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  1. I'm more so a huge yaoi fan, but when I watched Gundam Wing, I couldn't bring myself to side with the yaoi in that show (seemed to me Heero leaned toward asexual more than anything). So, long, long ago, when I had my old files which I never retrieved when my old computer had been destroyed by a virus, I had read this multi chapter stories. It was soooo good, I mean the detail and the way the plot just twisted and turned here and there - I absoluetly adored this story. However, no matter how hard I try to look for it, I can't seem to find the story. I can't remember if I got if off FanFiction.net or some personal website dedicated to Gundam Wing fics revolving around Heero and Relena. I just don't remember, but, I figured it wouldn't hurt to ask around if anyone would happen to know this story. Here is what I can best summarize the story from beginning to further out toward the end (though those chapters are blurrier to me). Relena is going into town, I believe she is to be engaged to a rich Duke (which is Traize) but Relena despises the man and wishes to not marry him. Noin is with Relena and as they look around the harbor for trade and goods, a band of pirates strolls into the market (Heero, Duo, I think Sally, and for sure there was Hildy and I can't remember who else was in the group but it wasn't all of the Gundam soldiers) and they kidnap Relena so as to get ransomed money later. They escape onto their ship and sail further out to see with Relena on their ship now (I don't believe Noin was taken with them). Of course they treat Relena unkindly and mock her for being a rich snobbish girl (at least Heero does because he hates rich snobbish people). While sailing for a while on the ship, I believe they encounter a violent storm. I don't remember if they were tossed off their ship or if the ship sank, but they escaped on a small raft. Relena almost drowned, but she was grabbed and thrown onto the raft boat by Heero and they all rowed toward the nearest piece of land they could find. Now they're all stranded on this island and must make due with getting along and finding food and setting camp. The hate Heero had toward Relena changed as Relena's personality has changed and she's no longer the snobbish rich girl he perceived her to be from the start. Romance ensues on the island and as the days pass, I believe a ship arrives at the island and it is Traize or either is army looking for Relena or maybe it was Noin looking for Relena (I'm really starting to wonder if Noin was actually with Relena the entire time of being with the pirates or some other girl close to Relena but I doubt it was Dorthy). The pirates are taken into shackles on the ship while Relena is being fretted over, but Relena is more worried of what the people plan to do with Heero and the others as she has grown fond of them and doesn't see them as the enemy. They arrive back into the country lands and Traize is there to claim Relena and to lock Heero and the others up, having an idea himself that Heero had been trysting with his finance. This is where it gets pretty foggy in my memory, but somehow Heero escapes and challenges Traize in a sword duel with the deal being that Relena can be free from this forced marriage or something like that. The duel turns into a big fight and Taize cheats by pulling out a pistol. Heero didn't die, but I think he was injured and in the meantime I think Relena had forced Qautra to lead her to where Traize was to save Heero from death (I think Quatra was working for Traize, I'm not entirely sure). I can't remember what happened from there and I don't know if Traize was killed, but it ends I believe with Relena writing a letter to her brother, telling him she was happy now and I don't know if she mentioned in the letter that she was pregnant but I know in the story it was told she was pregnant then. She is sailing out to seas with her 'husband' (which is Heero). This is all I can clearly and not so clearly remember this story. It had many chapters and was a long, and very well written story - I just wish I could find it and re-read it again. If anyone happens to know anything about a story that sounds just like this or nearly like this, then please let me know!
  2. For months now, I've been looking for someone who would be interested in Beta'ing a few of my stories-in-progress. The fandom is Dragonball Z and the pairing is VejitaxGohan. Each of these stories have different genres and a different setting, for example, one of the stories is of the vampire realm. For people who are very interested or very likely to Beta for my stories or one of them, please post here your response. If you would like more information on the stories to choose which one you would help Beta for, ask me and you can tell me how you'd like for me to give you some samples of the stories. I REALLY need a Beta (although for this current month of December, I'm working on outlining and writing out the stories).
