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  1. Chapter 6 and 7 Review Replies: qwerty: SO GOOD! Crying at that last scene. Can't wait for the baby to arrive. ---Thank you! I am so happy you enjoyed it so much Hope they were happy/good tears though. The baby will be here with the final chapter and I hope you enjoy it J Jan: Lol, Harry could never due things as plan, can he? Good thing Fenrir was able to take him back home where they'll be safe. Please update chapter 8 soon. ---Of course Harry has to mess up the plan He can never just go quietly. Luckily he isn’t alone this time xxx
  2. Chapter 4 and 5 Review Replies: Jan: Yes, that's just Harry and I feel sorry for who ever thinks they can change him. muahahahaha!) Please update chapter 5 soon. I feel for Remus, truly I do, but he needs to stop making this about himself and making Teddy feel like now there is something wrong with him, please update chapter 6 soon. ----I agree Unchangeable, unconquerable and Fenrir loves him for it. I agree with you. He is so worried Teddy will suffer what he did that he doesn’t realise what problems he may cause him xx phoenix-rob: Let's hope Remus can get over his hangups and completely accept his wolf and his current life. Although the packs are now allied I have a horrible feeling in regards to Dromon especially once Harry has his baby and returns to help. Please let Fenrir not only support but keep Harry safe. ------He has come quite far. I think seeing his son go down even a remotely similar track was a shock to his system, however. Poor Teddy handled it better than he did X3 I hope that Dromon and the others will surprise you B: It's a much less sexually charged story than the first, but it's interesting to see how everyone's life is shaping up a few years after the end of the last. -----yeah exactly : ) An extended epilogue of sorts to show where they are after the events of the first story. That’s how I think of it anyway. Glad you’re enjoying xx
  3. Chapter 3 Review Replies: staar: nice read and hope that defense teacher don't hurt him ok ....love that his prey's again !!!!! and Draco with a girl , so cute but man his dad is still the same an asshole!!!! see you soon !!!! ----Thank you and you will find out what the defence instructor is about in the next chapter don't worry Glad you liked little Astrid! Jan: Oh, I truly hope it's just his imagination and not a real danger cause he really needs a break from all the drama, please update chapter 4 soon. ----You shall find out very soon Poor Harry, he invites drama doesnt he? lol
  4. Hello! This is my new topic that I will use to reply to my reviews on my latest story “Auribus Teneo Lupum II: Praeditos” since I believe if you guys take the time to review my work it's only fair I reply to them. I have decided to make this topic here so that I can do that without clogging up the actual AdultFanFiction site with huge replies and author's notes. No one has to be registered to reply Chapter 1 and 2 Replies: Janelle: Great chapter! You handled the wolf mating scene well. Although I don't mind the idea of a sexually charged mating ... I really like how this was not sexually motivated. It was a means to an end and intimate without causing further sexual damage to Harry. The wolf laying out the cloak was a nice touch to show he remembers the last time and doesn't want his mate to be uncomfortable with the situation as he was last time. Update soon! ----Thank you. I'm glad you thought so. I wanted it to come across as Harry overcoming his reservations/fears and Fenrir still showing his care for him even as a wolf. I'm glad it worked that way. I like the idea of a chivalrous wolf Sorry for the delayed update (we had a power cut last night) hope you enjoy! Eron: Can't wait to see what you do with the sequel. I'd love to see what happens to Marrok, if he ever gets someone of his own, and even see more little Kirian's running around. ----Hope you're enjoying the sequel so far. I have a little snippet of Marrok's future to come don't worry. Jan: Its good to see Harry was able to fight his fears, and also able to enjoy it😊 please update chapter 3 soon.] -------I'm glad you liked Harry facing his fears. I hope you like the next chapter just as much. JBlack: I've been waiting for this moment for nearly a year!! So happy to see that you and your awesome mind are at it again!! Love the story thus far...and I appreciate your take on Lucius. I have always been a Lucius fan. He's a complex character and I'm glad you didn't completely demonize him. He's stubborn and definitely holds on to old prejudices, but loves his family all the same, reguardless of his