Lennox Posted July 27, 2022 Report Share Posted July 27, 2022 (edited) Responding to reviews for Field Trip. Edited July 29, 2022 by Lennox Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lennox Posted July 29, 2022 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2022 Quote From GeorgeGlass on July 28, 2022 This was fun. I especially enjoyed the image of the rod stuck up inside Lisa under her dress, with her panties holding it in place. There were a few minor language issues ("the bludge in his pajama pants"), but nothing that really took me out of the story. And the last line made me laugh. I must have missed that during my edits and proof-reading. I’ve fixed it up here and on the other sites I upload. Thanks very much for pointing that out! Glad you liked it. GeorgeGlass 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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