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Hi LHunt, no Sarah won't despise Lara. At it's core, this is a love story (albeit a pretty fucked up one), with Sarah trying to show Lara how she's become a narcissist and then trying to change her back into who she was before.
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Hi LHunt, just watched the wipeout video. I was thinking an obstacle course for game number 2, but with all of the girls running at the same time, like a race. Seems the perfect place to have the other girls gang up on Lara, after her dominant performance in game number 1.
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Hi Extreme, I'm relying on Lara not knowing exactly what Sarah told Takamoto and her fear of being punished if she is caught disobeying Sarah's instructions. In the next few chapters, I'm going to build on that and slowly alter the way Lara thinks about herself and Sarah. Eventually, Lara will internally think of Sarah as "Lady Sarah", while her own previous life as the Countess of Abingdon will feel like a distant dream.
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Hi LHunt, as usual thanks for the ideas.
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Hi LHunt, so in the Gameshow each round will eliminate one contestant. So there'll be 6 for the first game, 5 for the second, 4 for the third etc. until the last 2 girls standing compete in game 5. For the game ideas, I don't want anything as overt as live sex acts (like masturbating with fruit, getting poked by dildos). I want the Gameshow to feel like something that could actually be on TV, rather than a porn parody gameshow.
The nudity will be accidental (bikinis slipping off or getting yanked by another contestant) rather than scripted. That way it gives the highly competitive Lara a choice. Imagine in a water obstacle course (an idea I'll probably use) where Lara belly flops into the water and her bikini top is knocked off, exposing her breasts. Does she waste time to go back for it and risk losing too much time, or does she complete the rest of the obstacle course topless? Like I said, more of a softcore gameshow than an overtly hardcore one. Also with only female contestants.
Regarding the tramp stamp tattoo, I feel like any words (NO HOLES BARRED) are too obvious. I want it to be a picture or symbol design with a hidden meaning (like how swingers use pineapple tattoos to identify each other at parties). I think I'll just have to invent something, because my research has come up empty.
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Hi Donkingkong, no plans for extreme tatts in intimate areas, as I think I did that to death in Natla's Revenge. This is more about embarassment and psychological warfare against Lara - she prides herself on being posh and sophisticated, she's always hated visible tattoos because she thinks they make a girl look cheap and slutty. Now she'll have some, so in her mind, what does that make her?
That said, I would like to find a tramp stamp tattoo that implies sexual activity but isn't overly sexual (No SLUT or WHORE tattoos). Think something like the Queen of Spades tattoo (means a girl is into black guys), but instead one that signals that Lara is into anal sex or gangbangs. I'm not having much luck finding any tattoos like that though, so I might just have to invent one for the story.
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Hi Donkingkong, I'm conflicted about the prison tattoo idea, because I wanted to give Lara the same tattoos as her rebooted Tomb Raider character in the adult version of the game - basically similar to the Wildeer Studios tattoos with some tweaks: garter tattoo on left thigh, some sort of tramp stamp on lower back, text on ribs etc.
I'm happy to have her agree to receive some tattoos at the prison (after she's broken and will agree to anything just to get out) but I would want it professionally done. I feel like a rough tattoo given by prisoners would detract from her eventual look, which I want to mirror her XXX game.
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Hi Donkingkong, leave it with me and don't worry - not too bloody and no being knocked unconscious. This will be Chapter 10, with Chapter 9 being the Japanese Gameshow.
Hi LHunt, I'll consider adding Lara's uncle to a BDSM scene in the new sex dungeon that Sarah's building in the basement of Croft Manor.
Regarding the Gameshow, I'm looking for game suggestions.
It can't be anything overtly sexual (no gangbangs etc.), but more focussed on opportunities for embarassment. Ideas so far:
Game 1 - Electric bumper cars with built in Sybians, where the faster the women drive, the faster their Sybian seat vibrates, and if they hit anything or get rammed, it vibrates at maximum. I foresee many cross-eyed crashes.
Game 2 - Human lawn bowls. The girls (wearing bikinis and covered in lubricant jelly) launch themselves down a shallow ramp towards a bullseye and try to land as close as possible. Like lawn bowls, knocking another girl out of the circle is allowed. Many opportunities for nip slips and accidental exhibitionism.
I'm looking for some other ideas for the other 3 elimination games. I want Lara to win but get more and more embarrassed. Just no wrestling, since Chapter 10 will have a big fight scene (and honestly, an Instagram model wouldn't stand a chance against Lara anyway).
