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  1. Soooo… Yeah this is a bit of a sad update, but I have decided after a small while of frustation over my own story to pull it down by the beginning of the new year. It went a bit off road at some point and as much as I have tried I haven’t been able to fix it, so I’ve have decided to rewrite it all from scrap at some point in the new year, like a completely new story nothing will be reused so it might take some time. Sorry to the people who still enjoyed it, I know there still is some, hopefully I do better the second time See ya all in the new year!
  2. While Kushina will keep turning more depraved as the story goes on, I don’t really want her to act like a slut in public, mostly because Minato will have so many spies around Konoha, though I’m not ruling out any new outfits, I’m simply stating that I don’t want her to be too obvious. The next chapter is underway and will feature a little of everything i hope, can’t say anything for sure yet though :3
  3. There ain’t that many Kushina cheat fics, i guess like maybe 20 total, but anyway as for an update, please understand, that while this is my story, it’s not my only one and that I work on other stories at the same time, sorry but I can’t tell you anything
  4. Nope. I write because I like to and thinks it’s fun, a patreon would only make me feel obliged to update, though I do appreciate the thought
  5. Thank you for your interest in my work and the kind words I’ve already told the person working on ff.net that I fully allow everyone to take my story and alter it as they please as we give them permission to post it wherever they want to, my only rule is that I don’t want anyone to try and make profit out of using my writing in anyway. Your idea sounds both fun and interesting and if you do write it I look forward to read it one day, best of luck! Your friendly neighbourhood LordOfLust
  6. Well I can’t say how Kushina will be by the end of the story, seeing how I pretty much make up every chapter as I begin writing it, but I can say that bukakke is planned multiple times, of course by her students and as well as other future groups.
  7. Thank you for your support and interest for the story As it currently stands there is already plans to include both Konohamaru and Udon and give them a bigger presence in the story, there is also chances for Iruka, though nothing is set in stone.
  8. Well, it will be very possible that Kushina will sleep with older men in the future and maybe even Minato’s friends, but as for Fugaku, never been a fan of him and I have already set up the Uchiha murder with the only survivors in Konoha being Sasuke and Mikoto. I will tend to try and use new oc characters as well as more unknown characters who appears in filler.
  9. I will always welcome fan suggestions and read them through with an open mind, with that being said I will never make any promises if I feel the suggestions seems too unrealistic or maybe even too hard to write. Your suggestion is by no means bad, however I do feel like it would go against the core value of the story which is secrecy and thrill. Kushina being able to simply remove Naruto’s momories will remove the thrill of being caught and as I stated last time I will try and be more positive when writing Naruto as I already feel like he’s had it rough enough. Thank you for your support and interest in the story!
  10. I understand where you are comming from, I find Naruto pretty hard to write seing as how he is pretty much a new charcter with his parents alive. I do want to make my readers happy as much as possible and my portrayel of Naruto clearly wasn’t that pleasing. I just though of Naruto as more of an above average student, while not one aiming for the top, he would still belong up there. I’m not very good at fight scenes and may have written of Naruto as too much of a weakling, this wasn’t my intentions or maybe I simply made Kiba OP all of a sudden. The thing is that the three student have their own personalities and wishes with Kushina. Komachi wanting to surpass the hokage, by trying to steal his wife. Takako simply has a crush on Kushina and is more quiet and reserved. And then there is Kiba who sees Naruto as a rival and will attempt to surpass and to some extent even try and humiliate him. I will attempt to fix Naruto for the story in upcomming chapters and hope you as well as other people who read this forgive me for my past mistakes.
  11. Maybe, but then it would first be a flashback, since it was just after the chunin exams and now we have gotten a bit further if I did make a flashback giving Konohamaru and his friend some sort of fun, then it is possible that he could become a recurring character, though since he is even younger thna her students, then he wouldn't be given any impressive size in the pants.
  12. Yes I'm well aware that my grammar is far from perfect and will most likely never be perfect. English isn't my born language and I still have a lot more to learn, but I believe that the only way you can improve upon your writing is to just write even more. I'm happy you liked the part with Minato. I did so in hope of pointing out that this is more a cheating story rather than pure ntr, even though they usually walk hand in hand those two tags. Kushina will never go through a complete mind break and will always return home and love her husband and son. I suppose the core in the story is the thrill about cheating and put Kushina in many different close situations were she is almost caught by either Minato or Naruto. Even before I made chapter seven there was already comments to on earlier chapter pointing out that now Naruto's parents were alive he had to be some kind of OP beast. I see now that I failed to make him so. I did try and make Naruto look good though, he would have won the fight if Minato didn't step in and I've even gave him some control over the Kyuubi, though I see that it wasn't enough. Might be interesting to vreate a random new OC with 12 inches, though my original plan was for it to be a lie though and when Anko actually came to his house what she got was 12 inches divided by five and from that point just try and make some random funny scene. Lastly thank you, salty people don't really get to me, let them eat cake.
  13. I see, well I'm happy to tell you that I wasn't forced to write it, though you aren't wrong, maybe it was more rushed than anything, mostly because I really suck at writing fights and just wanted to get it over with as soon as possible. As for Naruto's disqualification I'm suprised of how angry people got over it, I will try to better explain it in chapter eight and hopefully sort everything out.
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