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Another Influence review...
Magnusxxz said:
QuoteGlad to see you continuing this fic. Love all aspects. Is Joyce going to get in on the action as well? Are they pregnant yet in the timeline?
What are other characters doing? Any chance Xander will pop over and get an eyefull? Write more soon.
That’s sadly last thing I’ve written in the continuity; I have started another Buffy story that I might port over here in a bit (after I get another chapter or two of backlog).
I’ve also ‘wrapped up’, posted the last chapter of, my old original story The Port of Maresh meaning I’ll have to pick something new to post…
While I have an idea but if anyone reads this and responds with a genre/fetish preference before next week that might influence me.
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My new story, Influence of the Demon, (being an Aspect of the Demon spinoff) has gotten it’s first review.
SailorNemesis said:
QuoteSexy stuff
Thanks! The second/last chapter is going up now but still no Willow for you.
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I do have two short scene in the same setting as Aspect but they’re both Dawn focused. I’ve written very little about Willow it seems.
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After ignoring this site for more than a year I’ve come back to post the last two chapters to Aspect of the Demon so I might as well look at the reviews I’d gotten in that time.
Oric13 said:
QuoteNot usually into the whole futa/dickgirl thing, but this is pretty damn hot.
Thanks.
Magnusxxz said:
QuoteInteresting. A great deal of gay incest going on here. Curious to see what happens next. Still expect someone to get knocked up.
Oh they do.
SailorNemesis said:
QuoteVery sexy story, though Faith does not need a cock she just needs to get taken by one. Hope to read more soon. I think Willow needs some breaking in.
Wait for it.
And then after chapter five went up this weekend.
Magnusxxz said:
QuoteGlad to see an update! Was getting worried. And Buffy knocked up all three, well good for her, can't wait to read more. Using Harmony was a fluffer is something the character has a lot of practice in fics with. lol
Any thoughts on what will happen with the other characters? Willow? Xander? Anya?
and SailorNemesis said:
QuoteChap5, good to see a new chapter. Hope for more soon. Enjoyed the idea of vampires not having to breath hence great for throat-fucking. Harmony would make a good pet. I hope Buffy takes ownership of Willow soon.
Willow does show up in the sixth (final planned) chapter but this concept is one I’m likely to return to (especially with some encouragement).
Time to turn my focus to other stories I haven’t posted here yet.
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Actually I had forgot to post chapter four of Aspect of the Demon (even though I said I had) so back I come. And there was a review.
Magnusxxz said:
QuoteVery happy to see updates! Thought this might have been abandoned. Now, Buffy fucked them both, Fiath grew a dick, then while she went at Dawn's ass, Buffy had Faith's. All very good. But I hope you aren't forgetting the part about knocking up Dawn.
Or all the women in Sunnydale. That was extra hot.
The wheels are in motion, plans have been made, and side stories have been written.
I also got a new review for Xander & Dawn: To Feel Alive.
Saxman66 said:
QuoteExcellent. Read the previous chapters when I 1st joined the site a couple of months ago and good to see an update. Very entertaining story and nicely ironic to see Dawn, the innocent younger daughter being so adult in both meanings of the word.
I wonder if Blue will be staying around and if so how much interaction he will have with the group. Going to be awkward explaining him to any visitors.
I’m glad you liked it but that is it, the story is done.
That being said there is nothing stopping me from exploring similar ideas in a different context later.
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More reviews, this time for Aspect of the Demon.
Magnusxxz said:
QuoteIn need of an update to see how Buffy & Faith go. And very curious how many other women Buffy plans on planting her demonic baby sause in.
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QuoteWe need a second chapter with Faith, maybe even Willow as well. Update!!!
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QuoteStill waiting to see Faith's turn. And whoever Buffy decides to try and knock up afterwards. Come baaaack.
I just did (posting three chapters when I did actually).
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It’s been a while since I’ve done this (like ten months) but there’s been some reviews in that time so here we go.
In regards to Xander & Dawn: To Feel Alive
colinzeal said:
QuoteGod I love this story. You come up with some great pairings. I particularly liked Kennedy/Xander and the demon with Faith/Dawn (though I was gutted you cut away from the good stuff with Dawn!). This story is so hot and you make the characters totally believable. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Which is always nice to hear.