faults. I think you remain true to JKR's characterization of all these guys, while bending them to your will. THAT is not an easy task and I applaud you for it. One question though, is Harry really 25? Because if Kirian and Teddy are 5ish, wouldn't Harry be 23? The timeline has confused me slightly. But I love these stories so I can overlook anything at this point. Can't wait for next week!! ------I know it's been so long hasn't it?! Insane. I'm glad so far it has been worth the wait though. I do love Lucius in an odd way XD I don't believe in completely 'evil' characters so i know what you mean, I get a little eye tick or something when writers make such complex characters flat. Woops no sorry I made a goof there XD Kirian is nearly 5 and Harry had him when he was 18 so Harry would be 22 at this point (the spring) so yes, sorry about that I will fix that now. What a boob Thanks for pointing that out. Anon: Lovely start! Glad to read more of your AU. ---Thank you! Anon: Loved it, looking forward to the rest. -----Thank you kindly Green-Extreme-Ninjetti13: I was reading this and was wondering if we're gonna see Ginny with a new guy? -----Ginny isn't a main character in this story but you do find out where she's at and who she is with and you do see her a few times. We see her happy. Kain: So happy to see this continuation. Absolutely loved the previous story and am glad that we are getting too see more of this verse. This chapter had everything, humor, fluff, smut and a bit of drama near the end(thanks to head douche Lucius). Remus's reluctance is understandable considering the life he had but it is nice too see how far he has come and that he has learned to accept Harry and Fenrir's relationship and forgive the latter for giving him the bite as a child. While time-skips are not my favorite thing, it's understandable here and it was nice too see how Harry and Fenrirs son has grown and that Draco and Echo now have a daughter and it was cute too see Narcissa dote on her despite the circumstances of her birth. Happy too see that Lucius faced some form of punishment as he is in the top 5 of my least favorite HP characters. The man even when he has been saved from going to prison as he deserves, still has to find a way to be a dick to people and ruin an otherwise pleasant occasion. Good on Draco for calling his old man out on his behavior. Curious too see whether or not Harry decides to have another kid. -waits patiently for the next chapter- ------------------I'm so happy you enjoyed the first story so much, and that so far you're enjoying the sequel. I hope my little jumps aren't too big of a time hop, we do progress over a few weeks sometimes in the sequel so i hope that's alright, I know what you mean sometimes I find big time jumps hard to take. We won't have any huge 'year' jumps at any rate I loved writing a developed, grown Draco standing up for himself for once so I'm glad you did too. Hope you continue to enjoy the sequel!
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    Chapter 26 Review Replies: staar: So good , that was so nice and harry seems very happy.......Thanks for this and hope you feel better soon !!!!! --------------I feel lots better thank you So happy you liked the previous chapter. Hope you are as happy as Harry with the next one Kain: Holy god, feels to the left, and feels to the right. The reunion with the pack and Harry being comfortable with calling the valley home now got me right in the soul. And the talk between him and Hermione was adorable. -On a smaller note I am happy that unlike in cannon you actually gave some kind of punishment to Lucius. Stuck in his house for the next 30 years, no longer able to wield a wand and his only heir is now going to be mated to a wolf. So he can kiss that pure blood line goodbye. That might be worse than Azkaban for him lol. Sweet that Narcissa is just happy for Draco and doesn't seem to care about him loving a Werewolf. -Happy to see the pack welcoming Remus. -Love that Harry is not excusing Fenrir's more base qualities but is also not ignoring his more noble traits. A good man who has done bad things but tries to make up for some of them at least and most of it was to protect the pack and those he loved. -Fenrir setting up things in there den so Harry can see his friends/pseudo-family anytime he likes despite his feelings for the wizarding world at large. -make up sex is the best sex. -Harry being that bridge that is starting to reconnect the normal wizards with the wolves. --------So many feels! *___* Harry finally having a home does feel so wonderful. And I agree with you, Lucius needs a bit of punishment He was quite