AliTwivira

I understand and I do spellcheck my work and sometmes grammar check my work yet other times I forget to grammar check and post that is why I am looking for a beta that can help me with that and help with punctaiton along with a push into the right way to go. I can say it is hard being a writer. Some times I have to read my story over and over to fix alot of stuff. Yet that is what I like to do yet sometimes I miss thinks.

My Question is about Betas are Beta's like Editors or are they different because I think I need a Beta or an Editor to help me with my stories taht I am working on. I feel if I had help pn my stories it will seem to go better then what they are going.

Beta Request ~!~!~!~!~!~!~ Beta For Golden Bliss Rating: MA or N/17 Fandom: Dragon Ball Pairing: Vegeta/Goku Beta For: Need a Beta for Proofreading, Helping find my Grammar Problems, Punction and some other things that a beta can help with in my story that need change. Warning: Anal sex, D/s, Dom Fingering, GB, HJ, Incest, loli, M/M, Minor1, Minor2, MPreg, Oral, Other, Preg, Rim, Shouta, Solo, Spank, TF, Toys, Trans, WD, Xeno, Yaoi, etc. Summery: Fate is everything for Vegeta and Goku. They were born for each other along with being cursed for each other. They day they were born was the day of the curse moon that change the universe, their family’s life, race, beliefs, and planet. Examples of Beta Work: I would like to see what the Beta has did before I agree to work with them.

Thank you RogueMudBlood for you help. Yeah I know my story has a lot of hits for so small amount of time it has been up.

First Question is will I came up with a new name for my story Forbidden Kiss should I remove Forbidden Kiss and upload the story with the new name. Second Question is will I seem to not be getting any reviews for my stories should I get a beta to see if the person can help me find out what is wrong with my story. Third Question is I was wondering this can I break my chapters down into will parts because I was reading my work and will it was all over the place in the first four chapters because the chapters have will parts to each of them and will time skip to break the parts up. If some one can help me with this that would help me alot because I need help yet was to scared to ask for help to now. -Ali

Thank you to the both of you for the help. ~Ali

Ali here yet again sadly I am lost and need help. Okay here is my Question what is the Editing Tool use for that brings up the following edit details, add chapter, edit chapter, and deleted chapter. Yet I know what add and deleted are for yet what is edit for I want to know. I am little clueless. Way I want to now is cause I am redoing Forbidden Kiss yet again. Can't I keep that story as I started as and not think about remaking it. Sorry about that I just type about what is on my mind some times. Alright back to what I was saying can someone help me out on this matter or what should I do. ~Ali The Clueless Writer.

Updating the story.

Alright and thanks a lot I was just wondering if it is okay to rewritten story. ~Ali