Magnusxxz said:
QuoteNeed an update. Still don't know why Faith wasn't invited at least once. The double Xander on Dawn was fun, could have done a 5 Xander gangbang on her too though.
): )
I think the Finale might give them some joy; not the 5 Xander thing but Faith does get into the action.
saxman66 said:
QuoteVery entertaining, both the sex sessions and the way Xander struggles to handle a sex-craxed Dawn getting them both into more and more extreme encounters, even when she doesn't intend to. This last chapter is very tender and makes a good counterpoint to the previous ones.
Another thing that is nice to hear.
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I also got another review for Xander & Dawn: To Feel Alive
Magnusxxz said:
QuoteJust noticed there is in fact no Xander/Faith sex in this story. How is that possible? Lets have the happen soon? Or at least give Faith a strap on to use on Dawn. Ohh, a Xander/Dawn/Faith sandwich.
): )
That is more likely to be a separate story at this point.
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I also got a review for Xander & Dawn: To Feel Alive
Magnusxxz said:
Quote...Not sure how I feel about the rape scene of Faith.
Uncertainty is a perfectly appropriate feeling.
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I’ve gotten two reviews of my new Buffy fan-fic Aspect of the Demon:
ANON said:
QuoteNot much to say since it's still early but it has a promising start to say the least. If you go through with the pregnancy part that would be amazing and/or further transformation but I suppose that might be a bit too weird for some. In any case looking forward to seeing what you come up with.
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QuoteVery nice start. Can't wait to read more, see Faith's turn. Update soon.
As I said in the blurb the plot was supplied by someone else and it is therefore up to them as to whether or not the story continues and what direct it takes. Right now they seem more interested in having me write something else (though on a similar theme).
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Added another final chapter to Teacher’s Pet and it already got a review.
ANON said:
QuoteBring misty to teacher's home and let the great dane have a go at her. She could become its new bitch and buster and teacher their masters, lol.
Yeah that’s not going to happen (probably). I never meant to write this chapter, I went a year and a half with writing it, because I felt that the story was basically complete. That feeling was strong enough that even after I had my moment of inspiration I went months without seeing it through.
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Currently there are a trio of stories on here that are both adult-fanfiction exclusive and influenced more by reader feedback than any thing else.
Shards of Reality: Sunnydale was meant to be reader directed, where I would take the most popular requests and turn them into the plot of the next chapter. That didn’t really work. I’m going to give what’s there a polish and then try to relaunch things with a more structured system for input.
A Special Boy: Summer Shorts and Dr. Nichols’ Family Therapy are both currently just one-shots with a format for future expansion in place. The former is meant to be a bucket to catch (almost) all of the hung shota stories I’m willing to write that people suggest. The latter is meant to be about a therapist who believes that sex is the best way to fix a families problems once someone suggests some family combos that need help.
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Got a review of my new “series” A Special Boy: Summer Shorts
Hungry-Orange-Squirrel said:
QuoteGreat story, would love to see more. Here's a scenario suggestion I think would be hot. Billy embarasses an older male teen in school by accidentally tripping him so he falls into a trash can. When the older teen's Mom asked him what happened he says that he got beat up by an older bully in school. The mom insists on going over to Billy's house to give him a talking to with the older male in tow. At Billy's house the mom is amazed at his cock and has crazy sex with him, including anal and throat-fucking with her head hanging off the edge of the bed.
So I’m glad you liked what I wrote but I’m not going to go with your suggestion. First, I don’t think it fits Billy’s character. Second, I’m not really into NTR. And third, it sounds a lot like a story that Slutwriter already wrote; just read his.
I also got a review for an older series Xander & Dawn: To Feel Alive
Magnusxxz said:
QuoteNot as fun as earlier chapters. Where are you going with this? Hope to read more soon, see what happens next. Keep up the good work.
I am aware that this (number 8) is a shorter, talker chapter but don’t worry the next one is coming soon and it’s going to be longer. And also kind of talky.
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Can I say that I have no idea what you mean by 'level 3' or '5'?
Oh well moving on; I got another review this time of Teacher's Pet.
JustS said:
I would have preferred a little more build-up and detail (and chapter two just seems to be empty for me (!)) but this is definitely good. Bravo.Which was helpful as it let me know the one chapter had glitched out.
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I feel like I've asked this before...