naughty. I might show ‘dinner at the Malfoy’s’ in the sequel as I think it’d be quite amusing lol. I wanted to get a fine balance at the end: Harry doesn’t excuse Fenrir’s mistakes but he has learned to live with them, like you say, that he’s a good man who’s done bad things, as have most good men. He touches on it again in chapter 27 but I wanted to show a Harry who isn’t blindly forgetting it all, just moving forward. I’m glad you feel I did that well Thank you for your review hunny, please enjoy the next chapter! xxx Jan: Finally he's with the pack, not to mention he also finally understands what's his true feelings for Fenrir, the ending to this chapter was simply romantic, and sweet please update chapter 27 soon, I can't wait for more ^_~ ----------So happy you liked the last chapter X3 I think we all deserved some warm fuzzy feelings after all that angst and drama~ Harry is finally at a place of understanding and happiness
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    Chapter 25 review replies: Staar:- so happy for them !!!!!!! doing happy dance here !!!! ??Draco will be ok ??? ------Me too, it’s been a long time coming. There actually is dancing in the next chapter haha! Draco will be ok. You will see a bit more of him before the story ends properly xx Jan:- Lol, both Fenrir and Harry can be silly at times, that's what makes them so lovable I can't wait to see how to pack welcomes Hermione and Ron, more so seeing Harry again and the newest addition ^_~ please update chapter 26 soon. ------They can be very pig-headed and stubborn both of them, bless the pair XD Hopefully Kirian will grow up a bit better adjusted than them lol. I hope the welcoming of Ron and Hermione to the pack doesn’t disappoint X3 You just know everyone is going to love Kirian xxx Jan:- Great chapter, loved it. ------Thanks so much! x
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    Chapter 23 Review Replies: Athanata_Thana: Hi, your story is so great. I hope, harry rise again from the death as in the book or film to come back to Fenrir und Kirian and all the others. I cant wait for the new chapter. Lovely greetings, Athanata ------------Thanks so much! Your question will be answered in chapter 24 indigowaves2: Every time I managed to stop myself from crying all I had to do was read a little further and I started up again. This chapter was heartbreaking and so well written. I could feel the love he had for his son and his despair at having to leave, you made it come alive. Once again, this was so well written. I hope he lives again like he did in the book, I am a sucker for happy endings and I don't want to cry anymore. ------------Thank you so much for letting me know you found it well-written. I so wanted to get it right as the whole story has been leading up to that point. I wanted his despair and love to be real so I am glad you think I did that justice. Hope you like chapter 24 staar: Well what can I say but that I'm still crying here.....hope the next chapter fixes all of this !!!!!!!!!! ------------I hope it fixed it too Jan: Wow, if your intention in this last chapter was to make people cry, well I applaud you cause you have succeeded, I was in tears by the end of this chapter (sniff) please update chapter 24 soon. ------------I half did/half didn't want to make people cry X3 I never wanted to make people cry but at the same time, I suppose if i did then I wrote it well? Hope so anyway. Hope you like chapter 24 xx Pouika : Hello, I start to read your strory (and found where let my review) to say your story it's good. I go to read the chapter 9 now ! 5Sorry for my english not very well, i'm french) ------------Thank you so much! I am so happy you're enjoying the story! Janelle: Oh my, this is not what I expected at all, but I love what you've done! If Harry had been hit by a killing curse (which is what I thought would happen) then considering the outcome in JK Rowling's plot line we readers would expect Harry to come back to life, to choose life so he can raise his baby and be with Fenrir. But now you have written it that Harry's body is damaged, throat cut open, so us readers don't even know now if Harry can come back because his body is fatally wounded. The suspense is killing me! I was crying all the way through this chapter ... and the chapter before because of Harry's heartache, knowing he'll have to leave his baby boy. I'm going back and forth on whether you are killing Harry off or not. At this point I'm hoping that either A) Fenrir heals Harry's wounds by licking them closed before running off to avenge Harry's death ... or B) Harry will come back to his body and have to shift into his