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#THANKS 

Been reading ever since chapter 9 and lurking in the forums. Love your story and how well it balances character development with smut. There’s times where I wish there was less smut and more regular writing haha!

 

Anyway I love your choices of Ariana and Dove – young and innocent (hopefully!). Really eanting to see some long punishment room scenes like with Bella and Chloe. I’m starting to miss some abosuletly stuck up bitchy girls girls being put in their place forcefully. Best smut I’ve read ever so keep it up.

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Guest Sazbi

Definitely #thanks to the editor for helping on this chapter.  Curious on how Emma will react with Chloe/Toy and the connection she has been making with Felicity.  Seemed like she was getting attracted to Chloe before her punishment, and with her being able to be Toy again doesn’t hurt.  With the new women coming, it would be cool if one of the pairings is a younger woman being the Dom to the older woman.  Can’t wait for the next one, Mal! 

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Hey Mal. Fantastic job on ch. 28. It’s probably my favorite of the series. Up there with 9, 10, 22, and 25 for sure. The triple BJ scene was just about as good as it can get!

I’ve really enjoyed the love “square” (is that the right way to describe it?) of Bella, Taylor, Cara, and Margot. It was really great to see them forget their drama for a bit and let loose by the pool. But now that they’re going back into the complex, I’m very anxious to see how their relationships will turn out. I think Taylor shouldn’t get that level 4 promotion because she stirs the pot so much. 

I also think that Emma will get wrecked when she hears about missing out on the pool party orgy. She works so hard (at least in her mind) to bring everyone together! 

Please keep up the great writing, Mal. 

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Guest This story is awesome!

Chapter 28 was sooooo amazing.  I lobe this story so much, I get ridiculously excited when I see a new chapter.  Thank you very much for this.

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Guest Woofie

Love the chapter! so glad ariana has made it in, she’s such a feisty stuck-up diva. will enjoy seeing alex break her.

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Hey gang! I thought I’d pop on for a quick update and to respond to all the amazing comments of the past few days. 

First off, I don’t know if you guys have noticed, but Billion Dollar Harem has surpassed 75,000 dragon prints! That is an amazing, utterly unbelievable achievement. I can not express how humbled and amazed I am at the response this little story of mine has generated. I know I’ve said this before, but I do this story as much for you guys, and the response I get from the fans as I do for my own enjoyment, probably more to be honest. I couldn’t have gotten here without you guys my fans, and I certainly wouldn’t still be doing this without your comments and hopes that the next chapter will come soon. You guys absolutely mean the world to me, I sincerely can not thank you enough. Please keep all the comments coming. Believe it or not, they really bolster me to keep working.

Next, I wanted you guys to know I’ve been working on a new One Shot story. Its nearly finished, and I hope to post it sometime next week. The story features the ‘talents’ of Natalie Portman, and is overall, pretty dark. I won’t give anything away, but if you’re a fan of the rough, abusive, degrading punishment room scenes, this story will be for you. This story is pretty unique, I actually worked on the plot with a fan I met on a different FanFiction site. I don’t normally do requests, (because I’m typically very busy with BDH, and because I’m kind of picky about what celebs I’ll work with, but this guy had some good ideas and was willing to work with me on celeb choice), so I decided to play with it. After spending a night fooling around with filling out his plot ideas and doing some preliminary writing, I decided to go ahead and devote the time to finish writing it. Bottom line is, next week sometime, I’ll be publishing a new, very dark story with the popular, Natalie Portman.

On deck after that, I have two projects brewing. After I publish the Nat story, I’ll spend that week working on BDH 29, and another new story.  I’ll play around with working on both of these for a week / ten days or so before I really buckle down to get BDH 29 out by the end of the month. But having said that, I’m hoping to get BDH 29 out either in the second to last week of March, or early in the last week. Then I’ll pour all my focus into my other new story. This story will feature my personal fav, that’s right, Emma Watson is getting her very own One Shot. Again, not going to give anything away, but this story will see Ms. Watson turning into a depraved cum-craving slut. And, as a final tease, it won’t, let me repeat that, WON’T be Non-Con oriented. As such, I think it will be a very interesting story that fans of the darker stuff as well as those who enjoy more Cons style stories will really enjoy. I plan to put a lot of work into this story, and I have very high hopes that it may end up being my very finest work yet!