Anyway I have in the past had some success with stories written in such a way that the readers would have a chance to suggest/vote on the course of action between episodes. I would like to give this another try here (meaning the archive) but I'm not sure the rules allow it.
I'm sure I would have to link to either the forums or off site for the discussion/voting, and I'd probably have to devote the author's note to explaining the setup but what I would really like to do, and what I'm sure I can't, is put the basic premise of the story before it starts. That's what I did with my other ones and part of what I think made them work.
The core of my question is how much of this can I get away with and is there any special tags (or what not) I would have to include?
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"A Special Boy" is one of the best I've read. Any chance of another chapter or any similar stories?
More of it; no. The plot had gotten away from me, the path I had planned and had even started to seed was no longer viable brought the story to close rather than trying to introduce a new plot eight chapters in.
Something similar; maybe? Because of its content post A Special Boy or similar stories to the other sites I post stories to so I have less incentive to those stories. BUT it is the type of thing that's in my wheelhouse so I might write some sort of anthology, so I don't have to worry about a larger plot, or if sufficiently motivated I might take a run at one of the sequels I'd considered.
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Another Xander & Dawn review:
Albino87 said:
Great storyOne of the few stories that have Dawn/Xander paring.Wondering how long until Xander take command in the relationship and teach Dawn a lesson.Keep the chapter comingThat relationship reversal is coming and is expected in as little as two more chapters.
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A review of 3 Girls came in.
Anon said:
Please write more of this story!No going to happen, I didn't like it or where it was going.
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I've got a review of my "new" story Teacher's Pet.
Anon said:
Oh, please update this!And I will but the two other chapters I have for this now are two more than I ever planned to write for it.
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LouiseFairfax73 said about Xander & Dawn: To Feel Alive:I seems to me that Buffy is just jealous that Dawn got to Xander before she did. I also think that Buffy is just acting out of spite that someone who isn't her is being happy with someone else.Also, I can't wait for the Faith/Vi/Dawn/Xander grouping (then maybe just Dawn/Faith).But that's just me.Keep up the good workOddly that first bit is almost canon; in the Season Eight comic, which this story is not compatible with, when Xander and Dawn ended up together Buffy made a declaration of love to him and he called her out over it.
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Anon said about Xander & Dawn: To Feel Alive:
I would think Xander would get extremely mad at Buffy for continually accusing him of Parker level behavior and being a complete hypocrite considering she's slept with mass murderers that were centuries old. I'd love to see Xander, maybe Willow, completely lay into her for the way she's treating Xander.That sort of confrontation is not likely to happen soon as Buffy is now on a different continent as the happy couple. The reason it hasn't happened already is the fact that Xander isn't entirely comfortable with what he's done; there's part of him that remembers Dawn as a little kid and that makes him feel skeevy. They did call her out on the age difference thing.
A bit controversially I do have to say that, despite how much the fandom dumps on him, Parker wasn't rapist. He rhymes with hunt don't get me wrong but pretending to be better than, nicer than you really are so people will like/sleep with you isn't a crime. What Faith did to Xander in The Zeppo is much closer to rape; what she did to Riley when she was walking around in Buffy's skin almost definitely was.
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Anon said about Xander & Dawn:More please, and keep it coming.Also I wouldn't mind a Buffy/Xander/Dawn chapter, Bander is my favorite ship after all.That particular pairing might be a ways away (if it happens at all).
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Oric13 came around to say this about Xander & Dawn: To Feel Alive:
Chapter 4: Heh. Looks like our sweet lil Dawnie is somewhat of an exhibitionist. Really liked the ending.Since he comments on every chapter I should really find some way to contact him.
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An Arrow series, perhaps based on Oliver fulfilling fantasy he had on the island, is something I could see writing but not right now given how far behind I am on my other projects. Just look how long it’s taken me to respond to your post; or your other reviews (on Influence of the Demon).
Magnusxxz on said:
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Sadly this was never meant to be a big on-going story being instead just a place to hold scenes that didn’t fit in the larger Aspect of the Demon narrative; that doesn’t mean that there can’t be more scenes in the future just that none are planned.
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I’ve started a new “series” Narrative Experiments consisting of a number of narrative experiments, short scene (under 1,000 words each) grouped by common theme with the idea that each could be revisited, expanded, or whatever if they stuck a cord with any reader. That hasn’t happened yet but who knows.