wolf form right away in order to heal himself quickly, like what Fenrir was getting Marrok to do. So, there's hope yet in my heart that Harry will survive ... but I've read stories where he is killed off ... so I'm afraid that is still an option in this story. UPDATE SOON! ------------I am so happy you love what I've done X3 I like that the story sort of starts from canon and that I made Fenrir's history/character/life fit into canon as such, but I wanted to go somewhere different with the battle and the ending of my story. I didnt want to rewrite Deathly Hallows' ending. I hope you and everyone else approve Your questions will be answered in chapter 24 - I hope you enjoy it. Thanks again! xxx
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    Chapter 22 Review Replies: Japhia: OMG What a cliff hanger! Thank you for the update! -----Sorry for the cliffie. Unfortunately the next one is worse : ( I hope you can forgive me and hang in there – it’ll be worth it I promise x Janelle: I've been re-reading this story and love it all over again! ----Aww really? That is such a big compliment! I am so happy you love it so much Rii: *flails* a cliff-hanger??? *flails again* Thanks for the new chapter - even if you are trying to torture us with the cliffy ----So sorry for the cliff-hanger and advanced apologies for the next one too I just ran out of time writing the chapter and couldn’t write any further. Hope you can forgive me xxx
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    Chapter Twenty-One Review Replies: staar: Well Ginny needs to get over herself and move on ok !!!!!! hope Harry stays with Fenair ,,, Thanks !!!! --------------Ginny will recover bless her. : ( An you’ll have to wait and see what Harry does Kain: Very nicely done, hot, and heartwarming all rolled up in one nice bundle. Glad too see Remus start to embrace his wolf side and learn to trust Fenrir, at least a little bit. Was curious as to when the Weasley's would show up and I cannot thank you enough for how you handled the reunion. Mr. and Mrs Weasley have ever reason under the sun to want to geld Fenrir, but are putting aside there anger out of love and trust for Harry. I especially liked how you handled the scene with Ginny. It felt very natural and anyone in her situation would question the validity of harry's relationship with the guy who mauled there brother. Almost ANY other writer would have taken the chance to make Ginny into some unholy hell bitch and bash the hell out of her but you are a cut above the rabble and are a master of characterization. When her and Harry ended things there was always the chance of renewing there relationship and she never stopped loving him so of course this would come as a big shock to her. I am a big fan of Ginny(more in the books than movies) and love how you handled this. So I take it that Fenrir is going to alpha up and take responsibility and personally apologize to Molly and Aurthur for what he did to there son? Would love too see Fleur go veela on his ass over what he did to her man despite the fact that the scars don't bother her and whether or not Bill will accept an apology. I like the dynamic character development you have given to Fenrir, you have kept mostly to canon and made believable alterations while making it obvious that while he was never an "evil" guy he was by no means soft and Harry is making him a better man. side not, love den mothers Hermione and Remus lol. They just dote on that boy so much. Meant to attach this to my previous review, and I apologize if you have already been asked this and it has been answered, but do you accept story prompts? And if so are you open to writing femslash? --------------Thanks so much So glad you’re still enoying it so much. Also glad you feel I handled the Weasley reunion well. Ahhh ‘bashing’ or whatever people call it really makes me cringe X___X I think it can ruin a good story so I always make a point of never doing that. Just because she is a potential threat to the main pairing doesn’t mean she is suddenly inhuman, ya know? Lol Glad you feel the same XD I actually felt really awful writing that scene ‘cause I know she must’ve been in a lot of pain : ( Like you say, she had every reason to think Harry would come back to her. Harry feels gutted for hurting her. Fenrir is going to apologise in his Fenrir-ish way. You won’t see it but Harry mentions it to confirm that is what happened in the story and it’ll be referred to later He does it for Harry of course. I don’t know if I’ll write Fleur and Bill in later. Might do if it fits, I never thought about it before you mentioned it : ) You think I should? So happy you like the Fenrir Dynamic. Like you say I stole JKR’s canon ideas and developed them for my own nefarious ends to try and make it seem more real. Glad you think it works : ) And I am open to writing femslash but I really have no time at the moment : ( You guys have pretty much caught up to where I’m actually writing this now so I’m frantically putting all my spare time into writing each new chapter. On top of work and family etc. I really don’t have enough time for a new story so I’m really sorry : ( Maybe a one-shot sometime in the future when this one is over but I can’t promise anything? What did you have in mind? xxxx
