YojiKato Posted October 10, 2013 Report Share Posted October 10, 2013 Bluesake: Thanks so much for your review!! Since you've probably read the whole thing before, I'll let you know that there will probably be some changes made later in the story so that I can continue it. I hope you enjoy. AngelStarlight: I love spoiling readers. Without readers my little stories would be pointless. I'll probably end up taking you up on that offer when I get the later chapters posted. Thanks so much for reviewing! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AngelStarlight Posted October 10, 2013 Report Share Posted October 10, 2013 Speaking of spoiling readers, your stories are almost too polished (past misuses of "passed" aside ^_-) - I read anything else lately and I'm all "the story is good, but look at these continuity issues...and these typos!" Sigh. Why did I have to be given the editing bug over the creating bug? That being said, CH. 1: "Quatre turned to face him, pausing briefly as he ascended the steps of the latter(ladder?:-) )leading to the jet." Yay writing! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YojiKato Posted October 11, 2013 Author Report Share Posted October 11, 2013 Speaking of spoiling readers, your stories are almost too polished (past misuses of "passed" aside ^_-) - I read anything else lately and I'm all "the story is good, but look at these continuity issues...and these typos!" Sigh. Why did I have to be given the editing bug over the creating bug? That being said, CH. 1: "Quatre turned to face him, pausing briefly as he ascended the steps of the latter(ladder?:-) )leading to the jet." Yay writing! Ack!! LOL I'm going to look into that right NOW! LOL Thanks for the pointer. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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