saiyansecret Posted November 4, 2012 Report Share Posted November 4, 2012 Hello there. I just posted my second story: Author: saiyansecret Title: "Poolside Encounter" Summary: When Vegeta and Goten find themselves alone by the pool, more than the sun is heating up (One version of Goten's first time). Feedback: I know that reviews are very rare on this site and why, but I'm truly seeking opinions on this and any story I post here. Honestly I'm not happy with this story and would be very grateful for any feedback and advice. Fandom: DBZ Pairing: Vegeta/Goten Warnings: yaoi m/m, anal, just normal m/m sex Chapters: 3 short chapters URL: http://anime2.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600023927 Thank you to all who read and hopefully tell me what you think of it. I greatly value the opinions and advice of my readers. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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