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Naruko Uzumaki: Konoha's #1 Slut! Discussion Forum

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what about Natsu Hyuga? she’s hanabi’s care taker.

it does sound hot, ut idk how to go about awakening her dark side. n idk if it would be male. maybe a futa if anything.

a take over sounds pretty hot.

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Sounds hot. But you know you could always have that Hinata’s mom was absent because of some illness that reclaimed her to stay somewhere far from Leaf and only recent has she became well enough to return.

Her dark side hmmm she could have a run in with Orochimaru OR one of her ‘clients’, a new one, decides to take revenge and beats her near death and Yami surfaces. Also Yami goes between being male and female. Male whenever they are before others but only when they are alone does Yami assume her real form.

And you could always include characters from other series if you want, being members of that ring that Naruko takes over. Also think about this, have Naruko be able to summon tentacle monsters.

Also just throwing it out there but you always write a one-shot to help you out. You said that you’ve been struggling with this story so maybe writing something different might help.

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The characters from other series or the tentacles, cause you can have her find the scroll or try out the summoning jutsu and end up in their world. I can see using a tentacle monster to break Tsunade. If for the former well what characters do you want to see in the story?

And I have an idea if your interested. It involves a remote onsen/hot spring, Hinata and the Raikage.

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no no, i was talking about the tentacles. i was thinking she finds a scroll in one of orochimaru’s old labs. n i do have plans w tsunade. let’s just say naruko isnt the first blonde girl sarutobi’s ‘trained’, lolz.

alright, let me hear it.

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Set in an Naruko AU: Team 8 is on a mission to protect a merchant and Hinata messes up during a bandit attack, a lot on her mind/depressed. Kunerai sends her away to relax at a onsen nearby. They are completely unaware that the Raikage and his team are watching them. They following Hinata and pay off the owners and pay some bandits/others to keep her distracted. Ay and two others corner Hinata and begin to seduce her as they keep her from leaving, unaware that Ay’s two men are both mentally and physically conditioning her for when Ay makes his move. He starts with a kiss and quickly escalates to pounding her like a ragdoll until she passes out.

Later the rest of Team 8 is looking all over for Hinata and run into Ay+his men and he is quickly accused by Kunerai but he denies/claims he was just passing through. She demands to check the duffle bag/suitcase he was carrying but he argues it was top secret. Inside a tied up Hinata hears what is going on and every part of her demands she cry out for help but a small part of her keeps her silent. It knows her team would lose a fight with the Raikage and even if they did manage to free her and get away her clan would put her through hell for losing her purity to the man. But if she stayed quite and went with him then pleasure would come. She stays silent/trembling with excitement/dread as both Kiba and Akamaru smell the bag but can’t detect her scent at all. Soon Ay is let go and the two groups go their seperate ways, Team 8 resumes their search and Ay’s team heads back to Kumo. Ay takes the time to whisper to Hinata he’ll reward her all the way to Kumo as he uses raiton to to pleasure her, Hinata looking forward to when they would stop to rest.

 

Possible Sequel: Naruko sneaks into Kumo looking for Hinata and is captured.

 

That’s more or less what I got in my head. Another idea is Hinata plus maybe Naruko are runaways and they go into a mixed bathhouse and run into Ay and Bee.

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Ay’s men had a good grasp on her mental state and knew enough of her history to manipulate her via words and subtle genjutsu.

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Naruko, well lets say she isn’t a jinchuuriki but she still had trouble with her chakra control and just about everyone sees her as a means to an end, wanting her for her Uzumaki blood. Hinata was the only person she was close to and when she heard the slightest rumor she was in Kumo she deserted Konoha. She gets caught and ends up making a deal with the Raikage, to endure a whole week as a sex slave for Kumo and the two girls would be set free. But after days/nights of pleasure, plus the kind treatment from Bee and others outside of sex and a talk/orgy with Hinata Naruko quits and joins Hinata as a Kumo slut.


 

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Another idea for Bee and Naruko is set in a modern setting in which Naruko is a run away and is taken in by Bee, who Naruko wants to stay with.

Another idea (AU/modernish) involving Ay and Hinata, is that Ay and Bee kidnap Naruko and Hinata and make a video of them using them as sex toys with the intent to use as blackmail their families and demand a huge ransom. However they learn that their relatives used up their inheritance and have all but disappeared. In the end the brothers decide to keep the girls and start an amateur internet porn site.

 

 

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Oh that is just hot. Seeing her mouth bubble over with bbc cum as she goes cross eyed. Sexy.

a bit meh to be honest.

ah, i am thinking up a modern themed fic at the moment. with a twist. this one however feels too thuggish.

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Meh to the Naruko x Bee one? How about Naruko decides to try out a gloryhole and Bee shows up. Or how about she gets captured and Bee breaks her with pleasure?

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Got the idea from somewhere else. Also forgot to add that they don’t rape them but coax them into it, first by keeping them separate and lying that they would keep their hands off the other while making sure they enjoy it by the end. Eventually they film them together and girls all but admit to enjoying what they are doing. Once they learn their wealth is completely gone, the girl are homeless but their kidnappers decide to give them a home much to the girls delight. Later the brothers regret it as the girls become very demanding and want to try a lot of new things.

 

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Another encounter could be Naruko while on a mission sneaks away to a hidden hot spring she found and has a run in with Bee.

An arranged marriage.

Hedge as an adult and enter casino and ends up losing a lot of money which is paid off by Bee who wants her body as repayment.

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Other ideas

Hinata being NTR by Futa-Tsume while she goes to her house looking for Kiba her boyfriend.

Academy while a kunoichi only class Naruko tries out the summoning jutsu and summons monsters (inccubi, succubi,tentacles monsters, orc, etc)

Hinata becomes the plaything of the Uzumaki siblings, Menma, Naruto and Naruko (Mito)

 

 

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Could be NTRish as Kiba had asked her for a date/come by his house.

AUish Hinata finds her way into the Uzumaki household and the siblings soon claim her as theirs. Menma the eldest (by a year or two, Naruto (Hinata’s age) and Naruko (or another name) is the youngest- by a year or two. I just find it hot for Hinata to be used by all versions of Naruto.

 

 

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Kiba gets Naruko to come to his house and gets her to do some pet play only for his sister to walk in on them. Tsume takes her home where Naruko tempts and Tsume caves in to her desires and treats her like a bitch. She becomes a regular and even helps train the other girls as pet girls.

Anko finds/stops one of Naruko’s clone’s fun/jobs and soon begins hunting down/popping her clones until she finds the real one. She finds the real and kidnaps her to train at her place, pushing her to her limits and wished to make Naruko her sex slave.

How do these sound?

 

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Got it from another story about Naruko called Mistress but it back fires on Anko. Anyway it can be changed that Anko takes Naruko under wing and teaches/trains her to endure just about anything that could be done to her to break her. She wants to help her survive and gets to have a nice little sex slave to play with at the same time. At least that’s how i see it going if Anko gets involved.

 

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Looking forward to it.

How this for the next chapter:

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Naruko sees that all of her girls have also been captured and were being used by Danzo’s men?

 

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