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    Chapter 20 Review Replies: delia cerrano: Wow! All the wolves...Fenrir, Hemmings, the other pack wolf, even Remus. Not mention Harry whose trying on purpose this time and even a really cute baby wolf...wolflette? no I guess cub. Even that sounds to big for the little sweetie. Remus is really trying to help Harry by trying to be a rough tough wolf which he has always avoided. Maybe it will help him stop denying what he is. --------Thank you so much for the ‘wow’ makes me smile after my rubbish week Thanks hunny. Bless Remus, he makes such progress in the next chapter. I hope you like it just as much xx staar: OMG you need to update soon !!!!! you can't leave me hanging like this !!!!!!!!! you know I love Lupin but man he is an idiot !!!!!!! always thinking everything wrong and jumping into things !!!! --------Sorry for the cliffhanger – there was no nice place to cut the chapter. Hope you can forgive me X3 Don’t worry Remus makes a lot of progress in the next chappie. xxx Jan: Remus and his self righteousness, what to do with him? Hmm.... Please update chapter 21 soon. --------Remus makes a lot of progress in chapter 21 don’t worry Kain: Just came across this recently and am happy to say that it is all confirmed canon and just felt like sharing since there is a little mention of lupins dad,Lyall: --------Some of it is yes I took everything JKR had in canon and gave it a twist – I hope you enjoyed that it was based on ‘fact’ xxx
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    Chapter 19 Review Replies: lily: I loved it it was awesome I love the baby's name I loved how everybody reacted and I'm happy that the way Hermione apologize and Remus kind of deserve what he got great way to put how he talk to me remus about transforming into the werewolf I kind of wish you might have put a little more but that's probably next chapter and I'll wait for that or whatever keep on writing can't wait for the next chapter you're awesome ----------------So happy you liked it and the baby’s name X3 Harry mentions about the wolf again later don’t worry. Also more development between Remus and Remus and Fenrir’s tension XD Hope you like the next chapter too X3 Anon: kirian love the name !!!!!!!! that went well !!!! happy they are together again....thanks for the update !!!!!!! ----------------Thank you so glad you loved his name. Took me ages to pick it lol. Courtney: Trust me, I'm definately still enjoying your story, and have been since you posted the first chapter. ...God dammit Remus...you started the chapter off well, and then you just failed miserably. I'm rooting for him though; he got what he deserved from Fenrir, but I just want him to be able to accept himself. Is that too much to ask? :'( Kirian is a perfect name for the baby! So clever I'm glad they are finally reunited and I'm glad you didn't kill everyone! I am eager for them to return back home but I'd be surprised if that goes smoothly. Until next time dear! I'll try and be patient. xx ----------------Yay thank you Remus is learning and growing slowly, he’s had a lot to take in over the last few chapters but he’s getting there with a little help It definitely won’t go smoothly with me at the wheel xxxx
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    Chapter 18 Review replies: delia cerrano: Terrific chapter but now I'm anxious for Fenrir to come back and straighten everyone out especially Remus and Ron! Sorry but Hermione does come off as a "know it all" and like it's the way things should be is the only right way therefor do it or believe it whatever...too bad what Harry wants ir feels. He doesn't owe his, Fenrir's or his baby's life to the wizarding world. Let them get off their duffs and habdle Voldie themselves not a teenager whose been used and abused by everyone yet expected to willingly give his everything for them. ---------------Thanks so much. So glad you liked. Fenrir will be back VERY soon Hermione is a bit of a know-it-all bless her lol. She cares