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Hi Donkingkong, I'm picking up what you're putting down. It should fit in well with the story, since Sarah is trying to strip Lara of her arrogance. Some themes I'm thinking of for the scene:
- hard punches to the SAR plexus, really painful and knocking the wind out of Lara, but her attacker refusing to give her the mercy of knocking her out. More of a psychological and emotional to blow make Lara quit and tap out.
- hard slaps to the face, breasts and ass, again intended more for pain than injury.
- dragged across the ground by the hair.
- finally pisses herself at the prospect of more pain and ends up crying and begging. Loses all pride and agrees to anything just to make it stop.
Let me know if you have any specific ideas for stuff you'd like to see. In terms of injury, I'll probably just leave it at a blood nose, red marks etc, as I don't want her too injured to participate in later scenes.
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Hi Donkingkong, glad you enjoyed it. I think the Siberian chapter will actually be faster paced - i.e. sex with guards and then prisoners straight off the bat. It's a prison camp, so not much need for buildup or explanation there.
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Hi Mr Dead, don't worry - I don't take anything personally. Voluntary Enslavement was always going to rehash some previous stuff, because it's a rewrite of my first ever story, but done properly. After I get it done, I'll be ready to move onto new things.
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Hi Mr Dead, sorry to hear you're bored with the current story, but I understand that it's not going to be for everyone. This story definitely has a slower pace and more of a gradual buildup than my previous ones. Regarding your own story, I wish you all the best and look forward to reading it when it's done.
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Chapter 8 has posted. I was going to have the Japanese events be one chapter, but I decided to expand upon the dinner scene and make Lara's encounter with Takamoto a gangbang instead, so I'll be doing the gameshow next chapter instead.
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Hi LHunt, sorry not really into the trans thing, so no plans for it in this story. The fashion show angle is kind of interesting, but I'll have to see where it fits. The next charity dinner will be a fancy dress ball, with Lara appearing as Lady Godiva. The final Charity dinner will be a full-on gangbang with Lara being publicly outed as a slut and all of the guests using her. I might have an in-between dinner, if I can think of a theme that bridges the gap between forced nudity and full-on sex, but the main idea of the charity Dinners is to show a steady escalation in events until Lara's public and private lives collide.
Hi Donkingkong, first the update. Chapter 8 should be ready towards the end of the week, if I get time to finish proofreading. Regarding the beatdown, I think I can make it fit into the Siberian gulag chapter. I'll make Lara fight a hugely muscled prisoner or guard (think Zangief from Street Fighter). Rules are simple - if she wins, she gets to go home. If she loses, she has to serve the prison's occupants.
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Hi Donkingkong, glad you liked the chapter. Yes, I will be doing BDSM stuff like the Squale666 stuff. Lara's roadtrip is to get her out of Croft Manor for a few weeks, so Sarah can make some "renovations" to the basement level. Let me know if there are any particular things you'd like to see. My knowledge of BDSM is pretty limited, so I'm happy to take suggestions/requests.
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Hi Extreme, I haven't decided yet (still a long way to go), but I was leaning towards him and Shaun leaving, with Tori taking over his duties and hiring some new staff to help run the manor (a pair of lesbian maids to dominate Lara and pair of well-hung horny gardeners etc).
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Hi Extreme, glad you liked the latest chapter. Regarding the ending, you're right that things have gone too far to go completely back to normal. I see Lara having a self realisation about how self-obsessed and narcissistic she's become, and try to make amends.
She'll admit she had feelings for Sarah back in school, but was too worried about what other people would think and turned on her; she'll admit what a teasing bitch she was to her staff etc.
After the year is out, Lara will get her Title back, but won't have anything to do with English upper society after seeing their true colours. Sarah and Lara get engaged and stay living together at Croft Manor. The maid stuff ends, as Lara really hates menial labour, although Lara agrees to continue limited sexual slavery (probably 1 week per month), including by the staff. When asked why not more often, she'll answer that it wouldn't be special if it happened every day. Lara is still a tease, but the staff don't mind because they know they'll get to punish her for it later each month.
Winston retires. Tori takes over his role as Butler/head housekeeper, running Croft Manor. Zip and Alister get more credit for Lara's discoveries. I see the story ending with Lara off to raid another tomb, with a butt plug secretly stuck up her ass. So, the same but also not, if that makes sense?
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Hi LHunt. Thanks for the positive feedback. Glad you're enjoying it.
