Nickolai Posted April 11, 2011 Report Share Posted April 11, 2011 Hello guys, well as is the case with many I was suggested to use the forums to interact with my readers, rather than the stories themselves and I actually think that is a great idea. These forums seem far more suited for that sort of thing, and I hope people will join me in the discussion here. As I said in Chapter 4 of my story, Obedience is a Virtue, I will answer both questions from either here or the review section, I check both regularly. So please, feel free. On with the reviews I received for Chapter 3: Property loverofyaoi says: "ok, Kaiba really needs to pay for how crazy and evil he is to Joey" Seto has truly been awful to poor Joey. I don't condone his actions, though I think it is plain that he is a very ill man. Mitzumi Kare says: "Thankies for the update. i like this fict [i had bookmarked it] and it gives me all sorts of ideas. i showed this to my own puppy [not like seto has joey] and she fainted. yatta!" I encourage everyone to get their own puppy! lili says: "Oh, I am LOVING this. Seto's characterization thus far is just..brilliant - he's crazy, obsessive and entirely domineering...I'm very much hooked. Blame my love for a completely dominant Kaiba, It's great to see the extremes of his personality being pushed. Joey is just adorable and I applaud the creativity that went into his current state of being (tails=LOVE XD) This is so far..quite interesting indeed - Cruel, dark and sexy at the same time. I can't wait for the next update! " Oh my, you flatter me. I am really pleased that you are enjoying the characterization of my story. I hope Chapter 4 lives up to that image. (Tails ARE love). Invisible says: "You updated a day later but i'm sorr it took me a week to see it and read. I am so totaly hooked on this story, i love the dark love theam. I can't wait to see how he intro's mokie to this. let's face it i just can't wait for the whole thing to be revieled. Keep up the wonderful story." Mokuba has been introduced in Chapter 4 now. I don't know if it was the sort of introduction people were expecting, but I think it could create some real tension in the story. Thank you for being a long time reader. 1337Fuxxor says: "Huh... You know, this reminds me very vaguely of Human Centipede, only that movie is more disturbing than this fanfic. Now, this definitely a unique take on the whole puppyshipping thing. I'll keep an eye on it." The Human Centipede gave me nightmares for weeks! Haha, I'm glad my fic isn't as dark as that story to be honest. I'm trying to walk the fine line of horror and erotica and don't want to go overboard on either. Anyway, thank you to all my readers, you really make my day when you comment on my fics. Chapter 4 is now up, and I hope you guys enjoy it just as much. Love, Nickolai Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Sora Posted August 13, 2011 Report Share Posted August 13, 2011 OMG!!! Please update!!! This was the most amazing and scary Yugi fanfic that I have read. I think I had like 100 nosebleeds when I read this! Keep writting <3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Alejandra Posted November 8, 2011 Report Share Posted November 8, 2011 Please!!! Please!!! update!!! I am so much in love with your story, i can´t wait to read the next chapter. I love the way you are writing kaiba here, so dark,domeneering and obsesive over the puppy and the tail is so lovable. Cant wait to read more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest AndromedaAndy Posted January 22, 2012 Report Share Posted January 22, 2012 I'd really like to read more about this, please write more. It's hitting kinks I didn't even know I had! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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