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Twilight Gen 5-1

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New Love, 600094129

• disclaimer states not profiting FROM TWILIGHT, doesn't state not profiting FROM STORY warned 6/17/10

The Persistence of Gravity, 600094332 chapter 6

http://books.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php...2&chapter=6

• halfway through the chapter there is an ENORMOUS gap of several inches, then one short line, then another multi-inch gap. not sure if that is intended or if you see something weird about it.

• disclaimers states not profiting FROM TWILIGHT, doesn't state not profiting FROM STORY warned 6/17/10

Beneath a Shattered Sky, 600094286

• not exactly a whore, but skating close to the line. multiple reminders to review, beginning AND end of every chapter, multiple times...

• disclaimers states not profiting FROM TWILIGHT, doesn't state not profiting FROM STORY warned 6/17/10

Love Survives Death, 600094410

• disclaimers states not profiting FROM TWILIGHT, doesn't state not profiting FROM STORY warned 6/17/10

Saving His Soul, 600093877

Noted in Duplicate Stories also posted in AU (where it really should be) as 600094310

• clear review whoring in AN top of ch.4 but only in 600093877 version which should be deleted. this AN was left out of 600094310 so not an issue if --3877 is deleted i guess.

Bones, 600094172

• sorry—SHOULD HAVE BEEN NOTED TO MOVE TO CROSSOVERS

(crossed with Bones)

'Dysfunction' is a Four-Letter Word, 600093627

• ch.1,2,3,5 stretched

Edward's Egg, 600094249

• sorry—SHOULD HAVE BEEN NOTED TO MOVE TO CROSSOVERS

(crossed with Dragon Ball Z)

The Brother I Never Knew, 600094250

• disclaimers states not profiting FROM TWILIGHT, doesn't state not profiting FROM STORY warned 6/17/10

Polar Night, 600094280

• ch.1,2,3 SQUISHED

• ch.14,15,16 STRETCHED

The Wolves Den, 600094530

• disclaimers states not profiting FROM TWILIGHT, doesn't state not profiting FROM STORY warned 6/17/10

Losing Time, 600094235

• ch.6 is an author note only, not a chapter, delete warned 6/17/10

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