After March however, I’ll have to see how much time I have for writing, and I may have to transition back to barely scraping enough time together to put out a BDH for April… I can’t say for sure yet how things will play out. But I can say, that I’m very excited for chapters 29 and 30. I have some very interesting things planned for both, including the return of Emma to the harem in chapter 30. That chapter will feature a scene I’ve had planed for BDH nearly from the very first chapter, so I’m super excited about working on it. Hopefully by then, I can begin to find a way to work in the fan-selected smut scene with Emma and Cara. I have some ideas about how that scene might come into being, but I can’t say for sure when or how it will fall into place. All I can say for sure is that after 30 I’ll be angling to get that scene into a chapter.

Ok, on to you guys,

Joe: you said: 

On 2/25/2018 at 4:06 PM, Guest Joe said:

….I'll be in my bunk....

All I can say is, I laughed out loud for literally a solid thirty to forty-five seconds when I read this. I really appreciate that all the subtle work I put into my profile wasn’t completely wasted. Thank you sir!

Rapetile: Thanks for the shout out to my editor! I know he appreciates it! As to Ariana, all I can say is I have some very special things in mind for her sweet little ass… (I wish I could say more but… spoilers...)

Relic: Again thanks for the shout out. The guy who does my edits frequents this forum and I know he is grateful that his contributions are noted. Chapter 9, that’s a long time to lurk in the forum :) Why wait so long to join the fun?!? Anyway, glad to finally have you with us. Please keep the comments coming. I know what you mean about the smut to story ratio, sometimes I get so caught up in the plot I find myself in need of a reminder that the chapter needs some sex!  Come for the smut. Stay for the story :)  As to Dove and Ariana, I always imagined (at least once the fans selected her) that I’d be bringing Ari alongside a celebrity she had a connection to in real life. As I said earlier, for the longest time, this person was set in my head. In the end though, I chose Dove because she’s very hot in her own right, a tad more famous, and slightly more age appropriate, especially given the time period BDH takes place. I have some special things in mind for both of these girls, and I think in the end Dove was also just the better fit for those plans. I can’t wait to see how some of the coming scenes with these two play out, as well as how their integration into Alex’s harem falls into place. Thanks for the comments.

Sazbi: Thanks to you too for acknowledging my editor’s contributions, I really do appreciate it. I too am very curious to see how the Emma / Chloe / Felicity thing will play out. Having Felicity and Chloe hook up poolside was not my original intention. But I do think it was a natural and surprising way to bring Felicity closer to feeling at home in Alex’s world! It will be interesting to explore these three lady’s feelings given that each are in very different places, not just emotionally but also in their relationship to Alex. I couldn’t honestly say for sure how things will play out, since I had a slightly different scenarios in mind for these three and now they’re sort of tied together. Its just another happy surprise that resulted from the way that I write! (and in this case a helpful nudge from my editor :) ). As to the idea of a younger girl being the Dom to an older one, We do get some hints of that from the Bella / Taylor relationship. While it is true that Taylor leads that relationship emotionally, in bed with the advent of her feeldoe, I think Bella winds up often being more dominating. It will be interesting to see if the Chloe / Felicity situation deepens how that will take shape, since one is a very solid Sub (Chloe / Toy), while the other is a Voyeur, ( which is in itself a more passive type of fetish)…  AH, what an exciting time to be in Alex’s harem :) 