in her way. Thanks for your review hunny : ) xxx Kain: Absolutely marvelous chapter, my favorite so far. The feels were all over the place in this chapter. Now not to play devils advocate but both sides screwed the pooch on this one. Both sides kept secrets from each other and despite the wolves anger at there trust being abused, being quite on the subject of Harry wasn't the smart way to handle people who are worried about their friend and already have issues with you. And despite everything I like how the wolves seem to regard Hermione at least with some level of respect/kindness despite her being a witch. I love how you wrote everyone in this chapter, there was no real bad guy and blame went in every direction and both sides had points. It's very nice when an author can reach that kind of balance. Remus's feelings while harsh and misguided are also very believable. The bite, as far as he is concerned ruined his life and too hear that it was "whoopsie daisy" on Fenrir's part couldn't have made him feel any better. While we as readers know there is more to the wolves than what has been revealed, Remus as far as he understands it has every reason to be hateful towards them. Really felt for Harry in this chapter, poor guy is trying to balance between both worlds, his wolf side and his human wizard side. Although I did find it humorously ironic at his reaction at Snape and Hermione unintentionally throwing his words of not knowing the full story back at him. I love how you showed the intense bond between Harry and his friends and particularly how Hermione was the first to accept what has happened. Even in canon and perhaps more so than even Ron, she has always had his back first and foremost and not once in all 7 books turned on him. Her being all for the rights of magical creatures might also have something to do with her accepting nature. Adorable how she reassured harry that he was not a freak. The biggest compliment I could give on this chapter was how believable every thing was. Everyone was in character(within the confines of this story that is) and people questioned Harry and brought up Stockholm Syndrome as a possible reason for how he was acting and Harry telling them what has happened. Also loved how now that he is no longer feral he is absolutely freaking the fuck out about parenthood lol. There just a very natural progression. -waits patiently for the next chapter- -----------------------Awww yay thank you so much!! I was so nervous that everyone would be disappointed because it seemed like everyone was expecting Harry to explode. So I’m thrilled that this is one of your favourite chapters X3 I heartily agree with you that both sides messed it up and that there is blame on both sides – really happy you think I wrote it well, as I don’t think there are good/bad in this situation. It was all misunderstanding and thoughtlessness on everyone’s parts : ) So happy you think I achieved that balance I was so hoping for. I think you hit the nail on the head with Remus (seriously, I think you’re peeking into a window in my brain lol). Harry in his determination to defend Fenrir and make them understand him, is basically trying to brush off what Remus considers the worst part of his life. Another reason why Remus is finding it hard to understand him and to believe it’s really Harry who is saying these things. LOL I do love writing Harry that way, he is a bit of a hypocrite when it comes to Snape. He definitely is struggling to find a balance between his wolf and his human so to speak. I agree with you that Hermione is always the one that had his back – whatever happened. I adore their friendship. Saying how real and in character it all was really is the best compliment as that is the thing I always want to achieve first and foremost. So happy you mentioned that, and that you think it was well done. I think it could’ve gone horribly OTT and out of character and I didn’t want to do that. Your comments really have made my day thank you so much pickle xxxx Jan: I could understand why Remus may be so uptight when it comes to Fenrir, but I'll never understand why do people think that they know you best (when they don't take the time to truly know you), or that they have the right to take actions in your best interest, when it's not your life to mess with to begin with, why can't people worry for themselves and not butt-in in others life. I truly hope Fenrir puts Remus and the others in their place. Please update chapter 19 soon. ---------------Some people think because they care that gives them the right to tell you what to do – I suppose that’s better than the people that just butt in for the