animeaddict666 0 Report post Posted February 12, 2008 Title: Team Dynamics Author: PlotAficionado Fandom: Naruto Pairings: Mostly NaruSasuNaru, but I focus more on their relationship than sex. Rating: Adult++ Summary: After Naruto almost kills Sasuke, the team dynamics shift. Can the trio find balance when their feelings for each other begin to change? Spoilers: Divergence, so no real spoilers. URL: http://naruto.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600090042 Feedback: I really really would love some constructive crit for this fic's plot line and pacing. I like what I have so far, but I just feell like I must be doing something wrong, as it's my first and only multi-chapter fic and I'm getting fewer reviews than I'd expect from my experience with my oneshots. Any feedback would be appreciated, but I'm not looking to be an entitlement whore. I just want some real crit! Tough love! Thanks for taking the time to look at this! I've never used this forum until now, but I hope to see your feedback! ~ BRI Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
AmberRose 0 Report post Posted February 16, 2008 Title: Team DynamicsAuthor: PlotAficionado Fandom: Naruto Pairings: Mostly NaruSasuNaru, but I focus more on their relationship than sex. Rating: Adult++ Summary: After Naruto almost kills Sasuke, the team dynamics shift. Can the trio find balance when their feelings for each other begin to change? Spoilers: Divergence, so no real spoilers. URL: http://naruto.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600090042 Feedback: I really really would love some constructive crit for this fic's plot line and pacing. I like what I have so far, but I just feell like I must be doing something wrong, as it's my first and only multi-chapter fic and I'm getting fewer reviews than I'd expect from my experience with my oneshots. Any feedback would be appreciated, but I'm not looking to be an entitlement whore. I just want some real crit! Tough love! Thanks for taking the time to look at this! I've never used this forum until now, but I hope to see your feedback! ~ BRI I would offer some feedback but as you know I'm totally biased. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