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Chapter 7 has posted. Next chapter, Lara will be heading to Tokyo for a sexy gameshow appearance and some naked sushi modelling.
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Hi Donkingkong, you have excellent taste. This was one of my favourites as well, along with the Cunt Raider series by Meik Dirks, although I haven't looked at it in years. Thanks for the trip down memory - lots of inspiration for the "Red Room" sex dungeon that Sarah will be constructing in the basement level of Croft Manor, while Lara is busy on her road trip.
To everyone - I've decided to post the chapters as I finish them. Chapter 7 is about 80% done and will then need to be proof read, so I'll hopefully get time to finish and post it in the next week or two.
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Hi GhostOfCovid, I'm planning to release them as a batch towards the end of the year (one per week like the first lot), but I'm open to releasing them as I finish them (if that's what you guys would prefer. The downside of that is I won't be able to post with any sort of regularity (e.g. one chapter per month etc) as my writing time is a bit all over the place, and entirely depends on where I can fit it in around work and family commitments.
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Hi LHunt, I'll probably go with an art auction at one of the final Charity Dinners, towards the end of Lara's year of slavery - once her full debauchery is revealed to her social peers. I was thinking about leaving the artworks at Croft Manor, but I think it would be more embarrassing for Lara knowing that they were out in the world, where anyone could see them. The staff will be generously compensated to sell the paintings they've been gifted, and a Cindy of sale might be that they can't be resold on the open market for 30 years. None of the winners would want to sell anyway, as they are both a status symbol and in investment which will only increase in value when the artist finally dies.
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Hi LHunt, the issue with a lot of your ideas is they're too big and involve too many people (no way to keep it secret). There's no way anyone would trust all 90 members of a Bikie gang not to brag about it. That's not to say that I won't use some elements of your ideas, but not the whole thing.
That's why I'm breaking the story into distinct sections. The stuff where Lara is being used openly is entirely in private and involves other members of high society (who have their own reputations at stake and can therefore be trusted to only gossip with other members of their social circle, but not the media or the peasants). The stuff involving her being lent out will only involve a feeling trusted individuals, or with Lara's identity being concealed. The openly public stuff (like the gaming convention) will mostly involve humiliation and forced exhibitionism.
So far, this is the plan for the upcoming chapters:
(7) More extreme anal play with the staff (horse dildo, triple anal) and Lara serving at her second Charity Dinner. The artist that has been painting Lara's sex portraits is going to be doing a life drawing exhibition after dinner. Unfortunately, the nude model cancelled at the last minute. It looks like the show won't go ahead until Lara is convinced to fill in and pose naked in front of everyone.
(8) Lara travels to Tokyo. She'll appear on a wild Japanese gameshow to promote her new game. No firm events yet, except that all contestants will wear bikinis and there's going to be a lot of Sybian/vibrator play. Afterwards, Lara is a nyotaimori model (eating sushi off a naked woman), with Takamoto and Nishimura both in attendance (and later humiliating sexual encounters with each, where she has to seduce them to further Sarah's business interests, but neither will know about the contract and will just think Lara's a slut).
(9) Lara spends a week in Siberia with Konstantin (who survived) in his gulag prison. Lots of scope to be used by the guards and then given to the prisoners when her cooperation isn't enthusiastic enough. I think I can leave her face uncovered for this one, as the guards will all be loyal to Konstantin, while the prisoners will never escape to tell anyone.
(10) Lara travels back to the hidden city of Paititi and has to help Dominguez open a hidden tomb. The key to unlocking the doors will be Lara taking progressively larger stone phalluses attached to different animal statues. It will probably end with a gangbang involving Dominguez and his men.
(11) Maybe something with Sam. I'm thinking I want it to involve Sam being a documentary film maker. Maybe Sam wants to film a groundbreaking sex documentary, and wants to use Lara as the model (with her face blurred). It could involve a clear glass dildo with a HD camera mounted in the tip, giving the first ever internal view of sex (vaginal, oral, anal etc).
That's the plan, anyway. I just need to find the time to execute it.
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Hi LHunt, no animal stuff for this story. I would like to include Sam, but I'm having trouble thinking of what kinky stuff she might be into. It can't just be a lesbian thing, because it'll be too similar to what Lara is already doing with Sarah and Tori.
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Hi LHunt, probably not that obvious. I'd like to make it something that could be innocent unless you know the hidden meaning (like Queen of Spades tattoo).