[Au: Crystal Moon, Non-review communication]

I do the same on my stories so that readers can see publicly what I tell the other reviewers so that there is no 'he said she said' comments made about VIA mail comments (which I have had a problem with before) I didn't really see anything wrong with it as it's not flaming but saying thanks for the idea...

Thanks for the feedback! That's why I posted it here instead of just deleting it...I"m not sure what to do in this situation...

[Au: Crystal Moon, Non-review communication]

So, the author Crystal Moon (1296817651) is communicating to reviewers in the review section by commenting on her own stories. I didn't think this was appropriate, but I hesitated to just hit DELETE.

Here is the link to the review page <http://naruto.adult-fanfiction.org/review.php?set=read&no=600101463>, and the review number is <id # 3000172269>.

Thanks!

~Bri

[Marko Jelic]

What an odd troll.

Really now.

At least he/she/it was creative? Hahahaha

[Anyone doing a seasonal special?]

I love challenges, but doing them on time is a real strain for me! I actually think some of my best work has been requests, though holiday fics haven't really come up. I suppose they'd probably be equally enjoyable!

[MalexMale Poll]

I adore yaoi, but Sasuke and Naruto are my two fav characters. I also love Team 7 and Team 10 threesomes. However, I absolutely dispise uke/seme. It's offensive to feminists or dominant females like myself when people make men out to be typical blushing brides. So goofy. I mean, why would you want to write fanfic if you're going to warp the characters so much that they aren't even themselves? I don't understand it. I love fandom for the characters, and without them being in character I can't get into the story.

However, I don't flame someone for writing uke/seme, but I might review and comment on how the characterization is really off. Why post to the internet if you don't want real feedback! Great poll. Thanks for starting the dialog.

[Team Dynamics]

Title: Team Dynamics

Author: PlotAficionado

Fandom: Naruto

Pairings: Mostly NaruSasuNaru, but I focus more on their relationship than sex.

Rating: Adult++

Summary: After Naruto almost kills Sasuke, the team dynamics shift. Can the trio find balance when their feelings for each other begin to change?

Spoilers: Divergence, so no real spoilers.

URL: http://naruto.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600090042

Feedback: I really really would love some constructive crit for this fic's plot line and pacing. I like what I have so far, but I just feell like I must be doing something wrong, as it's my first and only multi-chapter fic and I'm getting fewer reviews than I'd expect from my experience with my oneshots. Any feedback would be appreciated, but I'm not looking to be an entitlement whore. I just want some real crit! Tough love!

Thanks for taking the time to look at this! I've never used this forum until now, but I hope to see your feedback!

~ BRI