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  1. Guys, I'm pretty sure the author has stated that he'll ignore posts that only ask when the next chapter is coming. This forum thread is for discussion, requests, and ideas for the story. Here, I'll start: About your last chapter, I thought the idea of a guy rubbing his dick in someone else's sandwich is absolutely disgusting. Mind you, I haven't had any problems with the rest of the story, just that messing with food is a pet peeve for me. Last month, I posted an idea for a Halloween chapter in this forum. I'll repeat it here because even after it has passed, I find the idea to be a hot one. Basically, it would explain why Kushina, a battle-hardened ninja, is still afraid of ghosts, as shown at the end of the Wave mission; she knows they exist. In fact, she's been fucked by ghosts before, and she hates being rendered helpless as these invisible perverts play with her body. Building off that, my idea for a chapter would be one in which Kushina and her team complete a mission in another town before staying at the inn for the night. Kushina wakes up to the feeling of being molested, and panics when she realizes that it's another ghost. The spirit is revealed to be that of a boy the same age as her students, and Kushina calms down and lets him have some fun so he can pass on to the afterlife. Her students enter her room hoping to have some fun, only to find their sensei already getting fucked. The cucks become the cucked, as it were. Wow, that went longer than I thought. Anyway, it doesn't matter if the author doesn't use my idea, as long as it's at least out there. Best of luck with this story, okay? I only ask that if you ever decide to cancel this story, that you at least let us know via a post here.
  2. Well, whether you use my idea or not, I’ll still continue to enjoy the story. It’s a fun read.
  3. Well, I just found this forum after messaging you on FFN, LordOfLust, so I’ll just add my ideas from our discussion here. Chapter 6 had an offhand line from Tazuna saying that Wave Country had a ghost festival, which scares both Naruto and Kushina. At first, this seemed to be just a funny scene showcasing the similarity between mother and son, but Kushina’s students make sure to note the event for later. This could foreshadow a future chapter. Picture it like this. Kushina and her team are on a mission to another town. They ask her why she’s so scared of ghosts, but she refuses to answer. Kushina ends up distracting them with the promise of sexytimes once their mission is completed. At the inn, though, Kushina becomes paranoid that she is being watched. After she falls asleep, her fears prove justified as an unseen figure starts to strip off her clothes until she’s completely naked. The redhead MILF wakes up as she feels her pussy invaded by something invisible, and she freaks out at being molested by a spirit yet again (this isn’t the first time). The ghost reveals himself to be a boy about the same age as her students, who reveals that he was killed in a bandit raid without ever knowing the touch of a woman. Kushina takes pity on the ghost and allows him to fuck her so he can pass on. Meanwhile, Kiba, Takako, and Komachi each go to their sensei’s room for the sexytimes, only to find her getting plowed by the ghost. If anything, it would make for a fun Halloween chapter, right?
  4. Quite an interesting scene, wouldn't you say? Hinata is molested by several perverted invisible spirits all while the love of her life obliviously sleeps next to her. Feel free to post any scenario which could lead to this...
  5. True, there is an invisibility jutsu. I've just never seen it used in a perverted story before. The one I had originally thought of was this: http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Transparent_Escape_Technique. Invented by Jiraiya, no less!
  6. Something I've wanted to see, but nobody ever seems to think of writing: what if someone created a jutsu that could turn themselves completely invisible? Of course, they'd still be solid, and they could still touch and be touched, making it a goldmine of perverted opportunities. Maybe our protagonist could sneak into the bedroom of his favorite kunoichi and have his way. Maybe he could visit the hot springs and enjoy the women's side of the baths while hiding in plain view. Either way, go wild!
  7. We all know that Kushina Uzumaki is the ideal MILF in the Naruto-verse, and we've read all of the stories where she gets a nice, long fucking from pretty much anyone we can think of... so how about someone who's never had her before? I found this idea on another website, and it could form the base of an excellent story: Kushina is staying in a spooky old house by herself, for a mission. As she gets ready for bed and starts taking off her bra, she looks around, as she can't help but feel she's being watched. Nothing there. She's just being ridiculous. She gets into bed, and gradually start to calm down, slowly falling asleep. A cold draft passes through the room, lifting the blankets a little and making her shiver all over. Something strange begins to happen; as a tickling sensation covers Kushina's breasts, she unconsciously wraps her arms around her chest. Suddenly, her arms are wrenched apart an held above her head. Her boobs begin moving by themselves, fondled by the hands of an unseen poltergeist. As her nipples stiffen up from the stimulation, two more hands grab hold of her panties and slide them off her body... Basically, Kushina gets fucked by a horny, invisible ghost.
  8. Here's a story type I've never seen on this website. Kushina returns to Konoha from a mission without knowing she's been followed by a horny ghost. The ghost is invisible to everyone and capable of touching anything. Kushina can feel eyes watching her, but can't detect anything out of the ordinary. But when night comes and Kushina falls asleep... The horny ghost has its way with her. Kushina is helpless to resist as the invisible spirit molests her body to its heart's content. The 1981 movie "The Entity" has a similar premise. Optional continuation: After a long time, the entity decides to go after Hinata as well.
  9. bdacosta2

    The Entity

    So I just finished watching the 1981 movie "The Entity" and I thought it might make for a good story. Here's how it goes: a woman is sexually assaulted and molested by an invisible demon inside her own house. Notable scenes include being attacked while taking a bath, having her breasts fondled while she's asleep, and being raped while pinned down naked on her bed. Here's the challenge: one of the Bleach girls is haunted by this entity. I would prefer Orihime, but feel free to write any of them into this situation.
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