Samara

New Upgrades for Alice and May.. Sounds fantastic... And by three people you mean Cinthia,Mika and Michelle Right? Looking forward for your next updated. happy Writing.... :D

Hey guys. It's been long since I have been here. How are you doing? the recent chapter was great. I am very happy to see that Mika has gained her memories back. I'm sure Legion will be ecstatic. I loved the bonding between the girls... I have a request though,will you please send Marge with them too on the plane? only iff it is possible. I'm asking because I am longing for a scene between her and max.. I love their bond.Be it physical or emotional I don't mind. And to remind you Magus I'm still waiting for the babies of the android mothers. But I want to say this as well that though I love this series but health is much more important so take care,all of you... give the little one love for me DA..

Symply hilarious.

eww...Zac but funny.

okay then I'm not that much late...

Happy Easter every one. Though I know that I'm late.

hi guys, whassup? ... it's been long since I have been here ... congratulations DA ... eagerly waiting for the update...

congratulations.. must say Kaitlyn seem perfect for the character Hannah..

though we don't have any complaints.. the story is getting interesting with its progress... I was really busy with my admission and stuff ... that I get to read the last two chapter last night... must say I was really upset about Mika's death.. I thought character have a good mystery and wanted to know about more... but its alright we still have her as Michael... I really hope they rescue Alice before its late.. and what happened to the androhumonid babies ? we get to see them magus ? anyways.... well done with the chapters as usual.... happy writing

yeah I agree with you. all three girls of Adam are kind of lunatic in their own way. lol

hay magus why don't you give max his own android avatar which is virtually connected with him .. that way it'd make him almost invincible against the SG.. tell me guys what do you think of my idea..

just hope its nothing bad.. and if its bad then Magus I'm so gonna be mad at you..

just hope its nothing bad.. and if its bad then Magus I'm so gonna be mad at you..

wow.. I liked what you did with the chapter. but I was little confused because you haven't introduced the twin infants by their name before. so I was thinking at first who this Courtney could be.. and must say interesting cliffhanger.

yeah may be..

we all know that when a person is drunk he or she opens up and become too honest for their own good. so I don't think she can scheme a plan in that state. and I must say generally a woman doesn't think like that . So I don't agree with you. no offense.

if you ask me bashful I think it was mainly fault of three people , Adam,May &phill. I think it was Adams fault because I really didn't like his comment where he asked one. of his tormentors how Nicole's pussy feels, simply because Adam is not that type of a guy and Nicole is important to him more than sex. and I think it was May's fault because she confessed that she didn't valued Adam's feelings knowingly. but when he got some bulk in his body then she started to notice him and tried to make him jealous,offered no string attached sex. it was uncalled for. in the party after the drama I don't think any serious fight will take place as we got to know that Adam is not that kind of a guy who will start fighting without knowing proper reasons.though he will defend May and maybe a rich argument and two three slaps or punches will be delivered. and I think it was phills fault because he doesn't really know when to stop or what the word "no" means.though May flaunted on him, he should not act a dom on her. and I don't think May will try to attract Adam's attention by lying to him about phills acts because to make him jealous it was enough to rub on his face that she had sex with phill.though I can be wrong. and maybe when Adam will console May , Nicole will get jealous and start to value his feelings for herself. I don't know if I'm right because a woman's taught process is complex enough even for another woman. ha ha .. lol

I agree with you ..

you guys are really bloodthirsty people.. talking and counting murders and deaths..

and I think may be by switching partners in the party Nicole showed Adam that though she trusted Adam to be a Dom on her but she did not give her complete reign to him to control her feelings by doing so. she is still her independent self and is not exclusively committed to him weather he like or not. though I must say that it'd be interesting to what will Nicole think or do after witnessing Adam's reaction after the "Phill/May drama" I can be wrong though. as only the author knows what to do with the plot. these are my silly assumptions only. what do say guys?

I can agree with you on this to an extend Joe as the aftermath of there actions at the party are yet to come.

welcome bashful.. glad to have you here.. it'd be great to know about the story's progress and your other master pieces..

wow magus awesome chapter as always.. yay.. more babies are on the way.. just don't know that if the babies will be full humans or full Androids or andro-humonoids.. it was so cool of you to give the android bodied peoples babies.. and am I correct that you're introducing Mel's biological mother in the story.. wow we're up for more villains.. hope you post new chapter soon . happy writing.

amazing chapters Magus. must say you've put an interesting twist with Evan's mom. what are you gonna do magus ? as we came to see that in this story I mean in Max's world everything is possible. they are practically immortal. and max has already created self aware artificial soul. So are you gonna give max and Alice an andro-humonoid baby? that'd be really cool isn't it guys? and what happened to Mika ? I really wanted to read about her more. is she is basically human form of Alice? or a complete different personality. who is she paired with? a good character or a villain? these all questions are popping in my head. hope you answer and post soon. till then happy writing..

welcome back magus. we missed you A LOT ...