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This is the discussion thread to accompany the story “Our Alex Day” https://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600110550 I used to do these threads for my old stories because authors in the old system couldn’t respond to reviews. So I would paste the review here and respond to it. I’ll update this to answer questions.

Sadly school started up and got busy. I was hoping this would be a lighter semester with graduation coming in December but I have that and moving for work right after (a few days after). I do know what I want to write for the curent chapter and some of the upcoming ones though. This is why I don’t like making promises about when things wil lget done then just get it out when I can.

I’m working on it, I should get more done this weekend, maybe get it done. You have to realize that writing a lemon is basically typing with a painful boner for 5 hours. Can’t do anything to relieve it since one handed typing is much much slower than 2 handed typing. Also since Aeris snapped sexually think there should be some Aeris dominating Tifa or Yuffie? Strap-on action? I had some interesting ideas. You won’t be dissapointed with the big group thing *hint hint*

I may have a more interesting idea where i don’t have to choose. Still that won’t happen for a chapter or two. This chapter i had in mind what I wanted to do, i got started writing it this morning.

I haven’t decided yet.

Well, they're going to clean up so they're heading to the beach but there are some interesting enemies along the way. This beach trip isn't the same as a Coast del sol beach trip which will happen later. I was thinking someone was overdue to be 5wayed. I did a FF6 fiction where Terra was.

You know I was thinking that recently it was getting kind of thin description wise. Part of me fealt guilty for taking so long to update this after making a bunch of updates near eachother when I first started it. I've recently had hand/arm surgery so I haven't been able to do much typing, when I do I'm slower and I typo a lot more. The next chapter is about half way done. Was it the most recent chapter you were refering to? That was the partial chapter I was working on that i ended up posting since it could stand alone. As for making someone cum in an instant, you most definately can with proper technique or build up some peopel can cum pretty fast.

I usually have something in mind for the first chapter so I write and post that and ask for pairings if anyone wants to see anything in particular. Generally I try to sit down and push through one chapter at a time then get it posted immediately. I have one fic Ive been working on where I got half a chapter written then I kind of got stalled writing. Still it's half written and unposted (sorry FF6 people, it'll be up sometime). Similarly one of my stories I posted the scene I wanted, and didn't have any ideas where else I wanted to take it. Without feedback or new ideas I just kind of back burnered the story. It's officially ended now. I'm working on a fic right now where I started based on one idea (which I didn't even use) and by the time I got through three chapters I had a bunch of requests. Without pairing requests I just kind of let the characters go and see what happens, which is what the third chapter is. I've always been kind of bad at dividing chapters up, even in my serious writing I separated all of my novels by days instead of by chapters. That idea works well for novel length writing with thirty something page chapters but not so well for an 8-12 page story. That's kind of why I had the first few chapters popup in rapid session around Thanksgiving. Two chapters got split into three to keep all of the similar content together.

Thanks again, I linked the top of that chapter here and added the M/F tag to the story and the top portion of the chapter before the disclaimer. Anything else I should do? Will this topic stay here? It's kinda odd there are no clear cut rules about this that I could find already written anywhere.

Awesome, thanks a bunch. Sorry for doubting you guys, I wasnted to have all my basis covered.

Ok, I shall add the tag, they kind of need to be updated anyway. Is that the official mod answer, or should I keep checking back? Don't want to have to worry about having to reupload the material. I had a feeling the section needed stories focused on f/f encounters but not strictly 100%. There are a lot of encounters, especially in chapter 3-5.

I've been writing a Sailor Moon fic for the past month or so. It is in the female/female area because it is all female female for the first 4 chapters. In the 5th chapter there is a male sort of introduced who is involved in some encounters (4 total though 3 of them are short enough that to me they all blend together). Anyway there are in total around 20 female/female encounters (usually clumped together and in some cases making up 90% of the chapter), and the 4 (or 2) encounters involving a male. A review was posted that the whole story should be moved because of the hand full of hetero encounters. My question is this, is the female/female category for stories that have 100% female/female content, or stories centered around female/female pairings? In the general section this would be no worry but when I started I didn't plan for there to be any males involved but I let the characters do whatever and made some requests happen, one of which caused this male to enter. Is it fine to be in the female/female section or should I see about having it moved? Here is a link to the story:http://anime.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600054394

Doing this from my phone until I get home tomorrow night. I'm not sure the story needs to be moved because of one non Yuri pairing (yeah I know there were more but the amount of detail given makes it all feel like one pairing to me) in the fifth chapter. I'll ask around to see if it should be moved and if so how to move it. I should note that you're complaining about 4 hetero pairings on a story that already had about two dozen or more Yuri encounters. I'll see what the mods say, my plan was to let the story go I hadn't thought much about the category with a single guy introduced. Bah humbug to you too. Edit: formatting. Edit2: I asked and the mods/admins said that the story just needs M/F disclaimers on the chapters with hetero stuff, and on the description (which kind of needed to be updated anyway). Those have been made and I linked the topic where I asked the mods in the story and below. http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/index.php/topic/54840-story-placement/#entry346176

There will be more Luna in the next chapter, with no Artemis right next to her, and no dildos or anal. I mentioned that in the post above and have a few ideas about how to handle it.

I would have thought that would be obvious by now. Actually when I finished the chapter and when I was rereading it...for science...I kind of thought it had a lot of phallus action for an orgy of mostly girls. With the way Luna is set up in the story that's about the only way to get her off. This seems different to me from the lesbian scenes I usually do which is some combination of fingering and oral. Basically with dicks (or dildos) more positions are possible. But it is about time the girls swore off dildos for a while (maybe those exact words). I have to toss around how I want things to work out for the next chapter anyway.