Speaking of spoiling readers, your stories are almost too polished (past misuses of "passed" aside ^_-) - I read anything else lately and I'm all "the story is good, but look at these continuity issues...and these typos!" Sigh. Why did I have to be given the editing bug over the creating bug?
That being said, CH. 1: "Quatre turned to face him, pausing briefly as he ascended the steps of the latter(ladder?:-) )leading to the jet."
Yay writing!