drama Fenrir is definitely going to have something to say don’t worry xx staar: wow just like Harry to do things his way.....hope greenback comes fast....good read thanks !!!!! ---------He definitely does have his own flair Lol Fenrir will be back soon. Thank you for your review Hope you continue to enjoy xx Blind apprentice: Just wanted to say, that I have thoroughly enjoyed reading the story. It's been nice to watch the characters develop, I'll be interested to see what happens when his alpha returns. I'm also curious to see what happened at the end of the battle. Great story, keep up the good work, I hope you enjoyed your time with your family for Thanksgiving. Many thanks as always. ---------------Thanks so much : ) Your words really mean a lot. Fenrir will be back VERY soon, have no fear. I hope you’re not disappointed with the next chapter x lily: it was awesome keep on writing can't wait for the next chapter ---------------Thank you : ) Courtney: Hey, hun! So, I haven't had much time to sit and review the past couple chapters so I'm making time to do it right now! The past two chalters literally had me pacing the floor...Ulric-I hated him but now I'm devastated he's gone. I guess he was just a stubborn old man, with good intentions for the pack. I can respect him now. I hope no one else major is dead... Now, can I just say I loved the birthing scene in some, weird disturbing way? I like how you didn't glorify any of it, because let's face it, it's not the prettiest thing. I can't wait to hear the baby's name once Fenrir is back in the picture. As for Remus, I feel so bad for him, and I hope he come around. He clearly has love for Harry and I hope he learns to accept him...and himself, for what they are. Thanks for killing the rogue werewolves, they had to go. Anyways, great job as always and I cannot wait for the new chapter tonight. I'll be looking for it! Xx ---------------No problem pickle just hope you’re well and still enjoying the fic : ) Thrilled that you loved the birth scene. I wanted it to be real, for it to make sense and not be all fluffy and glossed over. It was morbidly fun to write as a woman lol. Baby’s name is revealed in chapter 19 – in fact his name meaning is the chapter title ; ) Janelle: Amazing story. I hope Remus comes around soon. I'm surprised Harry didn't take the initiative to name the baby before Fenrir gets a say. I figured he'd want to name him James and at the same time show Fenrir that he isn't some submissive to be ordered about. Although, Harry is beginning to realize his feelings for Fenrir and he's in a more instinctual state of mind right now ... so I can see why he'd wait for Fenrir. I hope Fenrir, to prove his love/consideration for Harry, asks for Harry's input. UPDATE SOON! I'm dying for Fenrir to show up! ---------------Thank you so much! Haha no baby James in this story. I’d like to think Harry sort of realises that he and Fenrir are in this together, wants to show Fenrir how he’s come to accept most of the werewolf traditions and ideas as his own now to – just like Fenrir is starting to accept those pesky human emotions I hope you like the way the naming comes out and that it doesn’t disappoint xx
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    "Auribus Teneo Lupum" Fenrir/Harry Story Review Replies

    Chapter 17 Review replies: countrygirl10: Wow...just wow. That chapter was amazing. The scene setup and the action was epic. And then Remus and Hermione had to show up and ruin Harry's quiet time with the pup! I look forward to the next chapter and how Fenir is going to go bat-shit crazy! ---------Thank you so much hunny. I’m so glad you liked it. Fenrir is going to go mental delia cerrano: A very "realistic" job on the birth of Harry's little one. So Remus and Hermione butted in again...geez. Where's Fenrir?? --------Thank you – I so wanted to get the right balance between gore/detail in the birth Fenrir is coming xxx Ashell: When I found out that it was Harry's friends that had caused his pack to be attacked and killed it was hard to take. So much bloodshed from misguided good intentions: Harry wanting to defeat Voldemort so he sent off Greyback to get his friends with the strongest pack members. Then said friends taking away Harry from his pack which at the same time brought on a devastating attack. I don't see how Greyback is ever going to forgive Harry's friends or how Harry himself is going to deal with the guilt. Don't get me wrong though, this chapter is amazing and has only further sucked me into this story and I did not think that was possible. I really hope Greyback gets back to Harry soon, he needs to be by his son! (See