iloveyuri

you are only the second person to post, please, any ideas on how to make it better?

Title: The love between us Author: i love yuri Rating: Adult++ Summary: Bella meats Alice again and they go to stop edward from killing himself to be with Bella who he thinks is dead (not same ending as new moon) Feedback: Desired. Fandom: Twilight Series URL: http://books.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600093410 Thats my highest rated story. Not to big a deal sence I only have two

Needed:One or two Beta for my story to check for flow and all that other good stuff.