stahlregen Posted April 23, 2015 Report Share Posted April 23, 2015 (edited) Looking for a beta or two for the story I'm working on. There's a few chapters up, ones which I've proofread myself, but I'm no expert -- I'm pretty confident in my spelling, grammar, and punctuation, but my main issues are two things: Dialogue and story flow. Most of the issues I have are with those two things, and they're super frustrating for me. Ideally, I'd prefer someone that can be pretty brutal. Tell me where and how I screwed up, what I can do to fix it. Hell, make your own changes if you think it's a better idea. I just want it to turn out as well as it possibly can. Chapters are planned to be released on a weekly basis, with a goal of between 7,000-10,000 words per chapter, and an end goal of between 175,000-250,000 words total. Let me know if you're interested! I'd really appreciate the help! p.s. - If you'd like to read the first three chapters (they're fairly short, just setting the stage before I get into the meat of things) they're under Original - Misc > Slash - Male/Male, and the story's called To Never Recall. Edited April 23, 2015 by stahlregen Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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