Chukru

I'm looking for a beta reader that will go through my work, well one particular original piece, to be brutal, to tell me where I'm making continuity errors, general mistakes, bits that don't make sense. This is a first time writing a story such as this and I would appreciate a little help with it. Its an original story, based around assassins and hidden organisations, such as the Yakuza and such. This story will include violence and gore, possibly rape, some sex. It will be a M/F story, with hurt and comfort, mostly action and in-depth look at the hidden word of hire assassins and breaking away from such cults/clans. If you are at all interested in Betaing for me, please PM me or email me at MCR_i_love@hotmail.com, heading the email as “AFF Beta” so I know not to ignore it thankyou for your time