Allyrion

Thank you for doing this, Gertrude. Story: A Magical Foursome http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600097557 Do you want me to say what I like about it? Yes. Do you want me to say what I don't like about it? Yes. Do you want me to "be nice"? Be yourself Do you want me to be brutally honest? Yes. Do you want constructive criticism? Yes. Any special instructions? Anything you particularly want in a review? Other than titillating my readers, I write my fandom stories to improve in general as a writer. The best way to do that is through thoughtful critique like your own. Thanks again.