Tenshinhan

Hello. I have written a kind of submission story between Draco and Ginny in the Harry Potter universe, but am not completely satisfied. However, I am lost of what to with it. I need someone to read it, correct if needed and express their thought to me, brutally. Pm me and we work something out. Thank you all, have a nice day.

Title: As the clouds flew by, he wondered Author: Tenshinhan Rating: Adult, maybe adult+. It features incest. You have been warned. Pairings: Ron/Ginny Summary: A glowing tale of a forbidden romance between siblings, where love matters most of all. Ron walks in on Ginny while she is in the showers, and in a very strange way, things progresses into a wild act of love. Featuring author Tenshinhan's special writing style, where he disregards every rule and every theme before him, relying on small quirks and one liners while not forgetting the deeper meaning behind every word, the story "As the clouds flew by, he wondered" is quite the life changing read. With pieces like: "Ron couldn’t believe his ears. And since he couldn’t believe his eyes neither, he decided simply enough that it wasn’t real. It was a dream. So he tested it by touching the thing most likely to be made up by his imagination: Ginny. In a move so unsmooth that it became legendary, he stretched out his hand, touching Ginny’s left breast, right over the nipple" and: "As they kissed, fireworks set off in the background. It really did. The twins were bored." you can be sure of an enjoyable read. Feedback: Would like it very, very much. URL: http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600026241 I thank you for reading this, and my story, and I thank you even more for reviewing it. I also thank you for pointing out mistakes and errors in a nice way, so my feelings doesn't break away from me. Thank you Tenshinhan

I get inspiration from a blank paper. A void to fill. Then it gets hard...

Title: She came hard. Trust me. Author: Tenshinhan Rating: Adult Summary: An awesome drabbel by me, which have been called the funniest fan fic ever. Set in the Hp world, starring a bored Hermione. Feedback: Would be appreciated greatly. URL: http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600025731 Thank you all. Tenshinhan