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Title: Team Dynamics

Author: PlotAficionado

Fandom: Naruto

Pairings: Mostly NaruSasuNaru, but I focus more on their relationship than sex.

Rating: Adult++

Summary: After Naruto almost kills Sasuke, the team dynamics shift. Can the trio find balance when their feelings for each other begin to change?

Spoilers: Divergence, so no real spoilers.

URL: http://naruto.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600090042

Feedback: I really really would love some constructive crit for this fic's plot line and pacing. I like what I have so far, but I just feell like I must be doing something wrong, as it's my first and only multi-chapter fic and I'm getting fewer reviews than I'd expect from my experience with my oneshots. Any feedback would be appreciated, but I'm not looking to be an entitlement whore. I just want some real crit! Tough love!

Thanks for taking the time to look at this! I've never used this forum until now, but I hope to see your feedback!

;)~ BRI

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Title: Team Dynamics

Author: PlotAficionado

Fandom: Naruto

Pairings: Mostly NaruSasuNaru, but I focus more on their relationship than sex.

Rating: Adult++

Summary: After Naruto almost kills Sasuke, the team dynamics shift. Can the trio find balance when their feelings for each other begin to change?

Spoilers: Divergence, so no real spoilers.

URL: http://naruto.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600090042

Feedback: I really really would love some constructive crit for this fic's plot line and pacing. I like what I have so far, but I just feell like I must be doing something wrong, as it's my first and only multi-chapter fic and I'm getting fewer reviews than I'd expect from my experience with my oneshots. Any feedback would be appreciated, but I'm not looking to be an entitlement whore. I just want some real crit! Tough love!

Thanks for taking the time to look at this! I've never used this forum until now, but I hope to see your feedback!

:)~ BRI

I would offer some feedback but as you know I'm totally biased. :)

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