SpartanAlchemist

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  1. SpartanAlchemist

    Review Replies for MILF Hinata vs Perverted Student

    Ok so my muse has gone and left me for another writer...hopefully not for a hipster writing poetry, so I cant quite roll out ch2. I’m gonna work on some of the other stories and hope that gets things moving again.
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    Review Replies for MILF Hinata vs Perverted Student

    Yeah as previously stated when entering into a new genere Im super-critical of myself so I set a date to post in whatever condition its in. Ill most likely go back and rewrite ch1-3 a few months after finishing this story. And I did plan to change the womens figures. I went through about 10 or 15 different bodyslide presets for the bodyslide mod for skyrim looking for what I think would look best for each kunonichi. Hinata was DMRA Enhanced if it matters.
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    Review Replies for MILF Hinata vs Perverted Student

    I did want to throw Naruto in there, and in fact had him as Hokage instead of Natsumi(though not married to HInata), but when I decided to make Natsumi Hokage he would have just felt shoe-horned in for pretty much whatever reason he would show up. So no Naruto showing up in this one.
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    Review Replies for MILF Hinata vs Perverted Student

    Next chapter I had planned as Jokuros entry into Konoha and why he's there featuring Kushina as his partner, despite me ending the chapter with Natsumi showing up at the end. And I did want to put more description into the chapter but I'm so hyper-critical of myself when entering a new genera that I'll just sit and rewrite things for months trying to get it 'perfect'. So I'll set a date up to post and put it up in whatever condition its in. And thanks for the offer, I'll most likely take you up on that.
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    Review Replies for MILF Hinata vs Perverted Student

    Yeah. I'm not really going for subtle on this one. Maybe my next fix. I'm just feeling stuff out and see what I can do atm.
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    Review Replies for MILF Hinata vs Perverted Student

    Yuuya26 & SolarWolf - Pretty sure I got that. Natsumi is married to Kiba and Hinata to Shino. I changed quite a few things in the story literally hours before posting and missed a few fixes. Sorry bout that. AFFModerator - Fixed it. Sorry bout that. JoJo - Yeah I have pretty much all the chapters planned out just not typed. If I get enough feedback for certain characters I'll most likely add them. Natsumi will be the focus of the next chapter, mostly. Shiroma - Pretty sure you meant 'fic' but thanks. I hadn't planned to but if I get another 2 or 3 people asking I got no problem adding that. Or not. I've already got ideas floating around in my head for that so I might just do it anyways now.
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    MILF Hinata gets banged by her son's friends

    Im gonna be honest with you Willow, I forgot about that on this site. Ok I have a review post up here where Im going to reply to those who have issues or ideas to better my writing.
  8. This will be where I reply to reviews and discuss with folks who want to how to improve my 'storytelling'. I wont reply to every review but Ill try and hit at lease a 50% ratio for it.
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    MILF Hinata gets banged by her son's friends

    Ok I have the first chapter up here on AFF right here check it out and let me know what you think in the story comments since I want to avoid breaking TOS and jacking this post.
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    MILF Hinata gets banged by her son's friends

    Ive got something that Im almost finished with. Its more along the lines of a MILF Kushina vs Perverted student then one of Borutos friends. It should be done by next week or sooner. It'll be my first attempt at smut rather then an action fic so Im hoping its ot too bad. Ill post a link when I get it up.
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    Red Alert Series - "Where do you want me?"

    No rush. Id rather you take a while and get something good then you rush something out and it being meh.
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    Red Alert Series - "Where do you want me?"

    Im gonna be honest with ya, I completely forgot about this one but still, please be sure to post a link to your work when its done.
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    Dubcon/noncon F!harryxDraco

    So I finally finished chapter one and have started the second, and final, chapter. It'll most likely take me another month or so and as I said previously I'll be posting the whole thing at one time.
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    Dubcon/noncon F!harryxDraco

    Ok, so I've decided to finally give writing porn a try rather then just throwing out requests. Its going to be a combo of the School years(voldemort) ​scenario and the Malfoy Affair here with both Hope and Lily being seduced by Malfoy. It will most likely be a 3-shot at best and while most likely not a masterpiece Ill certainly give it my best shot. It'll probably take me a month or so to get it posted as I want to just get it all posted at the same time so be patient. I'll keep it posted as to how its coming along so please don't ask every 2 days how its coming as that annoys the hell out of me and I'm never then one on the receiving end of that question. Also, I really have no knowledge of what a lot of the abbreviations for stuff are so if someone could point me in the right direction that would be appreciated.
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    Mass Effect: Interogation

    Thanks for trying. Enjoy your weekend if at all possible.