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    The review i've got

    LUNARSILVER’S review was actually an idea for the next two chapters. He suggested on the first night of their vacation, Kim and Ann take seductive pictures and selfies. Then Ann brings along a video camera and the two make a sex tape. Then in part two, while in their sleepwear they have sex while watching it before going to sleep. It’s a pretty good idea but I also have some thoughts of my own. Do you guys think I should take his suggestion or use my own ideas?
  2. I’m writing a Lilo Nani collection of stories. It’ll feature no sex, just both sisters in various situations nude. I want to start out with a snuggling on the couch scene. Any ideas on how to make it work?
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    Writing A simple nude scene

    I’ll go with the parents were nudist idea.
  4. I need an idea for a scene my new KP FF story. In this one, the basic thing is that Kim, Yori, Bonnie, Connie, Lonnie, and Monique play in the snow wearing nothing but hat, gloves, and scarfs. Afterwards, they play with each other. Any ideas on how to make it work?
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    Writing an outdoor winter scene

    Thank you Jay Dee but i already got my outline.
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    Writing an outdoor winter scene

    No. Just this one scene. That’s it.
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    Writing an outdoor winter scene

    It’s ok. It’s such something that I see on many FF sites. Playing in the snow and playing with each other afterwards. I guess that they head inside afterwards. So, they can probably head back to the tent. Would you mind writing me an outline?
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    Writing an outdoor winter scene

    Not that good. Sorry.
  9. I have so many projects that I need to prioritize. So, I’m putting this story up for adoption. Anybody willing to take it is welcome. PenName: lilo1013 Story Title: Kim and her mommy’s beach vacation Genre: FF Yuri Inc Pairing: Kim/Ann Summary: Kim spend two weeks at a private beach bungalow resort with her mother, Dr. Ann Possible. Once there, they fall into a bond that only a mother and daughter could share. Chapters: 4 Link: http://cartoon.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600095381 Basic Details: A simple Inc Mother Daughter story. Kim and Ann fall into a new bond. During the two week vacation, they feel the bond get stronger. Contact: brycewade1013@gmail.com
  10. In one of my chapters, Kim’s mother gives Kim a pair of vibrating panties to wear for a whole day. With Ann holding the remote, she playfully teases her daughter almost everywhere they go. Do you guys have ideas on how to make this work?
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    Kim and Ann challenge

    I would like someone to create a one shot Kim/Ann FF story based on the picture in the link below. https://rule34.xxx/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1027439
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    Writing a scene with vibrating Panties

    I’m portraying Kim as a simple innocent teen who falls into a kind of bond with her mother and is willing to give it a chance. They are definitely comfortable with the bond and are willing to try new things. It’s not really smut, it’s simply light and sweet. The restaurant is really not that populated, so embarrassment or exposure shouldn’t really be a problem. any more suggestions?
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    Writing a scene with vibrating Panties

    That’s good. I’ll do that. Don’t worry, I’ll make sure Ann doesn’t use make Kim cum all day. There will be breaks. Just, do you think that a restaurant would be a good place to use them?
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    Writing a scene with vibrating Panties

    I mean like, how do i write it? And like where would be good places for Ann to make Kim cum?
  15. In the third chapter of my Kim Possible lesbian story, Kim and her mother spend the first night of their vacation making a sex tape, and then in the next chapter they have sex while watching it before going to sleep. I’m curious on how to write this. If any of you have ideas on how to make this work, post them here. This would really help out a lot. Thanks.
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    Writing a 'making a sex tape' scenario

    Ok. So I simply focus on their reactions to the video. I’ll start where their eyes linger and then pic it up from their.
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    Writing a 'making a sex tape' scenario

    Yeah it’s the watching of it. That’s it. Any ideas?
  18. Hello, I’m looking for a co author for a Kim Possible lesbian story. I’m really a big fan of Kim Possible. So, I began to plan out a story featuring Kim and her mother on a two week beach vacation. Once there, they fall into a special bond. I really do like the whole FF Inc thing, but i like to keep the story light. I do have the story roughly mapped out and i have posted a few chapters. But, I’m afraid the longer I go, the story might be too much too handle, especially for me alone. So, I’m looking for someone to work with, someone who isn’t afraid to make suggestion and who can write chapters for me when I have to go to meetings. For my writing style have a look at my profile. (Kim and her mommy's Beach Vacation) If this interests any of you, please send me a message through the forum or in the chatbox. Thank you.
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    Study Date (my version)

    I want to do an extended version of the story Study Date. But the TOS Team can’t find the original author. I just want to collaborate with him and use his story as footnotes for my version. I’ve decided to just make it my own without the original author’s help. Which mean’s I will not use his dialogue or sentences or plot points. I will try to write it on my own. I might request a co-author or collaborations for help since this is my first time writing fan fiction. What do you think I should do?
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    Study Date (my version)

    thank you for your support. If you can’t find a way to contact the original author, it’s ok because I have plenty of new ideas for stories up my sleeve.
  21. I’m looking for a partner for a Kim/Bonnie anthology. It’s a collection of stories where Kim finally buries the hatchet with her former rival, Bonnie Rockwaller and start a unique friendship. If you’ve read the Don’t Tell Daddy stories, you’ll pretty much know what I’m talking about. But in case you don’t, they take place in lots of locations, where Kim and her mom engage in all kinds of sexual activity. I want the overall feeling of the stories to be light. I do like the Study Date stories, but I don’t really want any BDSM or Humiliation. I would like at least one bondage story, but I also would like to keep it light and playful. I also would like to feature toys. And at least one threesome scene featuring another female character. This is my first story ever, so I would really like some insight from most of you experienced writers. So feel free to send me some of your own work so I can make a decision. I’m looking for people who can proofread my stories and/or make some suggestions on how to make them better. Please contact me at this email address: barneyfan1013@gmail.com I really look forward to your responses. Thank you all, lilo1013.