JayDee Posted March 5, 2020 Author Report Share Posted March 5, 2020 I somehow entirely missed the above reply. I’m gonna guess saved completely Moe saved her safe and sound. It’s Moe! He’d do it, think it was a chance at romance, then fuck it up! Annnnnyywaaaay. Eight years after the last review on one of my cartoon subdomain stories, @GeorgeGlass went looking for something not too fuck awful and probably got the best of a bad bunch. Although flashfic Marge’s Debt with that Bart/Marge scene still holds up… if too short. So! Quote Rhode Island Redneck I loves me some incest, and even though I haven't watched Family Guy in a long time, I still like Family Guy porn. :) So I thought I'd check this out. I haven’t watched it in a good while myself, but I’m sure I could still laugh at some of ‘em! Thank you for checking it out! Quote I liked the opening bit about Angel Meg and Devil Meg, and how you subverted the trope by making Angel Meg Devil Meg's sex slave. I could totally see Angel Meg in that fishnet body stocking. Meg's pondering whether her father was mentally competent to consent to sex made me laugh out loud, as did the "pool of K-Y jelly" description. And Meg thinking about the fact that she was sucking the cock that made her was hot. One other bit that jumped out at me was the phrasing of "The springs protested his weight." I liked that. I think the angel/demon thing was my attempt to do a cutaway style wackiness – there was that cutaway to Peter’s shoulder angel not being there to advise as it was stuck in traffic (followed by the shoulder angel’s shoulder angel also in traffic), so probably a callback to the shows shoulder angels. I’m glad you got some laughs out of it, AND some hotness! Peter’s a husky fellow, probably also acall back to some of the show gags about his weight pressing down a little hard. Quote Thanks for a fun little incest adventure. Thank you again for the review and reminding me this story wasn’t so bad! I just can’t seem to get finished on anything these days, but I’ve had slow spells before so who knows… might get back going! GeorgeGlass 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JayDee Posted March 22, 2020 Author Report Share Posted March 22, 2020 Marge's Debt – one of the Simpsons flashfics I wrote back during my year of 52 weekly prompts! This one and the Pegging one were the two basically wholesome ones, while the Mindy and Comic Book Guy ones sure weren’t. Been years since I saw a new Simpsons now. Used to really enjoy it tho, up ‘til 2000 at least I don’t think I saw many bad episodes. Quote @GeorgeGlass A fun flashfic, to be sure. I'm always impressed when someone can tell a complete story in so few words. I also liked the details about Marge's reaction to everything, from the tightness of her pink corset to the unfamiliarity and size of her mystery-partner's cock. And, of course, I especially liked the ending. Thank you for the review! I appreciate it! You know, I had a funny feeling that as short as this one was you might get something out of it. Tick off a few of your faves, that sort of thing, especially, yes that last line . Looking at it now I wonder at just what Fat Tony thought when the idea was first put to him but at the end of the day he’s probably had odder proposals in a town as wacky as Springfield. Thanks again! GeorgeGlass 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JayDee Posted March 14, 2021 Author Report Share Posted March 14, 2021 Bart the Ripper Quote ANON You have mental problems guy That feeling when you have to go back 14 years and five pages of Simpson stories to find a Bart/Lisa story you haven’t yet messily defiled yourself over and the author has wasted your arousal by having them at 18 and 20 instead of what gets you going and so, one handed, angry but resolute, you leave your feedback. Then, finding your edge again, you continue back further, ever further, to the old archives on stuttering servers, bytes dying, looking for the very earliest Simpsons smut, where Smithers was still black. ...thanks for taking the time to leave a comment! GeorgeGlass 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JayDee Posted October 25, 2021 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2021 Mindy's Revenge Quote From ANON - on July 20, 2021 Mindy is psychotic Thanks for the comment! Yes, yes she is! Quote From ANON - on July 20, 2021 Mindy deserved to get her brain mulched by the lead slug The best shot of Chief Wiggum’s career! Entirely unintentionally. Thanks for your comment Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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