  3. Greetings beta's seeking stories! I'm at the point where I have enough material to start off my story and official put it out for viewers to read. Of course, I'm not finished with it, but the first couple chapters all set to go. I need a Beta who has another creative mind such as myself, who can check-over my material, give feedback, and maybe throw out more ideas and inspiration when I suggest if the pathway to the left or to the right is one this story should travel down. The official title of this story is Within Darkness. It revolves around the myth of pure blood vampires, turned vampires and dhampirs - BUT IN NO WAY ARE THEY PATHETIC BEINGS AS SOME MYTHS MAKE THEM OUT TO BE! Pure blood vampires: Of course they will have an irritation toward sunlight because if you biologically think about it, the paler your skin is when unprotected and reveled in the sun's light (especially if you can imagine having very thin blood, being anemic, or in a vampire's case having barely any living blood cells within your body), the more your skill will burn and cook (hence why in some myths, vampires suddenly catch fire, but there won't be vampires randomly igniting in just 5 seconds within sunlight in THIS story). Turned vampires: I don't really know an exact name for them, but I suppose they're just referred to as vampires. Pure bloods are very scares and typically will breed within each other to keep their pure blood PURE, rather than mating with turned vampires, dhampirs, or any other species. A turned vampire has a bond/relationship with its maker but they do not have to be lovers or even close friends. It's a pure blood vampire's choice when he/she wants to create a being just like them, although when the process does happen, the pure blood relies entirely on instincts to make the change. Not all who are being changed are strong enough to survive the process. Dhampir: Half vampire hybrids born with vampire strengths and very limited weaknesses. The dhampir society feeds only on their non-vampire half blood's food. Drinking the blood of a pure blood vampire is absolutely forbidden within their society for reasons that will be further relieved in later chapters of this story. Okay, so now that you have a clue of the material, now for the characters focused in this story. The first main character is Vegeta and this is how I've mean brain-washed to spell his name of which I wouldn't object to spelling his name the Japanese way which is Bejita. I've seen in a lot of stories that people continue to spell his name V-E-G-E-T-A so I might stick with that spelling (even though I know its incorrect). The second main character is Gohan and his age, or should I say body shape and size, is when he's 14-years-old but still the same size he was when he killed Cell. I discovered this pairing would be considered Shota (older male with a younger male) because Vegeta is a grown adult and Gohan is a young teenager, but if you think about it, Gohan is not entirely a human so his body doesn't grow up as fast as his human age increases in order to sustain a youthful figure, outliving a normal human's life span (hint: Gohan in this story is a dhampir). I'd like send the first chapter (which is not extremely long) to those who wish to beta for Within Darkness. I only need one beta, so I'll see who best fits the position as a beta for this story of mine and of course if the person is going to love this story as much as I'm loving it. And the story line doesn't entirely sync with Dragon Ball Z's time chart, for example, Vegeta-sei (Planet Vegeta) still exists in this story as well as King Vegeta, Nappa, and Raditz are still alive, and Goku happens to be in the Otherworld by the time Vegeta arrives on Earth and meets Gohan (meaning Goku isn't in this story much, only mentioned here and there in conversation and photograph pictures). I don't bash characters, only perceive them as they've been meant to be perceived in the series based off their character, behavior, and relations. That's all I'm going to put down for the reference material, but any concerns you have which I did not explain or mention in here you are welcome to contact me and ask. I'd like to be able to Instant Message my Beta so its back-to-back instant conversation focused on Within Darkness (instead of having to wait between hours for an email reply).
  4. Thanks for trying out this challenge! I'm very interested to see in the end how you create this!
  5. Alrighty. I’ve decided for the very first time to post a challenge! /pomp pomp cheer/ Let’s get started, shall we? First off, here are the basics in simple short words: Anime: Dragonball Z (ONLY!! No Dragonball or Dragonball GT as it defies the purpose of the challenge). Main characters: Gohan and Goku Age group: Teen and up (Teen being the youngest group but mainly hoping to look in the older ages) Content: It’s mainly your choice. There can be cussing here and there to express character and change of moods, there can be violence if necessary, and natural nude as I call it which is not in any way related with sex (example: family bathing together/ man-to-man time). Here’s the main objective. Gohan is to be within his nearing teens or in his teens before the end of DBZ when DBZ GT was about to start up afterward. I hardly see any stories where Goku is as overly protective of his first son, especially when Goku feels his son needs him the most during his era of entering into puberty soon. I was hoping to see a story portraying this close bond between father and son and in no way does it have to be incest unless you wish it to be. I’m thinking that if Vegeta were to interfere between the bond Goku and Gohan have, that would stir up a brawl to write about, but that’s a suggestion. I do hope there’s someone who will be willing to write something like this. It’s very far stretched where you can make it your own, I only ask that you focus on that possessive streak Goku has when it comes to sharing people that are his, as that is a saiyajin trait to be possessive of what is theirs. I think it wasn’t until I saw a short drawn comic by a fan when Gohan was a baby being held by Chichi and he gave a kiss to Goku’s cheek. Stunted and heart-warmed by the adorableness of his son, Goku took Gohan in his arms and growled at anyone else that tried nearing or touching the baby. I thought it was hilarious and cute, this protective side of Goku coming forth. Maybe I’ll write my own story of Goku’s protective maternal nature toward Gohan after I’ve finished writing my four other stories of Dragonball Z that are still under construction. Good luck!! ~SasuNaru723~
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