what I mean by sucked into this story?) I really liked how you explained how Harry's body was able to give birth. I often have a hard time with Mpreg fics because that part is never explained and it's a point I can't get over. I wonder how long Harry will remain in Werewolf mode and what it will take to convince his friends to trust Greyback. I meant to tell you this earlier but it melted my heart that Harry called his baby little bludger. It was such a nice way to blend him accepting his baby as something real with a reminder of his old (wizarding) life. Also, thank you SO much for being a regular updater. I have lost track of the amount of stories that I have fallen in love with to just be abandoned by their authors or to be updated once every six months if that. I just realized, since Harry escaped doesn't that mean that Greyback should die because of the unbreakable vow? Seriously hope I am just confused on the matter. -----I am so glad you liked the chapter even though it was hard to take – and even more pleased that you’re been sucked further into the story Thank you for letting me know you appreciated the ‘science’ of the birth too. I really wanted it to be real, as like you, I feel that a lot of MPREGs are missing that. Fenrir didn’t let Harry escape or help him to, he was taken so he didn’t forfeit the vow, he is safe. If Voldemort decides to take a peak into Harry's head any time he is away from Fenrir though, then he is vulnerable. Awww I will never give up on this story. I’ve written most of it anyway so it’d be impossible And I couldn’t do that after we’ve all come so far together. xxxx Anon: I could not despise Remus and Hermione more at the moment. -----------Lol their hearts were in the right place x3
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    "Auribus Teneo Lupum" Fenrir/Harry Story Review Replies

    Chapter 16 Review replies: delia cerrano: A packed chapter! Some things explained like Fenrirs' parents death and biting Remas. Harry and Fenrir seem to be coming to an understanding with each other as well as with the pack (Ulric for example) and with Malfoy. -------Thank you – so glad you liked it all. This next chapter has a lot of action. I hope you like it just as much! Jan: Looks like Fenrir is gonna come back to find out that he's a father please update chapter 17 soon. --------I’m not saying nothing ; ) Lol. Hope you like chapter 17! *nervous* Courtney: That first scene nearly made me cry. Poor Fenrir...I'm glad to have more insight as to how Fenrir became Fenrir-since JKR offers so little to his background - it's a fun angle on his character. Also, I'm pretty sure "Drecho" is one of the cutest pairings ever. Normally I like dominate and cocky Draco (because that is how I love me some Drarry), but with Echo, he's kind of adorable in his own stubborn way...man, I feel like I ramble way too much when I leave you reviews but I feel like I have to smother your amazing story with love! Can't wait for Friday hope you are well! ---------Sorry for nearly making you cry *hugs* Glad you liked the story. And aww ‘Drecho’ I like that so cute XD I think Draco sort of tops from the bottom in his stubborn, headstrong, loveable arrogant way I’m sure Echo would’ve be averse to switching as well in the future lol. Them boys mix it up. Thank you so much for your comments again sweetheart. Hope you like the next chapter just as much!
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    "Auribus Teneo Lupum" Fenrir/Harry Story Review Replies

    Chapter 15 Review replies: Wynja: My heart really, really aches for Fenrir... Love the Malfoy development! *grin* -------------It will ache even more after this next chapter : ( And haha glad you like Draco’s development too XD I love him x Jan: I'm truly happy that Harry Fenrir are both making progress with their relationship, and that Draco is falling for a werewolf ^_~ but I still don't care that Lupin Sr. wasn't the one abussing his son, because at the end of it all he knew his son was being raped, he knew who it was, he knew and forbid his son from telling his own mother, he knew and did NOTHING to stop it! What kind of father/parent does that! He's your baby, the one thing in this world you protect with your very life! Sorry, just needed to take that off my chest a bit, please update chapter 16 soon^_^ ---------------The boys make even more progress in this next chapter which I hope you like X3 There’s also a little scene in there for Draco and Echo. You’ll find out a little more about Remus’ situation when Harry is reunited with them later ^.^ Hope you enjoy the next chapter and it’s everything you’ve been waiting for! x