Melrick

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As I’ve posted elsewhere, a reminder for anybody even considering writing fan fiction for a commission: A reminder that we do NOT allow fan fiction to be hosted here that has been written for money, nor do we allow people to offer to write fan fiction for money. Profiting from copyrighted material is illegal, and a great we to get you the writer and us the host into a great deal of legal trouble.

And for anybody even thinking about writing fan fiction for a commission here, I remind you of this: A reminder that we do NOT allow fan fiction to be hosted here that has been written for money, nor do we allow people to offer to write fan fiction for money. Profiting from copyrighted material is illegal, and a great we to get you the writer and us the host into a great deal of legal trouble.

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Chapter 12 is now up! Story: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600109341 And that’s the final chapter! Thanks for reading if you have been. :-)

Authors: PippyChick and MelrickTitle: AwakeningsSummary: Ray moves to an Australian country town to get away from his old life, and becoming a school bus driver is about as far away as he can imagine. His first passenger, Nina, takes him even further away.Feedback: Yes, as always.Fandom: OriginalPairing: N/AWarnings: AFFO, AgePlay, Anal, Fingering, HJ, MF, Minor2, OralSolo story or chaptered story: ChapteredURL: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600109341

Chapter 10 and 11 is now up! Story: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600109341

Firstly, you’re not new to this site, far from it. You’ve caused problems in the past and been banned in the past. You’re not welcome here, which you’ve been told before.

Are you requesting a new category in the archive? If so then this isn’t the right place to make that request. You need to do that here.

http://www.ladbible.com/news/animals-aussie-couple-find-huntsman-spider-eating-pygmy-possum-20190617 That’s not a sight you want to see.

Aww come on, come for a visit! You’ve got a good 50/50 chance of surviving! Those are some fine odds!

Chapter 8 and 9 is now up! Story: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600109341

You should read the information in this forum post to improve your chances of getting a beta:

Name is now changed. :-)

When The Devil Takes Hold Dancing Flames Point Of No Return

Dying for the Devil, that’s a damn fine title for a story. Must have been a freaking genius that came up with that title! ;-)

Oops, been forgetting to do this… Chapter 7 is now up! Story: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600109341

Regarding the daddy stuff, that’s no problem! It’s just that we’ve both come across reviewers that will read something in a story that they hate and complain about, yet will keep reading future chapters and continue to complain about it, and it just leaves you scratching your head wondering why the hell they’re continuing to read something they don’t like. lol And no, no offence taken! I just thought I’d explain that because many people – including a surprising number of writers – really don’t get that concept. So that wasn’t just for you but for anybody else reading that post who might not quite grasp that people can (and should) write for themselves first, even if that limits the number of readers you’ll get. It’s not like we’re professional authors that feel the need to write to a target audience, after all, so we’re free to do as we wish. One bonus of not being published authors, I guess! Not becoming rich and famous authors is the downside though. ;-) Anyway, we do appreciate the fact that you’re a diligent reader and reviewer! Not many people out there that are both, that’s for sure!

...it really worked for me... Come on, my girl, he thought, come for daddy. ...and sometimes it didn't. Still, even when it wasn't working for me it never stopped me from reading, and like I said, this was still a really hot chapter. Actually, just what the hell is pre-cum, and what the hell is its purpose? He hadn't really thought about it before. *Also Sprach Zarathustra begins playing* There comes a time in everyone's life, a time when the stars align and the heavens open, a time when their knowledge is finally called upon. At long last, my Biology degree has paid off, because I KNOW THE ANSWER TO THIS QUESTION! So, for the curious, sperm cells are very sensitive to acidity. This is sort of a problem, since semen has to pass through the urethra...which is also where urine, containing uric acid, is expelled from the body. Therefore, in order to protect the sperm cells, two small organs called the Cowper's glands produce a clear fluid (pre-ejaculate or pre-cum) that is flushed through the urethra before ejaculation in order to neutralize any lingering acidity. I realize that was the least sexy description of anything sex-related ever, and you have my apologies for that. Thanks again for your review! Right off the bat, I’d like to point out that if the daddy part bothered you then we wonder how worthwhile it would be for you to keep reading, since there’s going to be plenty more of that to come over the following chapters, many of which we’ve already written, and right to the very end, which we haven’t written yet. We just thought we’d warn you to give you a more informed decision, and to cut off any ‘well that really turned me off!’ complaints, because… well, you were warned. Anyway, it’s entirely up to you, of course! Also, I just thought I’d give you a bit of an insight into the reasons behind us writing this story. We wanted to write something that really appealed to the both of us, something that we would really enjoy writing and exploring, and that’s very much what we came up with. We love the story and we each love both of the characters – so much so that it’ll be a bit of a wrench when we have to leave them behind. We decided to upload it as well since maybe others might also enjoy reading it, but it’s first and foremost for us two. But we’re both firm believers in writing to appeal to ourselves first anyway, which we feel every writer should do!

In case anyone is confused, someone made a request for a copy of the story to be sent to them, that post was hidden and I then deleted it, as I will with all such requests.

Thanks for your review! We like a good cliffhanger, keeps you coming back for more… hopefully. lol

Chapter 4 is now up! Story: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600109341

Chapter 3 is now up! Story: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600109341