray is 19 and Kolbu is 23 to when they are both in positions of power among their people. But the first novella is just their first encounter.

Over time the power balance shifts to a more equal one and there is romance, as well as some action/adventure and intrigue. I’m not sure how long the series will be yet but I have two written and at least three more planned. 

Tags: rape, master/slave, humiliation, Stockholm syndrome, dubious consent, violence, angst, hurt/comfort, anal, m/m, fingering, oral, bondage, romance

Each novella is around 10k words, 7 chapters. Here’s how it’ll work:

  • You link me an example of your writing
  • I send you a link to the first chapter 
  • you read it
  • if you like it then you leave feedback on it and I send the other 6
  • you read those and answer the questions I provide, and give me your own thoughts that aren’t covered if you so desire
  • if you don’t like it, I thank you for your time and you go on your merry way

If you’re interested, reply here or shoot me a DM, or an email at eden(dot)blythe(dot)author(at)gmail.com

Ideally I’m looking to find some people to beta the entire series out of this thread, but even if you just do the first one I will be glad of your help. Full disclosure, I’m aiming to publish these on the ‘Zon (along with an erotic art Patreon), but I will post the first novella on AFF and it does work as a stand-alone. If you’d like to get a sense of my writing style before you take the plunge, here’s a link to my M/F story containing similar kinks and themes, published without any betas: The Price of Himself

Thanks for reading and hope to hear from you soon. :)

Edited by eden-blythe

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