Guest KatyDidz2410 Posted March 20, 2011 Report Posted March 20, 2011 I'm looking for a Beta who will help me catch mistakes in which i switch from present to past tense, because it confuses my readers and i can't seem to catch them all no matter how many times i proof read and reread my chapters. It is an original story about a woman who finds herself in an underground city with no memory of her past and that she is the only one who is a fully unaltered human, which makes her a risk to awakening an ancient god-like being imprisoned in the heart of the civilization. In this story i plan to have a little bit of erotica, torture, abuse, borderline sexual assault, and the theme of a corrupt government. There might also be some other disturbing stuff when i get to the war scenes, cause lets face it. War is NOT pretty, and i have no intentions of romanticizing it. All of the things listed above may or may not happen to the main character, but she will be taken on a very emotionally rattling journey as she discovers things about her past that she later regrets ever having searched for. Quote
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