Juan: So glad to see you enjoyed the chapter. I was a little worried at first that the chapter might be just a little too heavy on the smut side of things. But I think if there is a chapter or two which focus more on the purely physical its ok, and I totally agree about the triple BJ. The very first thing I wanted to do when I knew I was going to write an orgy was a good ol’ top down three mouths, three tongues, six eyes and loads of drool blow job! To me, that scene is the real highlight of the chapter. Which is kind of sad, cause I wanted the fucking Alex gave Cara to really be the focus since he waited so long to give it to her. And, while I think that moment is great, at least Cara is a part of the triple bj, and the advent of those girls all being mixed into different scenes with different girls in the end really gives me a lot to work with. I mean, now we’ve got Taylor going to have to acknowledge to herself at least, that Margot rocked her world, which further complicates the ‘Love Square.’ We’ve also got Bella now having to reevaluate how she feels about Chloe. After all, she didn’t know Clo was really Toy and was ordered to pleasure her against her will. You’ve also got Cara, who was solidly wanting Taylor, now has to at least consider how Margot made her feel in those early moments of the orgy…. The whole situation is really deliciously complicated. It should be quite fun to see how it plays out. In regards to the level 4 promotion, I can’t really say what will happen (spoilers) but I can say that what I have planned should be fun! Finally, with Emma, I think she will be extremely sad to hear about what she missed out out, especially because, as you said, she feels responsible for everyone coming together. I have a feeling that events of chapter 30 might end up taking her mind off what she missed out on :).

This Story is Awesome!: Thanks for the kind words, my friend! I’m so happy to hear that you enjoy my work and that it brings such a delight to your world! Please don’t be a stranger and continue to add your voice to our little thread here. I love hearing from my fans. As I stated up top, I do this for you guys and your enthusiasm is what helps me carry on.

Woofie: Two new people in one day! Amazing. Thanks for the kind words. I too am looking forward to seeing what Alex does with the fiery stuck up diva. As I said, I have some ideas, but it should be quite fun. Its nice to have you, and please continue to speak up. I love hearing from my fans.

I’m going to wrap things up here. Just remember, there is a poll going on, so don’t forget to vote if you’ve had yet to do so. Also, since we’ve got some new folks, there is a hand-drawn map of Alex’s underground complex. If you’ve always wondered how the complex is set up, and my descriptions just don’t do it for you, (or even if they do :)), please just drop me an email. I’ll be more than happy to pass it along. 

I’m Back to the Black,

Mal

Edited by Mal

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Guest Pilgrim

 

Great story, glad to see updates again.

 

I vote Alexandra Daddario and Karen Gillian

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Guest Guest 0267

A great story

I  vote for Gal Gadot Get time can dress her up in her Wonder Woman Outfit

I vote for Karen Gillian 

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Just posted a certain One Shot staring Natalie Portman. Be forewarned, this story is not for the feint of heart. Please enjoy!

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Guest Ambien

This was a really fun read Mal definitely am more of a fan of the one on one interactions with alex and the girls but the orgy scene was top notch man!  Loved that more of the girls are being seen to be putting up more of a fight when being kidnaped hopefully we’ll see more like it.

and a current update to the polls.

For the 3rd spot:

Alexandria Daddario – 7 votes

Gal Gadot –  9 votes

Megan Fox – 1 vote

Kendall Jenner – 1 vote

For the 4th spot:

Rose Leslie – 6 votes

Karen Gillian 11 votes

Elsa Hosk – 1 vote

Karen Gillian votes broke double digits and it looks like Gal Gadot has a slight lead on Alexandria Daddario.

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Might seem like an out of the blue question for you Mal but have you ever considered doing a story similar to Billion Dollar Harem or a new project entirely on your CHYOA account? just notice you have a story and account there and little chapter adds on a story over could please the appetites of those waiting for a longer BDH chapter here. Anyway enjoyed the last chapter and good luck on the next chapters.  

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Guest Well

I like it with the pool Seen. 

How about they write something on a Piece of paper what things they do. 

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Mal, what are your thoughts on one of the more sexually experienced girls teaching one of the newer girls in the bedroom in a threesome/ some kind of group sex? Not just the technique, but also seduction, how to turn on guys or girls, dirty talk, learning how to maximize her own pleasure, etc. 

Most of the girls have come in with some natural bedroom skills (Cara is a good example). On the flip side, you sort of touched upon it with Taylor when she was new, but she wasn’t really taught by another girl. Alex broke her on his own. But now that Emma and others are well-ingrained in harem life, it might be a different/ less harsh way of having them go from normal people to actually enjoying harem lifestyle. Or maybe a good second step after some time in the punishment room. 

I know this is a pretty common plot of porn, but I think it would actually work in your story, since you’ve done a good job of developing the veterans’ characters and their sexual appetities.

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