HermioneSparta

Wistful-Stargazer, once again, thank you for point out all the errors. I have to chuckle at some of your reviews. I feel the same way about the chapters.

Since I created a email specifically for fanfiction reviews, I caved and decided to make a forum too. Wistful-Stargazer, First, thank you for all the reviews and corrections. My beta and I try our best, but as you pointed out, we missed more than a few things! I'll answer specific questions/comments in turn. 1) Ah, so both her grandparents and parents are kings and queens, ok. The title grand king confused me. I thought that if anything, the grandparents would be king and queen and the parents would be duke and duchess, you know? Grand King and Grand Queen are actual titles. I don't remember exactly where I read that they are real titles, and attempting to find the resource again is difficult. Also, while I am trying to make this story authentic...it's fanfiction. At some point, I do have to draw the line between making it authentic and making it complicated. When I originally wrote this story, I didn't have a very good grasp on the difference between monarchy and empire, let along the titles of status and succession. "Grand" was much easier for me. It just...stuck. 2)What does the word "fea" mean? It's another word for "fairy/feary". 3) In the following quote, 'He slowly as the song began to taper off.', what was it that Prof. Snape did slowly? It was supposed to say "he spoke slowly". I've changed it. I'll be changing the chapters on FFN and AFF as I receive more errors. I've read the story more times than I can count, but I still can't catch them out. Thank you again for pointing them out. Sincerely, HermioneSparta